Hello everyone
Please give a quick opinion honestly?
Are you all finding my writing annoying now? Am I not able to show things and their understanding properly between Avneil?
I am an over thinker and a reader has given her honest opinion which I respect a lot.
So can you all tell me honestly whether I am annoying you all with this story now?
To be honest, I don't write intimate scene very often, so are you all finding this thing annoying?
Please give your honest answer and also tell me what should I improve so that I can improve my writing.
Please I won't mind if you all give your honest feedback, I will improve things if I am writing poorly.
Thank you