ADMIRING LOVE

By Richaa_Sharma

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[ Part 1 of Admiring Love.] [ He fell first but she fell harder.] [ If you like to read love stories based on... More

Note
Prologue
CHARACTER
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
Teaser
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
A/N
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
chapter 59
chapter 60
chapter 61
chapter 62
chapter 63
chapter 64
chapter 65
Chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
A/N
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 80
Reviews
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
A/N : Thank you
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
Thank you ❤️
chapter 95
chapter 96
chapter 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
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chapter 79

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After the marriage, Avni Neil sits together in the garden area where all the family and guests are present, there is only happiness visible on Neil's face, whereas the glow on the face of the newlywed bride is also worth seeing.

While everyone is looking at these two with happy eyes, two people are looking at them with anger and jealousy.

" Chhoti maa, mujhe bahut gussa aa raha hai....aaj jis jagah wo ladki baithi hai, wo mera haq tha...aapne waada kiya tha ki aap meri shaadi Neil karwaayengi...." Tina says this to Ragini, both of them stand aside and are looking at Avni with hateful eyes who is sitting with Neil along with her bhaiya-bhabhi and friend and Ansh is sitting on her lap whom she's holding lovingly.

" Maine waada kiya tha par kya sab main hi karti.....main yehaan tumhe kyon lekar aayi thi taaki tum inki shaadi tod Sako...Neil ko fasa sako par tumse itna bhi nahi hua...."

" Main kya karti, Neil har waqt toh us ladki se chipka rehta hai...akela kabhi dikhaa hi nahi, jo main aisa kuch bhi kar paati...." Tina says

" Tumhare paas abhi bhi mauka hai...kuch aisa karo ki inki aaj ki raat kharab jaaye..." Ragini tells her while making some gesture which Tina understands and thinks something.






" Oye, mujhe priyal ka joote chori karna samjh aata hai...par tu toh meri behan hai...joote bachaane ki jagah tune iske saath milkar mere joote churaa liye..." Neil tells Simran, who along with Priyal stole his shoes and is now demanding the same neg.

" Haan toh...main dono side se hu...ab dekh meri to koi behan hai nahi jo mujhe ye rasm karne ko mile...ek nanad hai, jo behan se kam nahi hai...toh maine apni ye khawaish isi ki shaadi me puri karli" Avni sitting next to Neil smiles hearing this

" Aur chal drama band kar, humara neg nikal..." Simran says with Priyal

" Par kyon, mujhe joote nahi chahiye....yehaan se room dur nahi hai...main bina joote ke chala jaaunga...." Neil speaks spoiling their fun.

" Dekh, ye Sab nahi karna hota hai...joote to tujhe pehanne padenge aur ab neg nikal..." Simran again says

" Arre, par mere paas bahut joote hai, mujhe nahi chahiye wo joota " At his words, Simran looks at him with her eyebrows raised.

" Accha, par biwi to ek hi hai...wo churaa lungi....fir mnaa liyo shuhaagraat...." Understanding her meaning, Neil's eyes widen, she might keep Avni with her tonight, then no no, he will not let this happen.

But Avni's face turns red after hearing her words and Raj shakes his head in disbelief at his wife's words.

" Mumma, ye shu....haagr...raat kya hoti hai...?" Ansh, sitting in Avni's lap, repeats the words spoken by his mother, on which all of them's eyes widen.
And before Ansh could ask any more questions, Raj takes her from Avni's lap in his arms.

" Aapne khaana nahi khaaya hai n...chalo papa aapko khaana khilaate hai..." Saying this, Raj walks away from those shameless people with his innocent son.

" Neil...." Next Simran says something.....Neil quickly replies

" Kitne chahiye....?" Everyone laughs at his immediate change of tone.

" Ab aaya n oont padhaad ke niche....You have to give each of us 5 lakhs.."

" kya...5 lakhs ke to joote nahi hai mere..."

" Biwi ?" Simran again threatens him and Neil glares at her....His wife is a priceless treasure, For her he should sacrifice himself.

" OK, ok done jo chahiye wo dunga....khud Itna kamaati hai, fir bhi mera hi khoon chusna hai tujhe...." Neil tells Simran to which she rolls her eyes

" Oh, wo to mera haq hai bhai..." Simran says and then Neil gives the neg to Simran and Priyal and then their fun ends with this


After that Neil and Simran cut their birthday cake where today Neil does not cut his birthday cake alone, his wife, his Avni, holds his hand today while Raj and Ansh hold Simran's hand and everyone is happy to see those two beautiful couples.

Neil feeds Avni the first piece of cake, which she eats a little, but seeing Simran's complete family, Bebe's wish arises: to see her Neil's child.

" Neil, Avni aane waale agle birthday tak tum dono bhi 2 se 3 ho jaana, bilkul Simran aur Raj puttar ki trah...." Avni's eyes widen a little with shyness, but Bebe's words have no effect on the shameless Neil and everyone else there also smiles in agreement with Bebe.

Later, some guests stop Neil and are talking, and Avni is sitting at a place, seeing her alone, Tina goes to her and Avni looks at her.

" Congratulations Avni, for your marriage...." Tina speaks with a fake smile to which Avni says nothing much but a simple thank you.

" Thank you " Avni says

" If you don't mind, I can sit with you for a while..." She nods yes at her words

Tina sits next to her and she sees how Avni's eyes on Neil who is standing at a distance in front of her and talking with a guest.

" Tumhe pta hai Avni, main Neil se Bachpan se pyar karti thi..." Hearing this, Avni clenches her fists to control herself.

" Par tum, hum dono ke beech aa gyi..." At her words avni turns her face towards her, really?

" People come in between when there is love from both the sides...but my Neil has always loved me...then how did I come in between..." She says this proudly, to which Tina looks at her shocked.....She thought that her words would make her angry but nothing like that happened here.

" Ise beech me hi aana kehte hai Avni....tum nahi hoti to aaj Neil mera hota...humari shaadi hoti " Avni smiles at his words

" Agar main nahi hoti toh...par main hu, aur aaj Neil mere hue...humari shaadi hui hai
And who can erase what is written in destiny? Our relationship has been created by God... God has created Neil for me and me for Neil, So how come we don't meet each other?" She speaks again in the same tone and Tina is shocked to see this side of her...she thought that she was a quiet girl, listening to her words would only spoil her mood, she would not answer her back but here her tongue was moving like scissors.

" Tumhe nahi lagta tum bahut jyada bolti ho....?"

" Main to sirf jyada bolti hu...tum to apni aukaat se jyada sapne bhi dekhti ho....Neil is only mine and will always be mine."

" It is not good to be so proud, who knows what will happen when...anything can happen in the future...." Avni looks at her angrily at her bitter words and before she can answer, Neil reaches there

When Neil, standing at a distance, sees Tina with Avni, he immediately comes near her.

" Baby...Are you okay?" Neil asks Avni and Tina gets up from Avni's side and what she does next shocks both Neil and Avni.

She hugs Neil, congratulating him on his marriage, but Neil immediately pulls her away and before he could say anything to Tina, Tina leaves from there giving a devilish smile to Avni.

Neil sits next to Avni and cups her face

" What happened baby, what was she talking to you here..." Avni glare at him at his question.

" Nothing...." Saying this, she walks away from there while handling her heavy lehenga, on which Neil keeps looking at her wondering what he has done now.



Later

Avni's mood immediately improves among her family and she even forgets Tina's words.

" simmi, Avni puttar thak gyi hogi, use kamre me lekar jao.." Shweta says to whom Neil says excitedly

" Mom, main bhi to wahin jaa raha hu main lekar jaata hu..." Neil says to which Avni's face turns red and Simran and Shweta look at him

" Nahi, tu abhi nahi jaayega...." Shweta says

" kya ? Par kyon mom....mujhe neend aa rahi hai....bahut thak gya hu, subah se jgaa hu..." At his words, Shweta and Simran give him a look that we know very well how sleepy you are.

" Thodi der baad jaakar soo jaana beta ji...abhi sirf Avni jaayegi...." Neil makes a faces at his mother's words and at that very moment, Vishal comes and takes him to Raj, who goes reluctantly and seeing him going like this, Avni suppresses her smile.

Later Simran and Priyal bring her to Neil's room. Today, the entire room is decorated with scented candles and flowers for their first night together but yes, the room is not decorated with roses but with white lily flowers of Neil's wife's choice.

Suddenly coming into the room, in that romantic atmosphere of the room, Avni's heartbeat starts increasing, she swallows the saliva that is forming in her throat.

" What happened avu?  Nervous?" Seeing her gulping, Priyal says teasingly.

" Why would she be nervous...Neil must have done a lot already, she must be used to it." Simran speaks further teasing her, Which is only adding more red color to her face.
living between these two only means talking shamelessly.

" By the way, avu tell us the story of your first night tomorrow morning...ok ?" Priyal says to which she glare at her.

And then while joking, Simran makes Avni sit on the bed and covers her face with a veil.

" Waise to ye chahra Neil ne kaafi baar dekha hai...par aaj baat alag hai...bina muh dikhaayi liye apna chahra mat dikhaana " She says this while covering her face with a veil, to which Avni smiles shyly.

Later both of them go out of the room and here Avni feels really nervous, she does not understand how to react, sh is feeling a different kind of feeling in this flower decorated room and bed....Suddenly thousands of butterflies are dancing in her stomach, both of them have waited a long time for this day but she don't understand why she is getting nervous today.

Suddenly she flinches when she hears the door open, her heartbeat increases as she feels Neil move closer to the bed and her.

There is a smile on Neil's face when he sees her in the veil like this...But why is she wearing a veil? It is not that he has never seen her face.

Neil comes closer to the bed and sits opposite her and Avni holds her lehenga in her fists which is resting on her knees.
Neil sees her doing this and smiles...he understands that maybe she is getting nervous.

" Are you getting nervous with me?" She doesn't say anything at his words and Neil smiles and places his hand on the hand on her knees, On which he feels her trembling.

" Baby, what happened...I am your Neil.  Why are you so nervous...?" At his this words he still not get any answer on which he smiles and thinking something he speaks further

" Mrs. Khanna, you don't need to be so nervous...if you want, we will wait a little more." Neil says, but she gets shocked after hearing these words…ok, she is nervous but what is this, we will wait. She is ready, just a little nervous.

".Mr. Khanna, If you show more decency, I will divorce you tonight itself..." She suddenly lifts her veil and speaks but is shocked when Neil is not there in front of her.

It means she is dreaming...Thank God it was a dream

" No, Avni… I know, you're feeling scared…you are also nervous…But if you behave like this in front of Neil, he will become the epitome of decency even today…Breathe Avni breathe.  Don't be nervous in front of him..."

She speaks these words to herself and this time actually hears the sound of the door opening, at which point she puts her veil back on and takes a deep breath.



This time Neil actually comes inside, he is also a little nervous because whatever it may be, this thing is new for him too.

The entire room was decorated like this romantically and his bride was waiting for him on a bed decorated with flowers. He had not expected that she would wait for him in a veil.
Now he is feeling really nervous about how he will lift her veil.

He takes a deep breath before stepping towards her…he smiles and sits in front of her.

" Mujh se parda?" She smiles shyly at his words and after saying this, Neil lifts her veil and sees her beautiful face.

Her hairline is filled with sindoor, kajal in the eyes, bindi and mangtika in the middle of the forehead, earrings in the ears, nath ( nose ring ), Magalsutra around the neck...She has done all this sringar ( makeup ) for him today.

Those red bangles in her hands which he always used to imagine tinkling in her hands.

He had always imagined their first time like this, she would be sitting in front of him as a bride and he would worship her.

Their eyes meet and her heart swells seeing him staring at her like this silently...Neil gets up a little and kisses her forehead and him just doing this calms all her nervousness, she looks at him calmly.

" You always wanted to know how I had imagined our first time....Exactly like this, I always imagined you like this during our first time...like this in bridal attire." She blushes at his words.

" You imagined all this too "

" Aur nahi to kya..... Now if I dream of you from morning to evening, while sleeping and waking, then this dream will also be included in it..." He says that in order to keep the atmosphere normal between them, he does not want to go high all of a sudden.

" look at yourself right now, you are looking like a goddess, so fresh, so ravishing, uff, I can't take my eyes off it...I feel like just keeping looking at you." On his words she smiles

" But today just looking at me won't work Mr." She says in her mind... Now how should she tell him openly to move ahead.
 

" Accha ab apna haath aage karna...." He says because ever since she applied mehendi, he wanted to see his name in her mehendi but she refused him strictly and said that he would do it only on the wedding night and today was that day.

So today On his request, she puts her hand forward and Neil sees the mehendi on her hands which has turned deep red.

" Everyone says that the darker the color of the mehendi, the deeper is the husband's love..." Avni says to which Neil smiles.

" The depth of my love cannot compare with the color of mehendi my love " Saying this, he brings her palms close to his lips and kisses them, smelling them, on which she smiles

" Aaj toh main apna naam dekh sakta hu n...?" She nods lightly at his words and then Neil takes her hand and starts searching for his name in her mehendi but he cannot find his name anywhere.

" Yaar mera naam likhaa bhi hai ki nahi...." When he doesn't see his name in her hand even after searching for five minutes, Neil says this

" Thodi aur kosish kijiye..." Avni says and just in time Neil gets the name.

" Mil gya " Avni smiles at his words.

" yehaan hai hum....Avneil " Neil points a place on her palm with his finger on which Avni smiles

Neil smile seeing his name written with her name...As avneil.

" Neil ka naam avni ke bina adhura hai...Avni hai tabhi Neil hai.." Avni smiles at his words and Neil kisses her hands again and looks at her again.





Both keep looking at each other and Avni wonders why he is not doing anything now….He used to talk alot that he would do everything on the wedding night, So why is he not doing anything today?
Neil also wants to move ahead but he thinks that she might be tired today, so he lets her rest.

" Avni, soo jaaye..." Avni gets shocked…he wants to sleep...seriously ?

" Aapko neend aa rahi hai ?" he smiles at her words

" No, but you must be tired, you should rest..." He says this showing concern for her because today will be really tiring for her, there is plenty of time for other things.

And after hearing her words, how could she tell him that she was not tired? He spoiled her mood by saying this, come on yaar, she is a bride, she can't say that she wants to do all that.....she looks at him silently.

" ok then good night, hatiye mere saamne se..." She speaks with a little anger which Neil senses in her voice.

" What happened...?" He asks

" Nothing, I'm tired...Thank you for worrying about me...I am blessed to have a husband like you.
Now move away from me so I can sleep..." she says all this taunting him

" Par change toh karlo pehle...." He says on which she gets more irritated...tonight he should have done this for her...but anyway, now she has no expectations from him.

" I am tired na, I don't want to change...saying this she gets down from the bed and as he is not moving from her side, so she comes to the other side and lies down after covering herself with a blanket and Neil is a little shocked at her reaction.

Okay, he asked them to sleep but not like this...at least both of them would cuddle.
And he hasn't even shown her his gift yet. Has he made any mistake? Due to which she has become angry.

" Baby, what happened…?" On his question she closes her eyes tightly to stop herself from yelling at him, he has really spoiled her mood...she didn't want such a caring husband.

And Neil doesn't understand what crime he has committed by showing concern for her that now she is not even talking.















To be continued...........

Some glimpses of their first night are still left.

For the rest of this chapter, you all can abuse as much as you want....I happily accept 🙈

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