ADMIRING LOVE

By Richaa_Sharma

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[ Part 1 of Admiring Love.] [ He fell first but she fell harder.] [ If you like to read love stories based on... More

Note
Prologue
CHARACTER
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
Teaser
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
A/N
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
chapter 59
chapter 60
chapter 61
chapter 62
chapter 63
chapter 64
chapter 65
Chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
A/N
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 79
chapter 80
Reviews
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
A/N : Thank you
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
Thank you ❤️
chapter 95
chapter 96
chapter 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
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chapter 78

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It's night time...tomorrow morning is their haldi and the day after tomorrow is the wedding so Priyal and Simran think of organizing a small hen's party for Avni, Now Avni has only two girls in her life with whom she shares everything, First is her bhabhi who is no less than a best friend and second is her best friend Priyal who's no less than a sister to her...so except these two she does not need a crowd to celebrate this happiness.

On the other hand, as Neil had clearly refused to celebrate his bachelorhood, Because according to him this thing is not worth celebrating, he will celebrate his marriage.
So this party of boys did not happen, but here the girls make their own plan....but now to implement that plan they need Raj's permission, Because it is night time and on top of that it is an unknown city… once the whole family gives them permission to go out, but Raj, no, not at all.

" Tumhara wala manage kar lega n kuch ghante tumhare bina ?" Simran asks Priyal, right now all three are sitting in Avni's room.

" ji bhabhi, ab sab Neil jiju jitne chipku nahi hote " She says teasing Avni to which Avni glare at her.

" Ye baat bhi hai... Dekho humare patiyon ko humari chinta hi nahi hai...par iske naa hue pati ko sirf yehi chahiye " Simran teases Avni further because ever since the three of them are together, Neil is constantly trying to talk to Avni through calls or some other means, but Simran is not allowing this to happen because this is their girl time.

And there hearing priyal and Simran words avni face starts turning red but suddenly Simran's phone starts ringing.

And because the phone is lying on the bed, everyone sees that she is getting a call from Raj and on this Avni thinks of teasing her bhabhi for the first time.

*clearing her throat she starts..."bhabhi, aap to keh rahi thi bhai ko aapki chinta nahi hai....fir ek hi jagah hone par unke calls ?" Seeing her trying to tease her, Simran smiles at her

" Haan to shaadi ka ghar hai...kuch kaam hi hoga...kaam ke siwa tumhare bhaiya baat nahi karte kuch...
aur main abhi aayi" Saying this Simran takes her phone and goes to the balcony of the room.

" Jaana, Please come to the room, Ansh tumhe dhund raha hai...." Simran smiles understanding his words well.

" Ansh yaa Ansh ke papa ?" On her words, Raj smiles

" Ab, Ye samjhne ke liye tum kaafi samjhdaar ho.....Please, jaana, Ansh aaj bahut muskil se jaldi soya hai aur wo mom ke paas hai, Please come to the room..." She smiles a little shyly at his words but she can't go to him today, she has to make this night memorable for Avni.

And with this thought, Simran thinks that she should take permission from Raj to go out but then her mind immediately works, no, He will refuse her for this, right now if he listens to anyone then it is only Avni

" Okay, I am coming..." Raj smiles at her words and then Simran disconnects the phone and comes into the room.

 

" Avu Chalo, tumhara kaam shuru...." Simran says

" Kaisa kaam bhabhi ?"

" Humne decide kiya tha n hum teeno baahar jaa rahe hai, to uske liye tumhe Raj se permission leni padegi..." Avni's eyes widen at this, How will she ask permission from Raj?

" ab mumbai me hote to puchhna hi nahi padta par yehaan unhe bina btaaye nahi jaa sakte...." Simran completes her sentence on which Avni sees her

" Bhabhi, No...ye chiz toh aap dono karne waale the... kitna ajib lagega....khud ki hen's party ki permission loon bhai se....no, no"

" Yes, yes...aur iss me ajib kya lagega, aur tumhe use kuch btaana hi nahi hai....bas bolna ki hum teeno baahar jaana chahte hai, bas " Simran says

" Bhai ne location puchhi to...? Aapko pta hai n gulmarg me kya hua tha....aapne hi to btaaya tha bhai ko clubbing nahi pasand..." At the words of timid Avni, Simran looks at her

" But avu, teri shaadi hone waali hai....Raj bhaiya to tujhe waise hi kisi chiz ke liye mnaa nahi karte...to abhi shaadi ke pehle toh tu jo maangegi tujhe wo de denge.....fir ye permission kya chiz hai..." At her words Avni looks at both of them and they both encourage her.







Raj opens the door in a happy mood when he hears a knock on the door, but his smile slows down when he sees not just Simran, but all three of them.

And Neil and Vishal, who was coming from the other side to Raj's room, see them standing at the door and before this Raj asks them the reason for coming, Neil asks coming close to them

" Aap sab mohtarmaaye yehaan ? Free ho gye aapas me gossip karne se ?" Neil tauntingly asks them because since the time these three were together, the other two ( simran & priyal ) neither allowed him to meet Avni nor talk to her on phone.

There, all three sees Neil and vishal standing next to them, and suddenly seeing everyone in his room, Raj gets irritated...he had only called Simran.

" tum Sabke yehaan aane ki wajah ?" On Raj's question the remaining 5 look at him.

" Hum dono to Tere saath movie dekhne ke iraade se aaye the...kyonki teri biwi ne humari biwiyon ko apne saath busy kar rakha hai..." Neil says taunting Simran

" Tumhari biwi ? Wo kab hui ? Abhi shaadi hui nahi hai bhai..." Simran says irritating him

" huh, ek din baad ho jaayegi..." Simran looks at him with her eyebrows raised and before this both the brothers and sisters talk nonsense, Raj says

" Hmm, inke aane ki wajah pta chal gyi...tum dono bolo..." leaving Simran, he asks Avni and Priyal… because he was the one who had called Simran.

And now when it's her turn to speak, Avni gets scared again, how can she ask permission for something that her brother doesn't like?

Whereas Simran and Priyal elbow her and signal her to speak… on which Avni gathers courage and takes a breath.

" Wo bhai, bhabhi chahti hain.... She is unable to speak further when Simran interrupts her.

" Avu, Main kuch nahi chahti.... At Simran words, Avni looks at her making her baby face and thinks that it is okay, Raj should not scold Simran, that is why she will not take her name.

" Wo bhai, priyal chahti hai ki....

" Avu, main....? tu apni wish lekar aayi hai n...." Priyal also does not want to let her name go forward due to fear of Raj and Avni glare at Priyal, Both of them trapped her in front of Raj....First these two brought her here and now they are taking their steps back.

And seeing this thing between the three of them, Raj says

" Avi, kya bolna chahti ho...clear bolo " On hearing Raj's words, Avni looks at him silently and Simran understands that this girl will not speak anything, so she decides to speak

" Today is Avu's last night of freedom before marriage so she wants to celebrate it and that is why all three of us have planned to go out..." and further Simran not speak when Neil interrupt her

" Freedom ? " all sees Neil on his reaction

" Baby main tumhe jail me nahi band karne waala..." Avni suddenly feels shy of him calling her baby in front of Raj, he doesn't look at this place before saying her anything.

" Neil, sab jaante hai ki tu avu ko jail me nahi band karega, but fir bhi shaadi ke baad toh tu use ek pal ke liye free nahi Chhodega....toh humare saath to iski aakhir raat hi hai..." Avni thinks of hiding her face somewhere hearing these two shameless brother and sister...both of them are saying anything.

And before on this Neil says something, simran turns to Raj...

" Raj, not me but avu was afraid that you will refuse...par aisa kaise ho sakta hai avu kuch kahe aur uska bhai mnaa karde...nahi....? Toh kya hum teeno jaaye..." Simran says all this in one go and before Raj can say anything, Neil's reaction comes again

" No, no, not at all...time dekhaa hai...raat ke 10 bjne waale hai...tum log kahin nahi jaogi...."

" Humne tujh se nahi puchha, to tu chup reh......" Simran says which makes Neil irritated.

" Neil sahi keh raha hai...itni raat ho gyi hai...aur pta nahi tum log wapas kab aaoge aur pta nahi kahan jaane ka paln kar rahi ho......aur hume ye bhi pta hai tum hume saath lekar bhi nahi jaana chahogi.....isiliye Nooo...jo karna hai yehi karo.....Here you will get all the arrangements which you will get outside " Raj gives his points on Simran makes faces

" But... Simran says

" No if and but..... And Avi i Know this is not your wish...." he says eyeing Simran on which simran rolls her eyes

" I know you, but bachcha, please understand what I say...this is an unknown city...I know all three of you are mature and strong enough to protect yourself but, you must be understanding what I want to say...so whatever you want to do, do it here...I will make the arrangements..."

" Huh, There is no need for that...I will make those arrangements myself...." Simran tells him angrily, on which he sighs.

" Simran...

" Shut-up, avu chalo yehaan se...hume yehaan aana hi nahi chahiye tha..." Saying this she holds Avni's hand and Avni and Priyal leave with Simran, and Raj sighs seeing Simran's anger.

" Dekhaa, Neil bro, shaadi ke baad aapki haalat bhi yehi hogi jo Raj bhai ki hui..." vishal try to scare Neil again...

" bhabhi ne bolne ka mauka bhi nahi diya....Shut-up bolkar chali gyin..." Neil gives a looks to vishal at his words.

" Mujhe abhi hi mauka nahi milta bolne ka....mujhe pehle se aadat hai..."

" Oh, mtlb aapki waali aur khatarnak hai...bas dikhti masoom hai...." Neil gives him a look at this.

















Later, Simran and Priyal make arrangements for Avni's hen's party in the room itself, In which, first of all, simran switches off the phones of all three of them so that they do not disturb all three of them.

Later Simran and Priyal make Avni's night memorable in a good way....Avni cuts the cake, the trio click different types of photos, dance, talk non-stop and much more.....they changes their  clothes for every photo.

some pictures from their party 👇



The night ends with them sleeping together while talking.

And on the other hand, those three boys also spend the night watching movies in boredom because Simran had closed all the ways for them to come here....Along with switching off the phone, she had also locked the door.















Next morning

Both the families get ready for the Haldi ceremony...

Haldi decoration.👇

Watch this song 👇 to imagine their happiness

Avni and Neil sit together...

Avni look 👇


Neil look 👇

Both families apply haldi to their children one by one, starting with the eldest, First Bebe applies haldi to both of them, then Shweta, Neela, Ashish and Prakash….And all the other guests too.

Raj comes to apply haldi to Avni and then after applying haldi on her cheeks, he lovingly spreads the haldi on her nose on which she smiles happily.

Ansh also applies haldi to his maama and bua with his tiny hands and everyone smiles seeing it.

And soon, while applying haldi to their friend, Raj and Vishal smear Neil with haldi, seeing which the whole family smiles happily and then with this happiness, dance and fun, the Haldi ceremony ends.

" Avni Neil, ab tum dono ek baat dhayan se suno...ab se lekar shaadi tak tum dono ek dusre ko nahi dekh sakte, iska Mtlab abhi se milna-julna band...Avni to samjh gayi hogi... Neil tujhe samjh me aayi n baat..." Neil's eyes widen at Bebe's statement.

" kya ? Par kyon bebe....abhi to pure 24 ghante hai shaadi me...kal shaam me shaadi hai aur abhi subah ka waqt hai..." Seeing this haste of the would-be groom, everyone gives him a look of disbelief and Avni gets shy.
Why does he behave like this in front of everyone?

" Neil, ye rasm hoti hai...ab tak maine kuch nahi kaha par ab main serious hu...haldi ke baad ladka-ladki ek dusre ko sidhaa shaadi par dekhte hai...warna apsagun hota hai...."

" Bebe, par

" Neil, aaj koi par-war nahi...aur ab jao tum dono fresh ho jao..."

" oh toh bebe fresh hone saath jaaye...ye bhi rasm hogi...." By saying this, Neil leaves no stone unturned to embarrass Avni in front of everyone, after hearing all this, everyone else suppresses their laughter.

" Nahi puttar Ji, aisi koi rasm nahi hai....tu akela jaa..." Neil pouts at Bebe's words.

" Jo rasm honi chahiye wo toh aap log karwaate nahi..." He mutters to himself.


And after this, both of them go in two directions towards their respective rooms to clean the haldi applied on them because after this Avni's Chhoda ritual takes place for which she has to get ready.





Avni comes to the room but before she closes the door, she feels that someone has placed a hand on the door to stop her from doing so and that someone is Neil.

" Neil aap ?" At this Neil gives her his smiles

" Ji, main "

" Neil, aap yehaan kyon aaye...bebe ne mnaa kiya n abhi milne se..."

" Oh, aur tumhe lagta hai, main unki ye baat maanunga..." Saying this, he pushes her back a little in the room, himself comes inside the room and then locks the door carefully, seeing which she slightly gulps.

" Neil kya kar rahe hai....kisi ne dekhaa to problem ho jaayegi...." At her words he turns towards her

" Maine darwaja lock kar diya...koi nahi dekh paayega hume " He says mischievously on which she also smiles shyly par then composing herself she speaks

" Par aap yehaan aaye kyon hai...abhi to hum baahar mile "

" Good question, main yehaan kyon aaya hu....so answer is...main yehaan tumhe haldi lgaane aaya hu..."

" Kya ? Neil dekhiye koi aa gya toh sch me problem ho jayegi..." She said moving back when she see him coming close to her

" aa jane do....par aaj tumhe haldi lgaye bina main kahin nahi jane wala..." Saying this, he comes closer to her and imprisons her in the wall because while taking a step back, she did not realize when her back had touched the wall.

" Neilll.. kya kar rahe hai.. Mujhe toh already aapke naam ki haldi lag chuki hai n " She says this when she sees him caressing her cheeks with his knuckles sensually on which she gulps

" Mere naam ki lagi hai... Maine to abhi tak nahi lgayi hai..." She feels shy at his words.

" Achha, fir baahar sabke saamne kyon nahi lagyi..." At her words he comes closer to her ear where she closes her eyes feeling his faint breathing.

" baahar, sabke saamne... main wo nahi kar pata jo main yeha kar sakta hu..." He whispers softly into her ear and after that kisses her earlobe and suddenly from this proximity, she finds it difficult to breathe...she takes a weak breath.

" par Neil yehan toh haldi hi nahi hai..." She tells him, reminding him how he would do it without haldi, and he smiles at her words which she feels on her ear.

" Tumhe kya lagta hai.....jab main yeha tumhe haldi lgaane aa sakta hu toh haldi lana kaise bhul sakta hu....." After whispering this in her ear, he separates from her, and then goes to the table near the couch in the room, picks up a small bowl of haldi from it and shows it to her at which her eyes widen...when did he put this here?

" Aapne ye yehan kab rakha...?"

" kya fark padta hai maine ye yeha kab rakha...
fark is baat se padta hai ki...Do I have permission to put it on you?" Saying this, he takes a step towards her, on which she smiles shyly, perhaps now she has no way to escape:

He again comes and stands in front of her who was already standing against the wall...

" Do I have permission?" His words make her blush but then she refuses him.

" No " He looks at her confused at her refusal and to clear his confusion she continues

" I told you, you don't need to ask my consent and if you ask, I will refuse..." He smiles at her words and then Avni cups his face in her both palms

" You don't need my consent to do anything with me because I have completely entrusted myself to you long ago...you can do whatever you want with me...I love you." Saying this she kisses his right cheek Which makes him smile shyly....her, these words, this trust means everything to him.

Looking into her eyes, he places the bowl of haldi in his hand on a place made on the window next to the wall.

He holds her by the shoulders, turns her in his arms and brushes her hair aside and by doing so, her bare back comes into his view due to design of her backless blouse.....he lets out a light sigh looking at her beautiful, smooth back, how much he wants to touch her.

" Stop me if things get too much for you..." He whispers this in her ear while holding her from behind, reminding her of the moment when she had stopped him on the day of Mehendi.

She doesn't say anything at his words and after a pause Neil takes some haldi in his hand and applies it on her back and she gasps suddenly feeling his touch along with that chilled haldi on her bare back.

Neil gently spreads haldi on her back and from her back his hand comes little down to her waist which he caresses, increasing her breathing....Just by doing this, her breathing increases and she feels goosebumps, along with a knot in her stomach and her throat dries up.

Neil again takes some haldi in his hand and this time before applying it on the back of her neck he kisses her there, on which Avni holds both the sides of her lehenga in her fists.

While he stood behind, in his trance, he unpinned her dupatta and freed her dupatta from her shoulders and showed the way to the floor and realizing this her breath hitched and a shiver runs through her body.

Her chest starts moving up and down slightly and Neil holds her shoulder and turns her in his arms who is now standing in front of him only in blouse and lehenga.
But he sees that there is no discomfort in her eyes and it means a lot to him that she is comfortable with him.
He looks at her from top to bottom and then a smile appears on his face.

" Whenever I see you, I think of only one question, how can someone be so beautiful…? But then I get the answer to my question that God has carved this beauty to bless me..." He speaks softly while looking into her eyes, and his words make her blush, to which she lowers her eyelids, unable to look into his eyes.

He makes her looks at him again by placing his finger under her chin, and he sees her blushing face...And without saying anything further, Neil again takes some haldi in his hand and spreads it on both her hands, Going up from her wrist, he spreads haldi on her arms, at which she closes her eyes and he smiles seeing her do so, seeing his effect on her, he smiles seeing how his light touch is having such an effect on her.

And suddenly her eyes open with a jerk and her breath-hitched when next she feels his fingers on that place where his name is written, just above her heart, she sees how passionately he is spreading haldi there while looking at her with his intoxicating eyes.

Moving from her chest, he spreads haldi all over her neck and then leans towards her and kisses her throat and he smiles, feeling her gulping.

There is no exchange of words between them because at this time both are able to understand each other's silence through their eyes...She lets him do whatever he wants, and he makes her feel whatever she wants.

After that, without breaking eye contact with her, Neil gets on his knees in front of her and Avni looks down into his eyes and she starts feeling more shy, understanding his next move, she starts looking in the other direction and takes her breath in and seeing her doing this he holds her wrist

 

" Eyes on me " A shiver runs down her spine after hearing his words, but then she looks at him again and Neil holding her wrist places her hand on his shoulder.

While caressing her stomach with his fingers, he leaves a kiss on her navel, feeling which she draws her breath in and his chest swells, feeling the dancing butterflies in his stomach.

She then sees him rubbing his light beard on her stomach, her grip tightens on her shoulders and she suddenly feels her knees getting weak when she again feels his lips on her stomach, a soft moan comes out of her mouth while taking his name

For the first time he's touching her there in this way....Neil smile when he hears her soft moan and feeling her grip tighten on his shoulder
Then Neil takes some haldi and started spreading all over her stomach...All this was happening a bit too much for Avni...Both get intimate often, Everyday Neil used to come close to her, but the way he is touching her today, everything is new for her.

He stands in front of her and Avni hugs him wrapping her hands around his neck

"Should I stop..." he asks.

" No..." comes out of his mouth in a low whisper.

Neil smiles and then pulls her away from him and she looks down, he places his finger under her chin and makes her look at him and again takes some haldi in his hand

She looks at him confused because he has applied haldi everywhere on her, sensing her confusion he smiles lightly.

" Don't get confused, meri jaan.... There is still a place left... jahan haldi nahi lagi....." Saying this Neil rubs it that haldi on his cheek making her more confused

" Ye kya kar rahe hai....?" She asks

On which Neil leans towards her and rubs his cheek against her, due to which the haldi of his cheek gets applied on her and his doing so makes her feel shy.
He repeats the same thing on her other cheek also.

Moving away from her cheeks, he kisses her forehead, from where, sliding his lips, he kisses her nose due to which a shy smile appears on her lips.

From there he is about to kiss her lips but Avni places her palm on his lips on which he looks at her confused.

Avni smiles and then removes her palm and places a peck on his lips shyly on which he smiles.

" Kya main tumhe Agli rasm ke liye ready kar doon ?" She understands from his words what he is talking about doing now...and before she can answer, they both hear a knock on the door.

" Neil jiju, room se baahar nikal jao...bebe aa rahi hai...." Priyal says this because after seeing the door of Avni's room locked, she understands that her impatient jiju must be inside...But to prevent both of them from getting scolded by Bebe, she comes to warn them.

And inside, hearing this, Avni's eyes widen and she pushes Neil away from her, on which Neil sighs.

" Hadd hai yaar, itna kyon darti ho...bebe hi to hai..." Neil says

" Neil, ab aap jao...bebe ne mnaa kiya hai n to ab hum kal milenge...."

" Par main kal tak kaise wait karunga....tumhe pta bhi hai kal hone me kitna waqt hai....."

" Neil...." She is unable to say anything further when Priyal again warns them and then Neil does nothing but opens the door and Avni quickly runs to the washroom because she cannot show her condition in front of Priyal that Neil has completely covered her with haldi Otherwise she will tease her.
























Later everyone gathers for Avni's chooda ritual except Neil....Bebe told Raj to get him locked in the room because they couldn't trust him in this matter.

In Avni's chooda ritual, first of all Neela applies tikaa on her forehead and then both Ashish and Raj together put bangles on her hand one by one.

While doing this, both of them become emotional and Avni's eyes also fill with tears after seeing her brother and father emotional.

And then in this emotional atmosphere and then with some other things, Avni's chooda ceremony is completed.

Avni smiles seeing those red bangles in her hands and she smiles remembering Neil's face and she thinks how happy he will be when he sees it in her hands.

Later Bebe asks Neela to tie a white cloth on Avni's bangle and remove it tomorrow morning itself and with this all the rituals before their marriage are completed.












At night

The clock strikes 12 and Neil's phone rings, which brings a smile on his face. He picks up the call and waits for her to speak.

" Happy birthday Neil " Neil's smile widens like a small child who is waiting for his birthday.

" Thank you my love...par ye kya, tumne voice call ki...please mujhe tumhe dekhna hai..." Avni smiles at his words

" Sirf kuch ghanton ki baat hai...fir to aapki hi hu...jee-bhar kar dekh lena..." He smiles at her words but he also wants to see her but it's okay, her words are also right.

"By the way, what do you want as a gift?" she asks

" Now I can't ask for anything more from you than what you gave me on my birthday...My biggest wish was to see you as my bride and that will be fulfilled tomorrow evening...what more can I ask from you than this..." She smiles at his words and then Neil hears a knock at his door.

" Kya yaar, ye log milne to de nahi rahe...baat bhi nahi karne de rahe..." He speaks irritably.

" Go...everyone is waiting for you." Saying this Avni hangs up the phone.








Later everyone gathers at one place because today is not only Neil's birthday but also Simran's birthday, so both the families along with the guests who are awake at this time, they all celebrate the birthday of both of them, tomorrow also the birthday of both of them will be celebrated but for now everyone wants to have a small celebration.

But here also Neil complains because everyone is here except his Avni.

" Meri biwi ko bhi bulaa lete toh kya ho jaata..." He speaks with his puppy face, which makes no one feel pity on him.

" Ab teri hone waali biwi ne tera birthday hi Chuna shaadi ke liye to use sajaa toh milni thi..." bebe says and He again makes his puppy face on which everyone smiles

" ab tujhe khush karne ke liye use itni kurbaani deni padegi..." Bebe says teasingly…because now Avni will have to endure this much, now that she wanted to give him the biggest gift of his life, she would be punished for staying away from this small celebration.

After this, both Neil and Simran cut the cake and after doing this small celebration everyone goes to sleep early because tomorrow is going to be a big and tiring day for everyone.













All of you are warmly welcomed in Avneil's wedding....

Since there were two celebrations, everyone kept the wedding time before sunset so that after the wedding everyone could celebrate Simran and Neil's birthday at night

And as both the families are at the same place, yet Neil's baarat was to be held, so everyone decided that the baraat will proceed from the entrance of the palace to the pavilion.

Avni is getting ready in a room where Sirman and Priyal are helping her.


On the other hand, all the rest are with Neil ….There is a ritual in the marriage that if the sister is married then her husband prepares his saala for the wedding, So here Raj completes this ritual...Raj is tying Sehra on Neil's head and everyone is smiling seeing this moment.

" Finally, mera gadhaa dost, ghodi chadhne jaa raha hai..." Raj says teasingly to him, on which everyone just laughs and Neil just rolls his eyes.


Later, after getting ready, Neil sits on the mare with Ansh and then the baarat with all the fun & dhoom-dhadka comes from the entrance gate of the palace to the mandap.

While coming there everyone is dancing happily

Neela Ashish stands at the mandap to welcome Neil and the khanna family with a happy heart.

Raj takes Neil off from the mare and makes him a little dance as well...When Neil comes to dance, this song plays : tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene

The sound of all the baarat was coming in Avni's room....She is smiling with her whole heart and Simran and Priyal smile seeing the happiness on her face.


Later, after all the dance & masti finally Neil comes close to Neela & Ashish with his family and stands in front of them with happy smiles

Ashish Neela smiles and completes the rituals of welcoming Neil and the Khanna family in their way.

Neela puts a tika on Neil's forehead and did his aarti and then pulls Neil's nose softly on which Neil smiles and then he bent down to touch their feet but ashish hugs him and then Neil hugs Neela maa.

Everybody is in the garden where there is a mandap for the wedding.

Mandap 👇

Neil is sitting in the mandap and then Pandit ji says to bring the bride…hearing this his heart beats increases, It's been over 24 hours since he's seen her and now he's going to see her in the form he's been waiting for.

Raj and Neela come to take Avni to the room, where both of them get emotional seeing her like a bride.

Neela maa comes close to her and again a moment create between mother and daughter...Neela kisses her forehead and says...

" chalo Neil intezaar kar raha hai..." she smiles at this but after hearing her mother's words, she looks at her brother who stands with tears in his eyes.

She comes to him and wipes his tears on which Raj smiles, Simran smiles seeing their moment and suddenly she remembers her wedding day when Neil's tears were not stopping.

" Meri chhoti si Avi, aaj kitni badi ho gyi....Bahut pyaari lag rahi ho." Raj says to which Avni smiles.











On the other side in garden suddenly everyone looks at particular direction when they hear soft sound of music.

Neil smiles feeling her presence around himself and then he sees in front of him where she is coming with her loved ones, taking steps towards him.

On either side of her are Ashish and Raj and next to them are Neela and Simran and Ansh is next to Raj who is holding Avni's hand.

Seeing her coming closer to him, Neil stands in the mandap, She looks at him but seeing him looking at her, she lowers her eyelids, which makes his heart skip a beat.
She is coming wearing his favorite red colored lehenga which he likes, and She is looking like a goddess at this moment, she raises her eyelids again and their eyes meet and on this both of them share a soulful smile.

And all of sudden, Unknowingly Neil eyes get moist in happiness... finally his all wishes come true.. finally today Neil is seeing Avni as he has wanted to see her for a long time....As his bride.
He wiped his tears before anyone noticed.

Avni comes near mandap and Neil forward his hand towards her to hold her.

Raj give her hand into Neil hand and then both stand inside the mandap in front of each other

" ab ladka ladki ek dusre ko varmaala pehnaye...Sabse pehle dulhan pehnaye"

Without any fun, Neil bows his head in front of her and Avni puts the garland around his neck and then Avni bows her head and Neil puts the garland around her neck and after this he kisses her forehead....

Both smiles looking at each other

Everyone clap for them and flowers started showering on them.

After that, priest asks both of them to sit, holding her hand Neil sits with her

After that Pandit ji asks Neela and Ashish to come forward for Kanyadaan, Ashish Neela does Avni's Kanyadaan and gives her hand in Neil's hand.

At the time of Kanyadaan, a tear escape from Avni's eye... But before her tears touch the ground Neil forward his hand in fornt of her face and take her tears in his palm and wipes her tears from her cheek....


Neela and Ashish smile after seeing this gesture of Neil while Raj also has tears in his eyes after seeing tears in his sister's eyes which Sirman wipes and rubs his back to normalize him, to which he gives her a look that he is fine.

After Kanyadaan, Pandit ji asks them to stand for the phera's

Pandit ji started explaining all the vows and avneil says after what pandit says to each other.....And both started walking around the holy fire....

1. The couple prays to God to extend his blessings to them in the form of healthy food and give them strength to live together & respect each other in good and bad times. They promise to nourish & take care of each other's needs.

2. In this, the couple pleads to God to give them mental stability, spiritual strength, and physical health so they can live a smooth life. They also promise that from today they are two souls and one heart and will always to be there for each other to ensure laughter and smiles.

3. In the third round, the couple prays for wealth, prosperity, and wisdom to live life peacefully and with contentment. They ask God to give them enough strength so that they can share the happiness and pain together.

During this phera, they also promise each other to be utmost faithful and never cheat in this relationship for any third person.

4. Marriage is believed to be about two families and not two people. The vows recited during this phera highlights the commitment between the two souls to increase in love and respect for each other and their respective families.

In this, the bride is also said to walk before the boy and promises that she will accept death before him if it ever comes on his way.

5. In this phera, the couple promises to be with each other in every thick and thin and share joy and grief. They also pray to God to bless them with healthy kids and promises to nurture them well with good values and an enriching lifestyle.

6. In the sixth holy round around the fire, the couple asks for a fit and healthy long-life filled with joy, prosperity, and peace. They promise to always stand next to each other in bad health or when needed and support each other in all devotional duties.

7. In this final round, the couple prays for loyalty, togetherness, companionship, understanding and unconditional love between themselves. They ask for enough patience & maturity to make this beautiful bond last long.

They also promise to do every possible thing to carry out all the promises taken during this holy ritual with pure and honest intentions.

● Pehra vows credits goes to google baba 😌

After taking all this 👆 pehra and vows... Pandit says avneil to sits but Neil says..

" Avni main tmse kuch aur kehna chahta hu......" Before sitting together, Neil takes both her hands in his and says this, on which Avni looks at him.

" Avni, for me this vows are not promises but privileges.
I want to laugh with you, I want to cry,
I want to share everything with you..I want to build with you, want to be with you and live with you.
This is my biggest rewards and exactly what I always dreamt of being with you...Thank you for coming into my life, I am completely blessed today."

Hearing his words, her eyes become moist and a soulful smile appears on her lips.

Everyone else claps and then both of them sit.

Later Neil fills vermilion in Avni's hairlines....and wears her nuptial chain around her neck, And with this the Pandit announces that from today you both become husband and wife.

Avneil looks at each other and smiles and then both stand up and Neil hugs her.


And after that both take blessings of their elders, Raj Simran hugs both of them, Priyal Vishal also congratulates them for their future life.

And as it becomes slightly dark as their wedding takes place, crackers are burst at the end of the wedding to celebrate their happiness.

And Avneil's marriage ended here.
I hope you all enjoyed.
















To be continued...........

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