ADMIRING LOVE

Par Richaa_Sharma

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[ Part 1 of Admiring Love.] [ He fell first but she fell harder.] [ If you like to read love stories based on... Plus

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Prologue
CHARACTER
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
Teaser
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
A/N
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
chapter 59
chapter 60
chapter 61
chapter 62
chapter 63
chapter 64
chapter 65
Chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
A/N
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
Reviews
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
A/N : Thank you
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
Thank you ❤️
chapter 95
chapter 96
chapter 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
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Chapter start 👇












After the mehendi ceremony, after taking some rest, everyone gets ready for Avneil's beautiful sangeet night in the evening.

Everyone plans to have a typical Bollywood sangeet night because the fun that is found in old Bollywood dance songs cannot be found anywhere.

Avneil outfit 👇


Both are sitting together and the host is about to announce the beginning of this beautiful evening.

" So let's the fun begin... Let's start the Sangeet function...and the first one to come is the youngest of this family, so welcome our little Ansh...." host announced and moves away from the stage

A big smile comes on Avni's face after seeing her piece of heart on stage and soon Ansh, in his own mischievous style, does a small dance for his buaa and maama and at the end of the dance, Neil goes on the stage, takes Ansh in his arms and kisses his cheeks for his cute performance, on which Ansh again gets irritated because of his slight beard pricking and goes to his mumma Simran running, on which everyone smiles.

" wow what a cute performance.... So now, ghar ke sabse chote sadasya ke baad ghar ke sabse bade sadsya ki baari hai....So, welcome our respected bebe." Host announced again and moves away from the stage.

Light get off and soon a spot light on bebe.

All get shocked to see bebe outfit...Normally she's wearing saree but today's she's wearing patiyala suit and she's holding a fan in her hand and wearing sunglasses...

She started dancing on the Hawa Hawayee song...

Awi Wiwi Wiwi Wiwi

Hawa Hawayee

Awi Wiwi Wiwi Wi

Chee Ho Ho Honolulu Lu Lu Lu Lu, Honolulu

Hing Bekei Hong Kong, King Kong

I Seenoosi, Yusiloosi, Hassi Tosi, Lassi Pissi

Mombasa, Ping Pong

Oye Oye Oye Oye Oye Oye

Aka Chikee Lakee Chikee

Chikee Lakee Chu

Aka Chikee Lakee Chikee Chikee

Lakee Chikee Chu..(x2)

Mai Khwabo Kee Shehjadee

Mai Hu Har Dil Pe Chhayee

Ho, Mai Khwabo Kee Shehjadee

Mai Hu Har Dil Pe Chhayee

Badal Hai Meree Julfe, Bijalee Meree Angdayee

Bijalee Girane Mai Hu Aayee

Bijalee Girane Mai Hu Aayee

Kehte Hain Mujhko Hawa Hawayee

Hawa Hawayee, Hawa Hawayee

Bijalee Girane Mai Hu Aayee, Ho Bijalee Girane Mai Hu Aayee

Kehte Hain Mujhko Hawa Hawayee

When bebe dance on this ☝ lyrics, Neil shout from his place, hawa hawayee encouraging her..... and after shouting this he goes near bebe and started dancing with her..

Hawa Hawayee, Hawa Hawayee

Later, bebe and Neil complete this song together with their masti... And then bebe dance ends and Neil hugged her on which bebe kisses her tillu forehead

" wow, meri hawa hawayee, aapne toh kamal kar diya..." Neil says on which Bebe smack on his arms feeling little shy.

" wow mind blowing.... We never expect this from you bebe... Par kehte hai umar sirf kehne ke liye hoti hai... Dil jawan hona chahiye and you are the best example...." host speaks and Everyone else also praise bebe, and then Neil come back on his seat and sits beside avni.

" bebe ne sach me kitna accha dance kiya..." Avni says this to Neil on which he nods yes smiling

" Toh ab baari hai... Dono samdhiyon ki......So welcome mr.& mrs. khanna and mr.&mrs. Mehra... Dekhte hai ye kya kamal karte hai..." host says And after this all four people, Shweta-Prakash, Neela-Ashish come on the stage.

And their children shout for them from below the stage and boost their enthusiasm, on which they smile.

Song name - say shava, shava

Say shava shava, say shava shava

--MALE--
Roop hai tera sona, soni teri paayal
Hoye, roop hai tera sona sona, soni teri paayal
Chhan chhana chhan aise chhanke, kar de sabko ghaayal
Keh raha aankhon ka kaajal, ishq mein jeena marna, yay

ALL sing together

Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava maahiya
Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava, yea

--FEMALE--
Roop hai mera sona, soni meri paayal
Roop hai mera sona sona, soni meri paayal
Chhan chhana chhan aise chhanke, kar de sabko ghaayal

--MALE--
Hey, keh raha aankhon ka kaajal, ishq mein jeena marna
Everybody!

When this 👆 lyrics come ashish and prakash come back on their wife's and do step related lyrics...

--ALL--
Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava maahiya
Say shava shava maahiya, say shava shava...

All youngsters Raj, simran, priyal, vishal including Neil except Avni.. goes on the stage and joined them... Because no one can resist this punjabi song, so all dance little bit with their parents.

And then with the dance ends, all clapped for them... Avni is smiling looking at her parents...

And all of sudden seeing her daughter happy face Neela maa gets emotional....and she sings coming near her.....

Song name - chanda mere chanda..

Chanda meri chanda tujhe kaise main yeh samjhaaoon
Mujhe lagti hai tu kitni pyaari re
Mujhe lagti hai tu kitni pyaari re
O khushiyaan jitni hain, sab dhoond dhoondke laaoon
Teri doli ke sang kar doon saari re
Teri doli ke sang kar doon saari re..

Neela sings all this lines cupping her face and hearing all this line from her mother avni also get emotional and hugged her.
Raj's eyes fill with emotion seeing his mother-sister like this and wipes his unshed tears and seeing him like this Simran rubbed his back to make him normal on which Raj smiles seeing her

And suddenly seeing this emotional atmosphere, Neil smile and goes near Neela maa and Avni and to make neela mood light Neil tap on Neela maa shoulder on which Neela maa sees him and Neil holds her hand and sings this lyrics 👇

Hey, tu jo aayi sajke mehndi rachke
Chal bachke o soniye...

He hold Neela maa hand and avni hand together and make them do some dance step with himself.

Dil kitno ka khaaye dhajke o soniye
Jind maahi ve soni soni aaja maahi ve
Everybody say soni soni aaja maahi ve

Neela maa smile seeing Neil gesture and avni too smiles seeing him....He doesn't let anyone's mood become sad even for 2 minutes.

Then, after all the elders have performed, the host announces the names of Raj and Simran....On which Neil, whistling, welcomes his friend and sister on the stage.

Raj and Simran dedicate this song and dance to themselves as well as Avnil because it is related to their love life.....Both the couples love each other immensely and through this song they express what they have felt in this love.

Song name : Ishq chandi hai, ishq sona hai...from the movie biwi no.1


Ishq chandi hai ishq sona hai
Ishq chandi hai ishq sona hai
Sona sona baba sona sona
Baba sona sona sona
[Hai jawaani to ishq hona hai] x 4

Is umar mein to aisa hota hai
Neend udti hai, chain khota hai
Yaad aati hai, jaan jaati hai
Premi jagte hain, jag sota hai

After singing these lyrics, Simran gives a kiss on Raj's cheek due to which Raj gets suprised and Neil whistles from below on this romantic couple and Avni smiles seeing their love, But her smile turns into shyness when on the other side, after Simran kisses Raj on the stage, here Neil seeing the opportunity kisses Avni's cheeks...She looks at him with wide eyes to which Neil winks...and further enjoy their performance.

Hey.. Is umar mein to aisa hota hai
Neend udti hai, chain khota hai

Yaad aati hai, jaan jaati hai
Premi jagte hain, jag sota hai

Kabhi hasna hai, kabhi rona hai
Kabhi hasna hai, kabhi rona hai
Sona sona baba sona sona

Hum deewanon se log jalte hain
Aisa karte hain bhaag chalte hain

Dil jo kehta hai hum woh karte hain
Is zamane se hum kya darte hain

Ishq jaadu hai, ishq sona hai
Ishq jaadu hai, ishq sona hai
Sona sona baba sona sona
Baba sona sona sona
[Hai jawaani to ishq hona hai] x 4

With this their dance ends and Neil stands up along with everyone at her explosive performance and claps for them.

And then Simran comes down from the stage and Vishal joins Raj where Neil's eyes widen as he hears the next song of their dance, which is.....ek kunwara, phas gya Mara

Imagine Raj and vishal dance like this...👇


Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey..........

Ek Kunwara Phir Gaya Mara,
Phas Gaya Dekho Yeh Bechara
Ek Kunwara Phir Gaya Mara,
Phas Gaya Dekho Yeh Bechara
Do Din Ki Hai Yeh Chandni,
Phir Kari Kari Rat Hai
Too Mann Ja Dulhe Raja

Tak Ser Khaji, Tak Ser Khaja
Kal Teri Shadii Teraa Baj Gaya Baja
Tak Ser Khaji, Tak Ser Khaja
Kal Teri Shadi Teraa Baj Gaya Baja

Ek Kunwara Phir Gaya Mara,
Phas Gaya Dekho Yeh Bechara

Aaj Hasle Too Kal Rona Padega,
Sukh Chain Tujhe Sab Khona Padega
Jab Woh Kahegee Uthh Jayega Too,
Jab Woh Kahegee Tujhe Sona Padega
Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey Hey..........

With this song, Both of them are married men warn Neil: Now your freedom is also being snatched away.. we know You are so happy on your marriage, but that happiness stays just for 2 days:

And although it is not so, but while teasing his friend, adding a touch of fun, they both dedicate this song to Neil, on which everyone does nothing but smiles and then both of them bring Neil on the stage and all three together end the dance.

And again simran and this time priyal too join Raj and Vishal and all four join together and dance teasing Neil on the song " maano humara ehsaan, ladki ne haan kardi..." To which Avni smiles and Neil rolls his eyes that oh please I have done you a favor by saying yes....on which Avni gives him a look " really ?" And with this their performance ends.





" And now it is the turn of the bride and groom to add charm to today's sangeet night and before that the groom comes here.....dulhe raja aap apna dil thoda thamkar baithe kyonki aapki dulhaniya aa rahi hai......" The host says this

And Neil is suprised to hear that Avni is going to dance alone for him...he had not expected this from his shy Avni....Means, she is no longer shy in front of him, but she still hesitates in front of the family before doing anything for him.

And before he looks towards Avni sitting next to him, the lights go off and he realizes that his Avni is not next to him.

The lights come on, and Neil's eyes widen in surprise to see her on the stage, this is not what he expected from his shy Avni

Song - Hero no.1

Neil's eyes widen with a shy smile after listening to the song.

Sona kitna sona hai
Sone jaisa tera man
Sun zara sun kya kehti hai
Deewani dil ki dhadkan
Sona kitna sona hai
Sone jaisa tera man
Sun zara sun kya kehti hai
Deewani dil ki dhadkan
Tu mera, tu mera, tu mera
Tu mera, tu mera hero number one

Avni dedicated these lines to Neil because his mind and heart were not only of gold but also of diamonds and were so precious that there was no comparison.
And now there is no one ahead of him and only he is her hero.

While doing the dance steps, she points towards him and behind her on the stage, a picture of Salman Khan, who was Avni's favorite hero, appears on the screen.
But ignoring salman pictures, Avni does a dance step, and then a big smiling picture of Neil appears on the screen, seeing which Neil gets a little shy....and all the family members also smiles seeing this

But then he goes on stage to support her and joins her in dancing along with the lyrics of the song.

Sona kitna sona hai
Sone jaisa tera man
Sun zara sun kya kehti hai
Deewani dil ki dhadkan
Sona kitna sona hai
Sone jaisa tera man
Sun zara sun kya kehti hai
Deewani dil ki dhadkan
Main tera, main tera, main tera
Main tera, main tera hero number one

Dancing on this, Neil side hugs Avni while smiling brightly on which Avni smiles a little shyly.

And then before going on stage, Neil had already told Simran the next song, so Simran gets that song played...Now he is her hero no.1, so she too, his biwi no.1

So next song is : biwi no.1

Imagine them dancing like this 👇


Koi bole mujhe aaja aaja handsome
Koi bole mujhe hi hello Samson
Koi bole tu chikna hai bada
Koi bole tujh mein bada hai dum

Main sabse boloon ek hi baat
Ik ladki bhai mere saath
Sone jaise baal hain uske, chandi jaisa tan

Woh hai, woh hai, woh hai, woh hai
Meri biwi number one

Avni feels a little shy after this dance but today she does not want to hesitate in this fun, that's why she's reciprocating all Neil actions while dancing.

And as this 2 song was a surprise for both of them, for each other... But now both of them dance on the song which Neil had already decided.

Song name :- tera rang balle balle

Tera Rang Balle Balle
Teri Chaal Balle Balle
Tera Roop Balle Balle
Tere Gaal Balle Balle
Dekha Tujhe Toh Mujhe Pyar Ho Gaya
Haye
Tere Khayalon Mein Yeh Dil Kho Gaya...

These 👆 lyrics explain neil feeling for her...

On seeing her for the first time... Neil fell in love with Avni.. he started lost in her thoughts. He just want her in his life.

But when she grew up and the right time came, he confessed his love to her, but she refused him saying that for her he was just her brother's friend and she did not want his love.

Ho Naiyo Naiyo
Ho Naiyo Naiyo
Naiyo Naiyo Mainu Dil Tera Naiyo Chahida
Ho Naiyo Naiyo Mainu Dil Tera Naiyo Chahida
Ho Naiyo Naiyo Mainu Dil Tera Naiyo Chahida
Naiyo Chahida
Ek Tu Hi Mere Naal Naiyo Naiyo Jachda
Ek Tu Hi Mere Naal Naiyo Naiyo Jachda

Main Kudi Punjab Di
Mera Resham Da Rumaal Ve
Hoye Hoye
Hoye Hoye
Hoye Main Kudi Punjab Di
Mera Resham Da Rumaal Ve

Zindagi Bhar Bhulega Na
Kar Dungi Woh Haal Ve
Ho Naiyo Naiyo
Ho Naiyo Naiyo....

Despite her repeated refusals, he did not give up and continued to make her feel special...Because somewhere he had hope that she would accept him one day.

Naiyo Naiyo Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagda
Ho Naiyo Naiyo Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagda
Naiyo Naiyo Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagda
Naiyo Lagda
Tujhe Dekhte Hi Haye Dil Mera Nachda
Ho Naiyo Naiyo Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagda
Tujhe Dekhte Hi Haye Dil Mera Nachda
Ho Naiyo Naiyo Tere Bin Dil Naiyo Lagda

These 👆 lyrics says that whenever he sees her in front of his eyes his heart smile and started dancing 💃

Next Song :- dil dooba


( now imagine avneil dancing like this 👆 Only both of them are on stage )

Hey La La Layyo Hey La La Layyo
Hey La La Layyo Hey La La Layyo
Dil Dooba Dil Dooba Neeli Aankhon Mein Yeh Dil Dooba
Mehbooba Mehbooba Bas Yeh Jaanle Mehbooba
Dil Dooba Dil Dooba Neeli Aankhon Mein Yeh Dil Dooba
Mehbooba Mehbooba Bas Yeh Jaanle Mehbooba
Aashiq Hoon Deewana Hoon Tere Liye Kuch Bhi Kar Jaaonga
Ishq Mein Tere Jeeta Hoon Tere Liye Hi Mar Jaaonga

At a point they both become friends.. And Neil started flirting with her....She also started develop feeling for him But she always refused him due to fear of Raj.

Main Tere Jhase Mein Naa Aaonge O Re Deewane Jaa

Kyon? Neil reacts

Aisi Waisi Bana Ke Baatein Mujhe Naa Tu Uljha... ( It means don't flirt with me I'm not going to melt )

Loot Jaaonga Mitt Jaaonga Dil Tera Jeeth Ke Dikhlaonga
Peecha Na Chodonga Chahe Jitna Tadpa

Neil was also stubborn, despite her love being rejected countless times, he never stopped trying.
And finally one day he won her heart, she accepted him.


Then There was a time come when Avni ready to love Neil.... ready to accept him and his love...Ready to Give a chance to their relationship....
But still she was hesitant to talk about them to Raj...She felt that Raj would not get them married but Neil had also decided that if Raj did not agree, he would take her away from the house with him..... so for that next song 👇

Song name :- chal pyar karegi...

" Chal Pyaar Karegi.... Neil says dancing close to her

" Haan Ji Haan Ji....Avni sings the lyrics with shy smile

" Mere Saath Chalegi "

" Naa Ji Naa Ji....avni do step showing that she's not interested in going with him anywhere.

So, He asked her again

" Oh Chal Pyaar Karegi "

" Haan Ji Haan Ji "

" Oh Mere Saath Chalegi "

" naa Ji Naa Ji "

" Are Tu Haan Kar Ya Naa Kar Teri Marzi Soniyee...
Hum Tujhko Utha Kar Le Jayenge
Doli Mein Bitha Kar Le Jayenge..."

When he sing these 👆 lyrics.. he lift her in his arms in bridal style and twirl her around On which her eyes widen and Simran and Priyal and some more guest standing below shout excitedly for them and Raj smiles seeing them like this.

Then Neil takes her off his arms and she shows some fake anger...

Hum Ghar Mein Kahin Chup Jayenge
Sang Tere Nahin Hum Jayenge...

And with this their dance ends.

But then suddenly in that silence, the lights go off and only one spot light is on Avneil where after dancing with so much energy he lovingly takes her hand in his and then gently starts moving his body along her body, On to the next song, Which explains the feeling they both have for each other.

Akh meri hass deve jadon tenu takk da
Jaan ton vi zyada tu paas mainu lagda

Mere khali haathon ko hai tohfa tu rab da ( You're god's gift to my empty hands )
Tera jaise hor koi ho hi nahi sakda (There can never be anyone like you)

Mere sajdon ko saathi ik tera dar kaafi (Even your doorstep is sufficient for me to pray)
Khuda na koi mainu hor mangda (I don't need anyone else other than you)

Nit khair manga...
Nit khair manga sohneya main teri
Dua na koi hor mangda
( I ask for your well being my beloved..
I ask for your well being my beloved.. I pray for nothing else)

Bikhra hua tha kaanch ke jaisa..
Chhu liya tune toh main sanwar gaya (I was scattered like broken glass... I gathered myself when you touched me)

Umar mein usko ginta nahi main..
Tere bina joh waqt guzar gaya.. (I don't count those moments in my life.. Which I've spent without you )

Jachta nahi hai rang hor koi mainu.. jabse main yaara tere rang rangda...
( No other colour appeals to me... Since I've been coloured in your colour )

Nit khair manga
Nit khair manga sohneya main teri Dua na koi hor mangda
Dua na koi hor mangda

O re diljaaniya jind meri tujhse..
Tere sahare saans hai meri..
( O my beloved, my life exists due to you.. My breaths exists due to you )

Baadal jaisa pyar hai tera...
Sagar jaisi pyaas hai meri...
( Your love is like a cloud... My thirst is like the sea )

Chadh gayi mainu tere ishq di fakeeri...
Teri galiyon mein mera dil lagda... ( I'm intoxicated by your love...My heart loves to be in your streets)

Nit khair manga
Nit khair manga sohneya main teri
Dua na koi hor mangda
Dua na koi hor mangda

They end this song with this 👆 line...
They hug each other.

This song describe avneil feelings for each other...Neil always pray from God for her well being...He don't want anything else from God except her and her well being.
Now Avni is also completely coloured in Neil color.... She only want Neil love nothing else.

They both just want to live their life with each other peacefully with their love.

Everyone stand and clapped for this beautiful couple.

After all this, the host organizes a game for them called Shoe Game.

" Ladies and Gentlemen, let us make this evening a little more beautiful... with some beautiful moments...
Our beautiful couple of the day, can you both come here...." He says to Avneil who is sitting back in their place after the dance performance.

Neil goes on stage holding Avni's hand

The host makes them sit on a chair, showing each other's backs and he says that he will ask them some questions and see how well both of them know each other in their relationship and give the right answers.

" So okay, after my question, if that work is done by the Queen i.e. your future wife, then you should raise the Queen's board and if you do, raise the king's board.....Same is the case with you...If your future husband does that work then you can raise the king's board otherwise you can also raise your own name...."

Both of them understand this game by the host and their family watches them with smiles.

" And yes, these questions have been created by your friends and family, so no cheating..." the host continues, to which both nod.

" And yes, one more rule, both of you cannot look back at each other and see each other's answer, nor will you talk to each other, okay...?"

" Ok " Neil says

" Family members and their friends, you all can also tell me whether their answers are right or wrong..." host says

" Ok." Everyone shouts from below.

Readers can also answer yes or no.. If they know the correct answer, 🌝😉

Avneil sitting position 👇

Instead of shoes, both of them have got boards named Queen and King in this game.

" So let's start the game...first question..
Who among you two loves each other the most?" the host asks.

Avneil smiles and Avni picks up the king board but Neil picks up both queen and king board together because according to him both of them love each other equally but Avni feels that Neil's love is more, that is why she only picks up king board.

" arre, This is cheating... you can't lift both the boards together...sirf ek jawab dena hai...." the host tells Neil.

" We both love each other equally...no more, no less.." Avni and everyone else smile at Neil's answer.

" ok ok but Your soon to be wife had taken your name and your answer also shows that your love is a little more for her..." Neil smiles at this..

" And now from the next question you both can pick up only one board."

" ok, ok " Neil says

" Who is the angriest bird among you two?"

On this question, Neil raises the Queen's board, and Avni raises the King's...

" Oh God...both of them are angry birds..." the host says

" but this is wrong, meri behan ko gussa nahi aata hai...." Raj answers from below

" Bhai, wo sirf mujhe hi pta hai teri behan ko kitna gussa aata hai " Neil replies to Raj due to which Avni gets embarrassed in front of her family...Because it is true that she has never been as angry in front of her family as she is with Neil.

"Who is the most stubborn?" The host asks

Even on this both of them raise the board for each other, because both are stubborn with each other...Yes, Neil is a little less stubborn in front of her and bows down quickly, but when he's angry, he becomes very stubborn.

" Oh God, Anger, stubbornness, you both do everything equally...?" Avneil smiles hearing this, while their family also smiles seeing this tough competition between them.

" Ok, next question, Who is more romantic among you two... I hope this answer will also be in favor of each other from both the sides...No ?"

"Noooo" Priyal screams from below because she knows that Avni is not romantic at all.

And here Neil proudly raises his name i.e. King Board... and Avni also raises King Board...Yes, although Avni tries to be romantic, but Neil's romance is in his veins.

" wah gussa me biwi aage.. pyar me pati aage..." host says

Neil proudly raises his imaginary color

"Ok, next question...who is excited for their honeymoon?"

Neil again shamelessly raised king board...Avni also knows that he's more excited so she also raised king board shyly.

" kise meetha khana jyada pasand hai... ?"

Neil remembers eating Avni's chocolate and Avni remembers Neil eating ice-cream and remembering the same, both of them raises each other's name...And the host is stunned seeing their answers..both know each other so well that all the answers are matching.

" arre, yaar how are your answers so perfect? ​​I have never seen such a perfect couple....Wait I ask some hard questions..."

Avni smile and neil says..ok ok

" Who is better at planning surprises?"

Neil remember how she always surprise him with her romantic surprises, How she came all the way from Bangalore for him, how she got a tattoo of his name to suprise him and many more memories where she made him feel special and recently proposing for marriage

So Neil raised queen board proudly and this time avni too, proudly raised queen board because Neil always appreciated her whenever she plan something for him so she thought Neil raised her name... That's why for matching with his answer she also raised queen board

" uff, again match...? Ok so next question...

" Who made the first move?

" no doubt it's me, me and only me...." Saying this he raises King Board

" hey aap boll nahi sakte " host reminds him

" ok ok " Neil says

And like this avni also raised king board because he confess his love in front of first on her 20th birthday but she refused him and again he proposed her on her 21st birthday and that time she says that ok she'll think about it and give him a chance.

" Who cooks better food ?"

Neil raised king board and Avni too raised king board because he always makes delicious food for her.

" Who takes more time to get ready for outings? Ab ladai hogi " host says on which everyone smiles

Avni smile and raised king board..And Neil raised queen board...

" dono ?"

Avni hear this and turn towards him and says....

" no mujhe bilkul time nahi lagta... Neil hamesha jyada time lete hai..."

" oh please, mujhe yun badnaam mat karo... Mujhe bilkul time nahi lagta.. main 2 mint me ready ho jata hu..."

And on this they started arguing... Host see this and says

" Neil aapki family ne bhi aapka naam diya hai sahi answer me..."

Neil looked at them and they all be like 😎

" huh whatever..."

They again turned around and again back facing each other

Like this host asked many questions and then he asked

" Accha now most important question.... Who says sorry first?

Neil raised king board bowing his head... All laugh on him.

Avni also raised king board ecause even if it is her fault, he says sorry first to make things right between them.

" Who is the crazier one?"

Both raised each other name

" means you both are crazy ( host said this and everyone laugh )"

" Who has a cuter smile?" On this question again both raised each other names

" Who needs more pampering?" On this too, both raises each other name

" oh means you both are still small Kid who need pampering ( their families smile seeing them like this )

Avni feel embarrassed hearing this and Neil smile

" Who is more self-obsessed? Or Who checks themselves out in the mirror the most?"

This time without raising the board Avni speaks king and Neil too takes his name

" chalo aapne maan liya aap self obsessed ho ?

" ab main itna handsome hu toh kya karu..." Neil says on which everyone laugh, avni shook her head but yes he's very handsome and there's no doubt in it.

" Who is never wrong? Neil iska answer soch smajh kar dena ?" The host warns him

" hmm, no doubt my queen is never wrong....saying this he proudly raises queen board....on which Avni smiles "

" Who is most likely to start a fight?"

" He " Avni speaks

" she " Neil speaks

Avni turned to him on his answer and says

" main kabhi ladai start nahi karti " she argued

" yaad karo meri jaan...ladai humesha tum suru karti ho "

" noo, it's you "

" no not at all...main to sorry bolta hu...ladai nahi karta....Like this they again argue little bit and then host says in attempt to stop them

" Ok next question, Who is moodier? Who throws maximum tantrums?

" king 😒" Avni answer

" queen 😒" Neil answer

Host see their face and understand they again going to argue so he hurriedly ask next question...

" Who says 'I Love You' more often?

Avneil raised their both board and smile.

Everyone clap for them and soon their game end.

" no winner because dono ke answer almost same hi the.....so winner is avneil..." the host announces.

" Ok Now let's answer some more questions, both of you...and this time you can speak..." says the host.

" Neil, first question to you... Where did you first see Avni and what was she wearing that day..." Neil smiles on this question.

" It was my first day of 11th in my new school...it was break time...she was smiling happily in the corridor with some of her friends and at that time she was in her school uniform, with two loose braids..." Neil gives his answer to which Avni smiles hearing his detailing.

" Oh, it means your story starts from school itself?" asks the host, unknown to their love story.

"No, she had said yes 3 years ago...What started from there was one-sided..." Everyone smiled at his reply that this man had waited so long for her.

" Okay, one last question... what did Avni call you for the first time..." The host looks at Raj by asking this question because Raj had given this question to the host to tease Neil, because he had arranged for their first meeting and he knows very well what Avni had told him.

" No, please wo din yaad mat dilaao..." Neil says hiding his face in his palms

" Neil, aapko jawab dena padega....theek hai hum Avni se puchhte hai.... Avni, what did you address him as for the first time..."

Before answering she looks at Neil because right now both of them are standing face to face...Neil signals her no, indicating please don't say and with the intention of teasing him, Avni smiles and answers everyone along with him......Bhaiya!!!!

Neil closes his eyes in embarrassment because he never wanted to hear this words for himself from her mouth and everyone present there bursts out laughing after avni answers.












Later everyone is having dinner...the girls are somewhere else, here Neil Raj and Vishal are sitting together and eating, And within a short time, Neil and Vishal became good friends, and while having some conversation vishal says

" Neil, how have you planned to celebrate your last night of being a bachelor...?" Neil looks at him at his question.

" Why should I celebrate my bachelorhood...this is also something to be celebrated...I will celebrate my marriage..." Raj looks at the response of his friend who is madly in love.. he's really a gone case.

" Ohh Neil, As it was said in the song, this happiness lasts only for 2 days....being bachelor has its own fun: but it's OK...You will understand this soon, I will definitely call you and ask after your marriage....."

" Take me too to the conference...it will be fun to hear his grief..." Neil looks at both of them annoyingly

" Meri to ek mahine me haalat kharab ho gyi h...." Vishal says

" Mujhe teen saal ho gye hai...." Raj speaks

Although both of them love their wives very much but they try to scare Neil about life after marriage by saying this to which Neil says

" Main jaakar tum dono ki biwiyon ko btaaun...ki tum dono kya bol rahe ho..." Vishal gets scared at his words

" Haan jaa jaa...tera yehi kaam hai, aag me ghee daalna..." Raj says

" Huh!" Neil reacts

" Kiska kaam hai, aag me ghee daalne ka...." Simran asks Raj when she reaches there with Priyal and Neil looks for Avni.

" Yehaan kya baate ho rahi thi..." Simran asks again to which Neil says

" Main btaata hu...ye dono...." Before Neil speaks, Vishal places his hand on his mouth and whispers in his ear.

" bro please, I got married a month ago... I didn't even go on the honeymoon... have some mercy..." Vishal whispers into Neil's ear, on which Neil gives him a look that he should have thought this before saying all that.

" What happened...and Vishal why have you stopped Neil jiju from speaking...?"

" Wo, wo......Avni nazar nahi aa rahi...Neil, use hi dhund rahe the..." While protecting himself, Vishal asks this question to both of them

" Wo avni mom ke saath hai...." Simran answers

" Mom ke saath kyon ?" Neil asks

" Abhi abhi buaa pahuchi hai yehaan....mom unse hi Milwaane le gyi hai Avni ko....aur main yehaan tumhe yehi btaane aayi thi..." She answers looking at Raj.

" Main kabhi unse mila nahi..." Raj speaks

" actually wo mom se thodi naraz thi....meri shaadi ke waqt bhi nahi aayi thi...iss baar pta nahi kaise aa gyi.....lagta hai bebe ne bahut kaha hoga...." Simran says.


















Other side

" Avni beta, ye Neil ki Buaa hai, ragini jiji aur ye Tina inki bhatizi ( Brother-in-law's daughter)." Shweta says, pointing towards a woman of her age and a girl of Avni's age.

Avni hears this from Shweta and bows down and touches Ragini's feet but Ragini does not give her any blessings but Avni does not take this thing seriously and gets up and gives a smile to Tina.

" Hello, Tina " Avni greets her with a smile

"Hello" Tina speaks with her attitude

But suddenly the smile disappears from Avni's face when she hears Ragini's next words.

" Bhabhi, aapne is ladki ke ke liye meri Tina ko Neil ke liye mnaa kiya....aapne Neil ke liye ise Chuna hai meri tina ko chhodkar......" Shweta suddenly gets angry hearing her words...she started as soon as she came

And there, Avni is unable to understand what her words mean by rejecting Tina for Neil....Is it not what she is thinking?

" jiji....aap ye...." Shweta does not speak further when Ragini tells her that she is going to meet her mother i.e. Bebe and saying this she walks away holding Tina's hand.

Avni looks at Shweta and seeing her suddenly pale face, Shweta cups her face and says

" Avni beta, unki baat ko dil se mat lgaana....wo kuch bhi bolti hai...."

" Par maa unke kehne ka kya mtlb tha...kya Neil ki shaadi Tina se honi thi...?"

" Kya....? Bilkul nahi....Neil ne to tumhe humesha se pasand kiya hai " Avni sees Shweta at this

" aur hume bhi wo ladki bilkul nahi pasand thi....wo to bas jiji ne zidd karke ek baar Neil aur Tina ko milwaana chahti thi par Neil ne mnaa kar diya tha, aur fir ye baat kabhi aage badhi hi nahi...." Avni hears this but then she thinks that if there was such a thing then why did Neil not mention it to her even once in all these years.









Later, Neil comes to Shweta looking for Avni.

" Mom, Avni ? Aapke saath thi n..."

" thi to...par abhi maine nahi dekhaa use kahin......shayad kamre me gyi hogi...aur ab tu bhi jaa rest kar...raat kaafi ho gyi hai " Shweta tells Neil and then she also goes to her room and Neil thinks that he should call Avni and ask if she is in the room and can he come there?

Neil calls her but to his surprise, he sees that Avni has disconnected his call instead of picking up the phone.
What has happened to her ?












To be continued........


Lo Ji, Neil ki dulhaniya shaadi se pehle unse naraz ho gyi....ab kya karenge Neil babu ?????

Let me give you some spoilers for the next chapter.

• Some Jealousy Romance
• Avneil's Haldi
• Their Haldi Romance
• Avneil's marriage

The next chapter will be completely long, so it will take me time to write, so the update will now come on Saturday.
But yes, those who are waiting for Avneil's marriage, their wait will end in the next one.

But wait.....will Neil marry an angry Avni?



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