Naruto: My Unique System

By Cloew23

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Sakamoto Tatsuma found himself transmigrated as a war orphan in the world of Naruto, where he quickly realize... More

Chapter 1: First Friend
Chapter 2: Unique System
Chapter 3: Entrance Examination
Chapter 5: Sakumo's Challenge
Chapter 6: Secret TaijutsuĀ·One Thousand Years of Death
Chapter 7: Minato's Envy and Goal
Chapter 8: First Class
Chapter 9: Noticeable Improvement
Chapter 10: Over Training And Exam
Chapter 11: Nara Clan's Ultimate Technique
Chapter 12: Tatsuma vs Uchiha
Chapter 13: Tatsuma vs Minato
Chapter 14: Narrow Victory
Chapter 15: Meeting Tsunade and Jiraiya
Chapter 16: The Problem with Curly Hair
Chapter 17: Learning From Jiraiya
Chapter 18: Ninjutsu Scrolls
Chapter 19: Copying Homework Proved Useful!
Chapter 20: The Deconstruction Learning Method of Ninjutsu
Chapter 21: Second Semester
Chapter 22: The significance of Invinting Someone to a meal
Chapter 23: The Nara's Unique Jutsu
Chapter 24: News of Transfer Student
Chapter 25: Panel Upgrade
Chapter 26: Tatsuma Never Breaks Character
Chapter 27: Mito's Advice
Chapter 28: When The Fat Cats Bite Back!
Chapter 29: Mito's Selective Memory
Chapter 30: Hitting three birds with one stone
Chapter 31: Pondering Early Graduation
Chapter 32: Reason For War
Chapter 33: Whirlpool Country's destruction
Chapter 34: Applying For Early Graduation
Chapter 35: Genin Exam Rules
Chapter 36: Tatsuma VS Kushina
Chapter 37: Why Are You Targeting Me?
Chapter 38: Using The Rules Against Orochimaru
Chapter 39: Orochimaru's Gaze!
Chapter 40: Tatsuma and Minato VS Orochimaru
Chapter 41: Reporting To The Hokage
Chapter 42: Jonin Team Leader and Sensei
Chapter 43: Chakra Attributes and First Mission
Chapter 44: Darkness of The Ninja World
Chapter 45:Nightclub
Chapter 46: Tatsuma Trolling Minato
Chapter 47: The Best Hunters Often Disguise Themselves as Prey
Chapter 48: The Longer the Foreplay, the Shorter the Main Act
Chapter 49: Fame Is Deadly For A Ninja
Chapter 50: Getting New Jutsus From Jiraiya
Chapter 51: 6 Months Time Skip
Chapter 52: Tsunade's Doubts
Chapter 53: Gambling With Tsunade
Chapter 54: Mission Details
Chapter 55: Unsaid Rule In Accepting Private Commissions
Chapter 56: Genuine Intentions, Cruel Outcomes
Chapter 57: Men's Romance
Chapter 58: Unique Beast With Unique Features...
Chapter 59: Mito's Amazing Seals
Chapter 60: I Never Cross Dress
Chapter 61: The Senju Clan Is Full Of Fat Sheep!
Chapter 62: New Training Schedule
Chapter 63: Kushina's Bias Unveiled
Chapter 64: Can You Even Pay?
Chapter 65: The Unfortunate Orochimaru
Chapter 66: Sparks Between Two Countries
Chapter 67: Jiraiya's Choice
Chapter 68: Last Minute Changes Are Never Appreciated
Chapter 69: Splitting The Gifts
Chapter 70: Summoning Contract
Chapter 71: Hidden Effects Of Space-Time Talent
Chapter 72: Sakumo's Training Notes
Chapter 73: Request To Join The Battlefield
Chapter 74: Mito's Gift!
Chapter 75: Single People Give The Best Advice
Chapter 76: Exceptional Background Grants Undeserved Positions
Chapter 77: Taking The Initiative
Chapter 78: Trust Your Instincts When You Sense Trouble
Chapter 79: First Kill And Rasengan
Chapter 80: Personal Unique Talent
Chapter 81: Declaring War
Chapter 82: Minato's Request
Chapter 83: Orochimaru's Wisdom
Chapter 84: Learning From Orochimaru
Chapter 85: Result Of Having Two Shameless Senseis
Chapter 86: Counter Attacking
Chapter 87: First Battlefield Experience
Chapter 88: Artful Explosion Trap
Chapter 89: Retreat And Goal
Chapter 90: Sore Throat...
Chapter 91: Small World Indeed
Chapter 92: Skyrocketing Strength!
Chapter 93: Unleashed Tatsuma!
Chapter 94: Strength Compensate Skills
Chapter 95: Only You Are Left
Chapter 96: Ample Harvest
Chapter 97: Overwhelming Hoshi
Chapter 98: Defeating Hoshi
Chapter 99: Uchiha On The Rescue
Chapter 100: Hiruzen's Shock
Chapter 101: Don't Say Anything That Isn't Conducive To Unity
Chapter 102: The Lives Of Grassroots Ninjas Matter Too
Chapter 103: Time For Recovery
Chapter 104: Hyuga's Gratitude
Chapter 105: Preparing To Rejoin The Battlefield
Chapter 106: Having Children Might Not Always Be A Blessing
Chapter 107: Discovery Through The System
Chapter 108: Intuition
Chapter 109: The Stains On A Bright Surface Can't Be Hidden
Chapter 110: Return And Rewards
Chapter 111: Memories With A Mourning Filter Are Unreliable
Chapter 112: Nawaki's Talent?
Chapter 113: The Strongest Genjutsu
Chapter 114: Babies Left And Right
Chapter 115: Sometimes People Don't Know How To Vent
Chapter 116: Famous Training Camp
Chapter 117: Helping a Brother
Chapter 118: Sensory Ninjutsu
Chapter 119: One Must Look Forward
Chapter 120: No Right Or Wrong
Chapter 121: Dirty Reputation
Chapter 122: Cunning Onoki
Chapter 123: System Update
Chapter 124: Devine Mind
Chapter 125: Two More Talents
Chapter 126: Fast Growth
Chapter 127: Side Effects
Chapter 128: Tobirama's Inheritance
Chapter 129: Before A Prank, One Must Be Prepared For The Consequences
Chapter 130: Negotiations In The Land Of Iron
Chapter 131: Don't Fail Meaninglessly, Fail For Success
Chapter 132: Those Who Keep Their Promises Are Valuable Everywhere
Chapter 133: Check Up
Chapter 134: Shikaku's Jutsu
Chapter 135: Chunin Exam
Chapter 136: Sensei's Selfishness
Chapter 137: Challenge
Chapter 138: Fighting Everyone!

Chapter 4: The Pair of Prodigies

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"Follow me," beckoned the sensei.

As they ascended the stairs leading to the teaching building, another instructor meticulously examined the entrance exam notices of the two individuals, giving a subtle nod of approval before guiding them up to the next level.

Upon reaching the landing of the second-floor staircase, Tatsuma astutely observed that the waiting students in the corridor were predominantly war orphans, interspersed with a handful of children from more conventional backgrounds.

Continuing their ascent to the third floor, the corridor now hosted a mix of students from ordinary families, accompanied by those donned in Ninja gear, and a select few from prestigious ninja clans.

Upon arriving at the fourth floor, the guiding sensei came to a halt. Tatsuma surveyed the corridor and immediately noted the sparse presence of individuals awaiting their turn. Those in view belonged to esteemed ninja clans and were adorned with a complete array of Ninja gear.

The other sensei stationed at the classroom entrance registered a hint of surprise upon spotting Tatsuma and Minato. Their unexpected presence on this floor suggested an exceptional performance in the Ninja Tool Throwing test, with an average score of nine or higher.

For the descendants of ninja clans, achieving such a score was par for the course, given their early initiation into training, often starting two or three years prior. However, Tatsuma and Minato bore unmistakable signs of war orphans—evident markers of their challenging circumstances and financial constraints.

Even if they weren't war orphans, Tatsuma and Minato hailed from impoverished families. Children in similar situations seldom had the chance to engage in Ninja Tool Throwing, rendering their presence here quite unexpected.

Not only were the senseis from the ninja school observantly appraising them, but the children from esteemed ninja clans were also casting curious glances at the duo. Truth be told, these scrutinizing gazes unsettled Tatsuma to some extent. Despite his circumstances, he had not yet reached the point of becoming indifferent to such judgments, unlike someone more seasoned and mature.

In contrast, Minato appeared unfazed. His eager anticipation for enrollment seemed to overshadow any concern about the onlookers, showcasing a resilience and determination that set him apart.

Leading Minato, Tatsuma came to a halt right at the classroom door nearest to the stairs. Noticing the presence of non-ninja clan children in the vicinity, Tatsuma opted not to impose and refrained from entering the area where the direct descendants of ninja clans were assembling.

Given that the teams had not been officially formed, and new social circles hadn't yet taken shape, there was no urgency to immerse themselves in the burgeoning commotion.

After a brief wait, the senseis stationed in front of the classroom doors, seemingly receiving some cue, synchronized in action. Simultaneously, they swung open the doors and guided the new students into their respective classrooms.

"For this round, we'll evaluate your Chakra refining proficiency. I assume all of you have at least mastered the Chakra refining technique, right?" the sensei from the ninja school quipped, a half-smile playing on his lips as the new students settled into their designated positions.

Upon hearing this, Minato sported a confident smile, but in the next moment, his gaze shifted to Tatsuma, a trace of concern flickering across his expression.

Tatsuma, catching Minato's glance, nodded reassuringly at him. The Chakra refining technique had been included in the enrollment notices, and over the past month, Tatsuma had dedicated himself to continuous practice. While the efficiency might not have reached an exceptional level, it was certainly not lacking.

Chakra is the result of the fusion of spiritual and physical energy. In this world, even those who aren't ninja possess Chakra, with their bodies continuously generating it.

The Chakra refining technique involves deftly manipulating the Chakra within the body and temporarily augmenting it. For novices, this process necessitates the use of hand seals.

However, the hand seal employed is not one of the twelve fundamental seals; instead, it's the Seal of Confrontation.

The Seal of Confrontation marks the initiation of practical combat training for students at the ninja school. It carries tangible significance, assisting ninjas in swiftly refining their Chakra to better navigate the challenges of battles.

"If there are no objections, let the timing commence."

Observing the unanimous agreement in the classroom, the sensei from the ninja school pressed the alarm clock on the podium. Instantly, all the new students swiftly formed the Seal of Confrontation.

Chakra extraction proved to be a challenging task for this freshly enrolled group of students. Recognizing this, the ninja school sensei, after the room fell into a hushed stillness, diligently began assessing each newcomer.

"Phew~"

After a considerable duration, a student from the Sarutobi Clan successfully refined their Chakra. Witnessing this accomplishment, a subtle expression of "as expected" momentarily flitted across the face of the ninja school sensei.

Observing the nod from the student, the sensei reciprocated, and the new member from the Sarutobi Clan also nodded in acknowledgment. A silent understanding hung in the air, indicating that someone in his family had briefed him thoroughly on the process before undertaking the test.

Three minutes elapsed, and Tatsuma finally tuned into the sensation. With each breath, he felt the ineffable blend of spiritual and physical energy. A gentle breeze seemed to materialize around him, delicately tousling his curly hair.

Opening his eyes, Tatsuma directed his gaze towards the ninja school sensei at the podium. The sensei nodded approvingly, a smile gracing his face. Tatsuma then noticed the absence of any visible markings denoting affiliation with a specific ninja clan on the Chunin vest and attire of this particular sensei.

Realizing this, Tatsuma discerned the significance concealed within the sensei's smile and reciprocated with a brilliant grin of his own.

After a brief interval, Minato Namikaze also accomplished the Chakra refinement successfully. Observing Tatsuma's cheerful anticipation, Minato shrugged in a somewhat resigned manner.

Fifteen minutes later, every new student in the classroom achieved success in refining their Chakra. The instructors diligently marked additional notes on the enrollment notices.

"Now, it's time for the final examination—the written test!"

With a smile, the ninja school sensei retrieved a stack of exam papers from beneath the podium. He instructed, "Each of you take one, pass the remaining papers to the students behind you, and the last student, bring the extras up to me."

The distribution of exam papers proceeded smoothly, with each student receiving their respective sheets. The ninja school sensei neatly organized the remaining papers and remarked, "The exam will conclude in one hour. I trust none of you will stoop to the folly of resorting to cheating on these questions."

Listening to the sensei's caution, Tatsuma perused the exam paper. It appeared straightforward, featuring basic written queries that included the memorization of the fundamental twelve hand seals of Ninjutsu, matching hand seal gestures, and a culminating question:

"Centered around the 'Will of Fire,' elucidate your perspective on being a ninja and compose an essay of no fewer than three hundred words."

Reading the last essay question in silence, Tatsuma couldn't help but smirk slightly. Despite his initial disdain for such a query, his hands instinctively started addressing the final question first.

Weaving together dreams, efforts, comrades, bonds, responsibility, and perseverance—infusing the theme with love and peace—Tatsuma swiftly poured his thoughts into the essay. Once he completed the composition, he casually glanced at the clock on the podium before methodically going back to tackle the preceding questions.

After a final check to ensure he had written his name, the alarm clock resounded precisely. The sensei stood up and declared, "Cease answering the questions. Next, submit your exam papers, and then you are free to leave."

"Tomorrow morning at 7 a.m., the school gates will open. You can come and check your assigned classes. Remember, classes commence promptly at 8 a.m., so ensure you're punctual."

Tatsuma observed attentively as the sensei illustrated on the podium, securing the exam paper with his enrollment notice before exiting the classroom alongside Minato. He noted that exams were still in progress in other rooms, particularly on the third and second floors.

Glancing through a window on the second floor, Tatsuma caught sight of a sensei distributing papers in a nearby classroom. In the midst of his observation, Minato suddenly queried, "Do you want to engage in some training this afternoon, Tatsuma?"

Tatsuma returned to the present, nodding appreciatively. "You're genuinely talented and hardworking. If I let up, I'm afraid you'll surpass me in no time, won't you?"

Minato chuckled, brushing off the compliment. "You keep saying that. I'm just really excited about the official start of school tomorrow. I don't know how to pass the time."

"Haha, no need to explain. I would have gone to train even if you didn't bring it up."

Tatsuma playfully hooked Minato's shoulder, and together, they exited the academy, making their way directly to the third training ground.

In the exam room, the sensei responsible for grading papers attentively examined Tatsuma's test. After meticulously perusing it three times, he couldn't help but murmur in amazement, "Is Konoha on the verge of producing another genius akin to Orochimaru-sama?"

Setting down Tatsuma's paper, he reached for Minato Namikaze's test and once more expressed his astonishment, "No, we have two geniuses here!"

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