ADMIRING LOVE

By Richaa_Sharma

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[ Part 1 of Admiring Love.] [ He fell first but she fell harder.] [ If you like to read love stories based on... More

Note
Prologue
CHARACTER
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
Teaser
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
A/N
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
chapter 59
chapter 60
chapter 62
chapter 63
chapter 64
chapter 65
Chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
A/N
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
Reviews
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
A/N : Thank you
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
Thank you ❤️
chapter 95
chapter 96
chapter 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
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chapter 61

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" Neil tu to hume bina btaaye aise chala gya jaise agar tu btaa kar jaata to hum tujhe Avni putter se milne jaane nahi dete...." Bebe says this to Neil who is currently having dinner with his family.

After reaching Mumbai in the afternoon, he goes straight to the office where he does some important work and attends a meeting.....Today Raj has gone with Ashish to his office for some work, so due to his not being here he is not able to meet Raj.

And then after all this he reaches home at night where the first thing he has to do is face his angry mother but to his surprise, she doesn't tell him anything. He knows she is angry somewhere at him going to Bangalore without telling her but he did not do any proper planning. He had a desire to meet her and he just went out to meet Avni, he did not even think about what anyone would think.

" Aisi baat nahi thi bebe, main bas..." He replies to Bebe but before he can finish his sentence, Shweta interrupts.

" Bebe, ab ye to Roj ka hone wala hai aane waale 6 mahine tak...ye har dusre din aapko wahi dikhega...." Neil looks at his mother's words and then thinks that this is the right opportunity...His father, mother and bebe are all present, he will express his wish in front of them.

" Mujhe aap sab se kuch kehna hai..." He speaks to which Prakash, Shweta and Bebe look at him.

" Bolo Neil kya kehna hai..." Prakash asks him

" Dad, main Bangalore shift hona chahta hu..." He speaks to which Shweta looks at him and before anyone can say anything, Shweta speaks to him.

" Aur tujhe lagta hai, hum tujhe iski izaazt de denge ?" Neil looks at her

" aur sch bolu tillu to main jyada suprise nahi hui teri is baat se....Mujhe pta tha aisa kuch aane hi wala hai...." She says this, aware of her son's nature.

" toh mom kya problem hai....wo manage nahi kar paayegi sab kuch....wo abhi bachchi hai "

" Accha, kya shaadi ke liye wo bachchi nahi thi....?" He looks at her confused at her words

" jab tu shaadi ke liye hadbadi kar raha tha toh humne bhi yehi kaha tha ki wo bachchi hai, tab tune kaha ki uski umar jrur kam hai par wo bachchi nahi, to ab tere muh se ye chiz kuch at-pati lag rahi hai "

" Mom Mujhe ye sab nahi pta, main yehaan uske bina karunga kya, please mujhe aap sab ki izaazt chahiye, mujhe Bangalore shift hona hai "

" Aur main fir se keh rahi hu, tujhe iski izaazt nahi milegi...."

" Par kyon mom, kya problem hai..? Sirf 6 mahine ki baat hai..."

" wahi tillu, sirf 6 mahine ki baat hai, fir Avni beta wapas aa jaayegi." He sees her on this and Shweta continues

" Aur hume koi problem nahi hai beta, tu jo karna chahta hai kar....
par wo bachchi wahaan kuch sikhne gyi hai...kuch banne gyi hai....agar use teri yaa kisi aur ki madad hi chahiye hoti to wo wahaan jaati hi kyon ?" He sees her at her question

" use agar tere saath hi rehna hota to wo yehi par nahi reh jaati." Shweta continues....

" Wo wahaan kuch karne gyi hai, aur tu wahaan jaakar uska distraction banna chahta hai ?" Neil slightly gets shocked at this....No, he never wants to be her distraction.

" Haan ho sakta hai, abhi avni beta se chize manage nahi ho rahi hongi kyonki uske liye abhi sab kuch Naya hai...use wo kaam karne pad rahe honge jo usne kabhi nahi kiya...par wo aise hi sikhegi....Saying this, Shweta tells her that if someone or the other always remains avni support, then she will never be able to become what she wants to become and also Shweta tells him that if he really wants to do something for her then he should become her strength at this time and not become her weakness by becoming his distraction.
His frequent visits to her place will distract her, whether he accepts it or not.

" Aur insab ke baad bhi agar tujhe wahaan shift hona hai to tu ho sakta hai par itna yaad rakhna, meri izaazt tujhe nahi milegi....meri baat naa maankar tujhe jaana hai to tu jaa sakta hai..." It is not that Shweta does not want both of them to live together but she wants for Avni's good that Neil should not go there.

While there, Neil listens to all the words of Shweta and somehow understands her point, It is not that his mother wants to keep him away from Avni, but his mother cares about Avni that's why she's saying all this.
His mother was right when she said that in a relationship we need to be each other's strength and not our weakness.
And he also knows this but due to his emotional state at this time, he was not able to think and understand anything.

But now after listening to Shweta, he is understanding some things... Obviously if he goes there then she will definitely deviate from her goal.
For the last three days, he did not let her do any work, even if it was related to her office...he kept her busy only with himself.

He changes his mind after Shweta's words because on one hand everything his mother says is right and on the other hand, no matter what happens, he cannot live with Avni by disrespecting his family and his mother.

Even Avni would not like this thing that he would disrespect his family for her, He once made this mistake when his mother did not agree to their relationship, on which Avni explained to him that his mother should have come for him first.

Well, that is a different matter that for him all his relationships are equal and it is his duty to respect everyone, be it Avni or his mother or anyone else, everyone is equal for him but yes at the same time Avni's place is different from everyone else, A place which he cannot describe in words, can only make her feel how much she means to him.

But then he does not stop there further and leaves the meal midway and goes to his room with the excuse of work.

" Shweta tujhe itna bolne ki kya jrurt thi....bechara pehle se kam udas hai ki tune use aur kar diya....." Bebe says as Neil gets up and walks away from them.

" Bebe, ye uske liye jruri tha....pta nahi ise kya ho gya hai....itna serious to maine ise kabhi dekha hi nahi...."

" Tu kya jaanti nahi hai apne bete ko, theek ho jaayega kuch din me..." bebe says

" Bebe agar aisa ho to uske liye hi behtar hai...kyonki ye kuch dino ki baat nahi hai....6 mahine kam nahi hote, wo kab tak aise udas rahega....
aur avni beta ke yehaan wapas aane ke baad bhi wo jo chahta hai wo kuch saalon tak nahi ho sakta....jab tak dono ki shaadi nahi hoti, Neil ko thoda sabar rakhna hoga...."

" Teri baat to sahi hai...." bebe says

" hmm, aur bebe agar ye tillu kuch dino me theek nahi hua to main 2 mint nahi lgaaungi ise 2 thappad maarkar normal karne me..." on this bebe shook her head

" Shweta ji aapko lagta hai ki aap apne laadle ko maar paayegi...." Prakash says that it is because of her pampering that Neil is so stubborn towards her, if he has to take permission for something then he takes it from his mother only, Because he knows that his mother will never refuse him for anything.

" Prakash ji, jrurt padne par main kuch bhi kar sakti hu..." Shweta says on which Prakash and bebe smiles

" Accha ab ye sab chhodo aur haan Shweta abhi jo tune use kaha jo kaha par ek baar us se acche se baat kar lena....use accha lagega."

" Ji bebe "

Shweta says all that because day by day she is seeing how Neil is forgetting to smile without avni, he remains normal only when he is with her and this thing is not right for him, he has always been a cheerful boy and seeing him sad like this is surprising for all of them, they are not used to see him like this.

Everyone knows that he wants to marry her so that he can live with her but Avni does not want this and her decision is also not wrong.
Neil has achieved everything he wanted in his life but for Avni this is just the beginning and at this time he will have to control his desire to be with her, he will have to be patient and at the same time he will have to come out of his sadness so that he can also pay better attention to other things.








" I hope you liked the gift I gave you..." He hears this from Avni..... when he comes into the room he directly makes a video call to her and after talking some other things, she asked him this on which he smiles

" Well, that's what I needed most right now, thanks for giving me your fragrance." He says because he always likes to inhales her fragrance and even if she is not there, he still gets the feeling of her presence, that is why she gifted him her perfume which she wears whenever she is with him.

" Now I am going to apply it on myself every day.."

" hey, no, that's a girls' perfume, what will the people around you think..."

" I don't care, Now you may not be here, but I can feel you near me by wearing your fragrance..." She smiles at his words.

" waise Aapne dinner kiya ?" She says changing the topic

" Haan maine kar liya, tumne kiya ? Tumhari cook aayi...? Don't tell me that you have eaten a sandwich today too?" She smiles lightly at his words.

" Neil, I don't need a cook now, I have learned one or two things well that you have taught me, but yes, Kavita aunty has arranged for a cook today and she cooked my dinner but I don't feel like eating

" Why ? Are you okay...?"

" I don't know, when I came here initially, I was fine but now I feel strange alone....Please come back soon na, I am not feeling well since you left, even if it was just 2 days, I had become used to you, now it will take at least 2 days for me to become normal again.." She says sadly to which he looks at her.

His mother was right. She said that she was fine when she went there initially but he led her a bit astray by going there, now she is not feeling well alone, It will take a day or two for her to become normal, which means this will happen again every time, whenever he go to meet her, she will feel something similar.

" It's ok Lily, apna mood theek karo, I will come to meet you again soon..." he says to cheer her up, on which her face lights up.

" but for now go and eat "

" After some time " she says

" No, go to the kitchen now, eat in front of me..."

" but i don't feel like eating " she said

" I said go..." Admitting defeat to him, she goes to the kitchen, serves the food on the plate and then she places the phone in front of her and takes a bite in her mouth for his satisfaction but then he talks to her until she finishes her meal and says nice things to lift her mood on which she also smiles and he smiles seeing her smile.

So right there, standing at the door, Shweta, who had come to talk to him, sees all this, She sees how he is smilingly talking to Avni, how much difference there was between this Neil and the Neil who was below.
She really feels like beating her son right now, he and his mood swings. She slightly shook his head on him.

But then as soon as Neil disconnects the phone with Avni, Shweta knocks on the door of his room, on which Neil looks there.

" Mom aap ? wahaan kyon khadii hai, andar aaiye...."

" Mujhe lgaa tu mujh se naraz hoga, par tu to khush nazar aa raha hai " Shweta says while coming inside his room

" Naraz kyon hounga mom, aapne kuch galat nahi kaha...." Understanding his mother's words, he speaks, on which Shweta also smiles and then sits on his bed and asks him to sit near her, Neil sits on the floor and places his head in his mother's lap, Shweta caresses his hair and then says

" Neil, sorry beta, but I only want Avni's well being, that's why I don't want you to go there....Let her handle things in her own way, leave her free for these 6 months...tujhe pta hai jitna wo tujh se milegi use teri aur baaki sab ki yaad utni hi aane lagegi....aur fir aise me wo khush nahi reh paayegi."

" Jii mom, main samjh gya hu aapki baat, aur main wahaan nahi jaaunga ab...."

" Main ye bhi nahi keh rahi ki tu us se bilkul mat mil....kabhi kabhi tu jaa sakta hai..." Neil smiles at his mother's words, but then he does not talk about this topic further and then he asks his mother to massage his head, So in this way, while changing the topic, Shweta massages his head while talking about another topic and mother and son enjoy their time together.
















To be continued......

Sorry for this boring chapter

But this boring chapter was necessary before the leap.
I know none of you want to see these 6 months in detail that's why you all will get a glimpse of a small leap in the next update.


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