ADMIRING LOVE

By Richaa_Sharma

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[ Part 1 of Admiring Love.] [ He fell first but she fell harder.] [ If you like to read love stories based on... More

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Prologue
CHARACTER
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
Teaser
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
A/N
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
chapter 59
chapter 60
chapter 61
chapter 62
chapter 63
chapter 64
chapter 65
Chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
A/N
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
Reviews
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
A/N : Thank you
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
Thank you ❤️
chapter 95
chapter 96
chapter 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
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chapter 32

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" Itni laaparwaahi kaise kar sakti ho tum avi " This is what Raj says to Avni when Neil reaches home with her and Raj has reached home before them and despite not wanting to, when he comes home, Neil has to tell everyone the truth because of course Neela questions him as to where and how he got Avni so he had to tell her all about how she crashed his car


" Bhai.....

" Kya bhai... maine mnaa kiya tha n ki jab tak tum acchi trah se driving sikh nahi leti tum yun hi nahi niklogi.... wo to khair tha ki Neil ki car thi... kisi aur ki hoti to.... pta bhi hai kya hota..." At his this words she looks at him

" Aaj se tumhara gaari chalaana band...."
Hearing this, Avni pouts and Neil who was sitting on the couch in the hall suppresses his laughter. Obviously, if he had said this, this girl would never have listened to him but now she has no option.


" Bhai aap aisa nahi kar sakte... agar main chalaaungi nahi to fir sikhungi kaise....?"


" Koi jrurt nahi hai sikhne ki... main hu n... kahin bhi jaana hoga main lekar jaaunga " Raj says


" Aur nahi to kya... aur tumhare liye Neil bhi to hai...." Suddenly hearing this from Neela's mouth, Avni looks at Neela with shock and after hearing this Neil also looks at her.


And seeing everyone's eyes on herself she speaks


" kya ? Maine kuch galat thode kaha... Raj se jyada to Neil, avni ko ghar se pick karta hai, drop karta hai, use jahan jaana hota hai wahaan lekar jaata hai....kabhi shopping to kabhi kuch...
aur gaur karne ki baat hai ki humesha sahi waqt par uski madad ko pahuch jaata hai " Neela says on which all sees her...Ashish is not there because he is in office at this time..


" Aisa bhi nahi hai maa... aaj to itefaq se hum mil gye the..." Neil says


" kya baat hai n... ye saare itefaq tum dono ke saath hi hote hai.... jahaan avni hoti hai Wahaan Neil jrur hota hai... mtlb itefaq se tum pahuch hi jaate ho "

Hearing this, Raj Simran looks at each other... Why is Neela speaking like this

" Maa... Avni says trying to stop her but neela sees her

" Kya maa... aur is me koi buraai thode hai... ye to acchi baat hai.... is se pta chalta hai ki kaise do log itefaq se Jude hue hai...waise to do log dil se jude hote hai par yehaan tum dono itefaq se jude ho... " Hearing this, Neil starts looking down.

" Waise Raj Simran tum dono ko pta hai Neil aur Avni ke saath to itne itefaq hote hai ki tumhari shaadi ke har function me dono ke kapde itefaq se match ho rahe the aisa lag raha tha ki jaise dono ne couple shopping ki hai...."


Raj Simran hears this and Avni looks at Neil... And Raj remembers something and remembers their coincidence that yes indeed the color of each of their clothes was matching.


" Maa aap ye sab kya keh rahi hai..." Raj says


" Arre main to bas ek baat btaa rahi hu... tumhe pta hai tum dono ki shaadi thi par log already in dono ke baare me baat kar rahe the ki kahin humne inka rishta bhi to fix nahi kar diya...." Hearing this, Neil gulps and Avni looks at Neela.


" Par maine unse kaha ki aisa thode kabhi hoga.... Neil kahan aur Avni kahan... dono ka koi match hi nahi hai..." Hearing this Neil looks at Neela sadly but then thinking something he says


" Accha maa ab main chalta hu...." Neil says this sadly while getting up from the couch, which Avni sees and Raj and Simran also see how his face has become sad.

" Thodi der ruk jao.... Avni ke haath ki coffee pikar jaana " Neela says

" Nahi maa... mujhe ghar jaana hai kuch jruri kaam hai... main fir kabhi aaunga " Neil says

" Theek hai bachcha, agar tumhe sch me kaam hai to aaj main tumhe nahi rokungi..." Hearing this from neela, Neil smiles slightly

" Chal tujhe baahar tak chhod deta hu "
Raj says this and then Raj and Simran both come out with Neil


Coming out, Raj sees Neil's car which was badly damaged, he smiles a little after seeing it.


" Neil tune to kaha tha ki... you will not tolerate even a single scratch on your car... how could you tolerate such a big scratch...?" Somewhere Raj knows the answer to this question, yet he asks it to tease Neil, he knows that he tolerated this scratch for Avni.


" Who gave this scratch: That also matters BRO.. Really, if it was anyone else I would have got really angry but on Avni, us par chahte hue bhi gussa nahi aata..." Neil says this to which Raj smiles and there Simran says


" Neil maa ki baat se sad mat hona..." Simran says because she can see the sadness on his face


" Mujhe samjh nahi aata sab yehi kyon bolte hai.... kya main itna bura hu...?" Neil questions Simran but Raj answers instead of Simran.


" Maa ne isiliye wo baat nahi kahi kyonki tum bure ho... maa ke liye to tum perfect ho...." Neil sees him on this



" par shayad unhe bhi wahi lagta hoga jo mujhe lgaa tha... tum dono ki age... tum life me well settled ho par avni usne abhi sirf apna college khtm kiya hai....maybe Maa ne isi sense me kaha hoga ki tum dono ka koi match nahi hai...." Raj complete his sentence on which Neil sees him


" Haan yehi wajah hogi... par pta nahi aaj maa ko kya ho gya tha... aaj wo kuch ajib baate kar rahi thi..."


" Kuch nahi, maa normal hi thi...bas wo kuch chizon ko point out kar rahi thi jise lekar tum dono jyada mat socho..." he says this to Neil and Raj



" Par haan jitni jaldi ho sake sabko btaa do..." Raj says this to Neil On which suddenly Neil's eyes go back where Avni is standing at the door... Neil smiles seeing her, seeing which Avni also smiles.



Raj and Simran see both but then Neil bids goodbye to both of them and gives a smile to Avni and sits in the car and then goes away from there.















Other side

Neil reaches his home

Coming inside the house, he comes to the hall where Shweta Bebe and Prakash are sitting and enjoying their evening tea....And seeing Neil coming home early today, Shweta says

" Arre Neil tu aaj itni jaldi aa gya " Shweta says seeing Neil coming towards her where Neil smiles seeing her and then coming back to her, the first thing he does is give her and Bebe their favorite flowers which he had brought for them.

" Sorry dad, mujhe nahi pta tha aap ghar par honge isiliye maine aapke liye kuch nahi liya..." Sitting in front of the three of them, he says this to Prakash who smiles at him.

" Waise kya baat hai aaj shweta ji aur maa ko ye phool kis khusi me..." Prakash asks him

" Dad kya main bina wajah apni mom aur bebe ko phool nahi de sakta..." Everyone smiles after hearing this from him

" Accha! Tu kuch lega, tere liye coffee bnaawa doon ?" Saying this Shweta is about to call bheema but Neil stops her


" No mom mujhe kuch nahi chahiye... main bas aapse kuch baat karna chahta hu.."

" Haan bol n..." Shweta takes a sip of her tea and speaks while Neil takes a deep breath and speaks without thinking much.

" Mom, mujhe shaadi karni hai...." Shweta who was sipping tea is about to spit it out of her mouth but she forces it down her throat and looks at Neil

" Kya kaha tune ?" Shweta asks him confused

" Mom mujhe shaadi karni hai...." Along with Shweta, Bebe and Prakash also look at Neil while Shweta composes herself.

" Haaye haaye bebe ye aajkal ke bachche, bilkul inme sharm lihaz naam ki chiz nahi hai... aise kaun aakar bolta hai ki shaadi karni hai..." Neil looks at Shweta at this

" Shweta ye tere hi bachche hai, besharm to honge hi " On this statement of Bebe, Shweta opens her mouth and looks at Bebe.

" Bebe main besharm nahi hu..."

" sahi kaha tu besharm nahi...tu to shameless hai..." Bebe tells her and seeing all this, Neil says

" Mom bebe main serious hu...meri baat suniye..." Bebe and Shweta look at Neil for this.

" Par Neil tune to kaha tha ki tujhe to arrange marriage karni thi....main tere liye ladki dekh rahi thi...."


" What ? No mom mujhe nahi karni... mujhe love marriage karni hai jo aapko arrange karwaani hai..."

" Ladki kaun hai ?" Shweta listens to him and asks directly, on which Neil looks at her... His throat becomes dry but then he closes his eyes while gulping and says

" AVNI " Shweta Bebe and Prakash are shocked to hear this.

" Avni ? Kya tu us Avni ki baat kar raha hai jo hum samjh rahe hai yaa fir koi aur avni hai ?" Shweta asks him


" Mom main ek hi avni ko jaanta hu aur haan ye wahi Avni hai jo aap log samjh rahe hai... main avni se pyar karta hu aur us se shaadi karna chahta hu "


" Neil agar tu ye koi mjaak kar raha hai to main btaa doon mujhe ye mjaak bilkul pasand nahi aa raha... tujhe pta hai tu bol kya raha hai...." Neil looks at Shweta for this, why would he joke on such a serious topic?


" Mom main koi mjaak nahi kar raha... main serious hu... main avni se pyar karta hu aur us se shaadi karna chahta hu... main chahta hu ki aap sab iss baare me neela maa aur ashish papa se baat kare..." Shweta is shocked to hear this, since when did he start calling them maa papa


And she is not able to understand how all this has happened suddenly, How long has all this been going on? And suddenly she remembers that they both went on a trip together and whether Avni also loves him ?


" Tu avni se pyar karta hai, wo to nahi karti ?" Neil looks at Shweta on this question


" Wo bhi mujh se pyar karti hai mom...." again all gets shocked hearing his answer

" kya....? Iska mtlb... kahin tune uske saath kuch galat to nahi kar diya aur isiliye shaadi karna chahta hai..." Prakash and Bebe are shocked by this statement of Shweta along with Neil. Really sometimes Shweta says anything without thinking.


" Shwetaaa ye kya bakwas kar rahi hai, soch samjhkar to bol..." bebe says glaring at her

" Bebe main bakwas nahi kar rahi... us bachchi ki umar hi kya hai... mujhe nahi lagta wo shaadi ke liye taiyaar hogi par ye itna hadbada raha hai mtlb jrur kuch gadbad hogi..."


" Mom aisa kuch nahi hai jaisa aap soch rahe ho... main bas ye keh raha hu ki aap sab mere aur uske baare me baat kare wahaan jaakar...bas "

" Bas ? Sorry beta ji par mujhe ye rishta manjur nahi hai..." Neil gets shocked hearing this

" Mom... par kyon.... aap sab ko to Avni pasand hai fir kyon mnaa kar rahi hai "

" Pasand to mujhe bagal waale Sharma ji ki beti bhi hai, us se shaadi karwaa doon teri...?" Neil sees Shweta on this

" waise bhi wo tere umar ki hai...us se ho sakti hai par avni se nahi....." Hearing this Neil sees Shweta

" Mom mjaak mat kariye... aur please samjhne ki kosish kijiye meri baat..."

" Kya samjhun teri baat, tujhe pta bhi hai tu bol kya raha hai... abhi Simran ki shaadi hui hai aur tu chahta hai ki hum wahaan tera rishta lekar jaaye... wo log kya sochenge ye socha hai tune....?" Neil sees her

" aur avni... wo to bachchi hai....tujh se kitni chhoti hai..." Neil sigh hearing this

" Mom wo chhoti jrur hai par bachchi nahi hai ab.... aur please mujhe kuch nahi pta... mujhe nahi pta kaun kya sochega par mujhe Avni se shaadi karni hai " Neil says stubbornly

" Par Neil Shweta ki baat bhi sahi hai... abhi Simran ki shaadi us ghar me hui hai...wo log kya sochenge...aise achank se..."


" Kya sochenge bebe... kya galat hai isme? Aur waise bhi Raj ko sab pta hai aur simran ko bhi...." Shweta gets shocked hearing this and Neil continues

" bas aap logo ko neela maa aur ashish papa se baat karni hai "

" Aur main aisi koi baat nahi karne jaa rahi... aur accha hoga tu avni ko bhul jaa... shaadi-vivaah ko mjaak bnaakar rakh diya hai tumlogo ne..." Neil sees Shweta on this


" Tujhe lagta hai wo bachchi shaadi ke liye ready hai...? Bas apni marji btaa di.... aur pta nahi tu sch keh raha hai yaa jhooth... wo tujhe kyon pasand karegi...?
tum dono ke beech to kabhi utni baat bhi nahi hui hai...." Shweta says this because she has never seen these two talking openly in front of everyone and there Neil sigh hearing Shweta same thing again and again


" Mom, mujhe ab kuch nahi kehna...
main avni se pyar karta hu aur shaadi bhi usi se karunga...to behter hai yun bekar ki chize sochne ke bajaay aap log maan jaaiye.... dad aap samjhaaiye n mom ko....." Prakash, who had been silently listening to them till now, heard this

" Shweta ji sahi keh rahi hai Neil... tum apne liye us bachchi ke saath jabardasti nahi kar sakte... abhi uski umar shaadi ki nahi hai... aur agar hm sab wahaan jaate bhi hai to ye galat hoga...." Neil listens to Prakash... and doesn't try to convince them further.


" Theek hai jab aap log meri baat samjh hi nahi rahe to mujhe aage kuch aur nahi kehna... mujhe jo kehna tha keh chuka hu.... aage aap logo ko jo sochna hai sochiye, mujhe bas aap logo ko ye baat btaani thi, aage aap sab ki marji ise accept kare yaa naa kare..." Saying this, Neil gets up from there and goes straight upstairs to his room.










Later, Neil does not talk to anyone in the house and remains silent in his room.

It is night time, everyone is waiting for him at dinner table, where seeing him not coming, Bebe says

" Bheema jaa Neil ko bol hum sab wait kar rahe hai..." Bebe tells Bheema but before Bheema go, Shweta says

" Main jaati hu bebe " Saying this, Shweta goes from there to Neil's room.





She goes to his room and opens his door without knocking, where she sees him standing near the window and looking outside....He hasn't even changed yet...he's been wearing the same clothes since evening.

" Neil " Hearing his mom voice Neil doesn't turn towards her on which Shweta sigh... She comes closer to him and stands next to him

" Chal, sab dinner table par tera wait kar rahe hai..."

" Mujhe nahi khaana..." Neil answers without looking at her and Shweta looks at him.

" Agar tujhe lagta hai ki tere naa khaane se main teri zidd puri kar dungi to tu galat hai...." Shweta says this to him on which Neil turns to her

" Main zidd kar bhi nahi raha mom...Main bas requests kar raha hu... par mujhe nahi pta tha aap log mere saath aisa karenge.... kya galat hai mere aur avni ke rishte me... kya galat kiya hai maine jo aap is trah react kar rahi hai....? Sirf age hi problem hai n....kya ye itni badi chiz hai...? Pehle ke time me to is se bhi jyada logo ke beech age difference hota tha fir....." Neil not able to complete his line when Shweta interrupts him

" Mujhe pehle aur ab ka kuch nahi pta... bas tu jo chahta hai wo nahi ho sakta aur ab main ye dubara nahi bolungi Isiliye ye zidd chhod aur chal khaana khaa..." Hearing this Neil sees her

" To main bhi ab dubara nahi bolunga mom... jab tak aap log avni ke liye haan nahi bolenge main khaana nahi khaaunga...." Saying this, Neil again turns towards the window, seeing which Shweta sighs but walks away without saying anything further.



Downstairs, she also does not eat food but goes straight to her room, seeing which Bebe understands that this drama between mother and son is going to continue for a long time.









On the other hand, Avni has been calling Neil since evening but Neil's phone keeps switching off.... Simran comes to Avni's room to talk to her somethings but seeing her a little upset, she says

" Avu, kya hua ? Tum paresaan kyon ho ?" Avni looks at Simran on this question.

" Bhabhi Neil ka phone nahi lag raha... wo aaj aunty se baat karne waale the humare baare me par ab unka phone switch off aa raha hai... pta nahi kuch accha nahi lag raha..." Simran thinks something after listening to her

" Is me itna tension lene waali kya baat hai... tum ruko main mom ko call karti hu...." Saying this, Simran calls Shweta and when Shweta picks up her phone, she puts the phone on speaker so that Avni can also listen to Shweta.

And first of all Simran asks about the well-being of her mother and then asks about Neil.

" Mom Neil kahan hai ? Main uska call kab se try kar rahi hu off aa raha hai....?
Hearing Neil's name, shweta remembers that simran also knew everything about his love story

" Abhi wo apne kamre me hai aur tum to mujh se baat mat karo..." Shweta says

" Mom par maine kya kiya?" Simran asks her

" Kya kiya... tumhe sab pta tha ki tumhara bhai avni ke saath kya kar raha hai aur tumne use roka nahi...." Hearing this, Simran gets shocked and Avni also looks at Simran but at this time it is important for her to know about Neil's well-being, that is why she says

" Mom....mom main aapse kal aakar is baare me baat karti hu, abhi ke liye btaaye Neil kaisa hai..."


" Filhaal wo apne room me hai aur khaana nahi khaa raha... use lagta hai ki uski is bachkaani harkat se main uski zidd puri kar dungi...." Avni gets shocked to hear this... whereas she doesn't feel nice after hearing Shweta's angry voice and then after all this, Simran disconnects the phone and looks at Avni who has become more upset after hearing all this.


" Avu tum chinta mat karo... mom to bahut sweet hai, unhe ye sab achank se pta chalaa hoga n isiliye thodi naraz lag rahi hai.... aur tum Neil ki bhi Fikar mat Karo... Kal main wahaan jaaungi mom se baat karne.... abhi tum rest Karo Neil theek hai..." Simran says this to her but after knowing this about Neil how can she rest ?

But for now, she does not show much of her emotions in front of Sirman and smiles lightly.










Later

At Mehra house

After dinner everyone is resting in their rooms.

Simran keeps her head on Raj's chest and Raj is caressing her hair..

" Tumhe pta hai Neil ne aaj ghar par sabko apne aur avni ke baare me btaa diya...." Simran tell him

" Oh, to sabne kya kaha " Raj asks

" Mom bahut naraz lag rahi hai aur Neil kisi se baat nahi kar raha " Simran says this to him on which he thinks something

" Kyon maa ko avi pasand nahi ?" He asks

" Aisa nahi hai.... par shayad mom bhi isi wajah se naraz hai jis wajah se tum naraz hue the...in dono ki age..." Simran says


" Maine to pehle hi kaha tha koi nahi maanenga..." Raj says


" Par Raj hum aise haath par haath dhare to nahi baith sakte... hume kuch karna hoga.... tumhe pta hai mom ne shayad aaj pehli baar Neil ko kisi chiz ke liye mnaa kiya hoga.... aur isiliye wo hurt hai...."

" Koi ni kal tak wo normal ho jaayega...."

" Waise mom mujh se bhi naraz hai "

" Kyon..."

" Kyonki unhe pta chal gya hai ki mujhe aur tumhe bhi sab pta tha par humne unhe nahi btaaya "

" Iska mtlb maa mujh se bhi naraz hai ?"

" Tumse kyon hongi... tum to unke pyare damaad ho n... unka gussa mujhe jhelna padega... jiske liye main kal jaa rahi hu wahaan..."


" Koi ni main bhi tumhe company dunga....main bhi tumhare saath unki daant khaa lunga... waise ab soo jao...."

" Hmm... good night " Simran says and closes her eyes but Raj cannot sleep after hearing all this, he thinks about something which makes him sigh.






















To be continued.............






















































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