ADMIRING LOVE

By Richaa_Sharma

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[ Part 1 of Admiring Love.] [ He fell first but she fell harder.] [ If you like to read love stories based on... More

Note
Prologue
CHARACTER
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
Teaser
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
A/N
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
chapter 59
chapter 60
chapter 61
chapter 62
chapter 63
chapter 64
chapter 65
Chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
A/N
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
Reviews
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
A/N : Thank you
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
Thank you ❤️
chapter 95
chapter 96
chapter 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
Thank you ❤️
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chapter 30

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" Yaar Avni, what have I done... you also enjoyed it, so why are you complaining now ?" Neil tells Avni who is currently sitting angry with him, and after hearing this she glare at him angrily on which Neil gulp but still he musters the courage to talk nonsense.

" I didn't know my tubelight was so romantic..." he said winking at her who's sitting on the bed wearing a highneck sweater and time to time she's just rubbing her nose with tissue while sneezing because her cold has increased more than before... and here he's irritating her.

" I told you not to talk to me, Then why are you talking? " Avni says him who's sitting in front of her on the bed

" Arre yaar ye kya baat hui... itni choti chiz ke liye itna gussa ?"

" Choti chiz ? because of you I had to feel embarrassed in front of bhabhi... pta nahi kya soch rahi hongi...."

" kya sochegi... ye normal hai..."

" Kya normal hai ? Why did you bite me and when you did, why didn't you tell me? At least I could hide it...."

" chahe jitni kosish kar lo mere pyar ko chhupaa nahi paaogi..." Avni again glare at him when he said this on which Neil smiles

" And what is there to say in this, you didn't feel it that time...? " He asks while mischievously on which Avni closes her eyes remembering that feeling again

" Just shut up..."

"Only you can do that..." Saying this he moves closer to her but Avni places her hand on his chest and pushes him away.

" tumhari inhi harkato ke kaaran main tumse dur rehti hu... bhabhi ke saamne kitna ajib lag raha tha... unhe sab pta chal gya "

" Aree to kya ho gya, ek din tumhi ne kaha tha ki pyar kiya to darna kya... aur ab darr rahi ho... oh mtlb samjh gya... tum sirf dialogue maar sakti ho... time aane par wahi bheegi billi bani rahogi...." Avni looks at him angrily at this.

" Main nahi darti kisi se, wo to bas....wo bas...

" Wo bas kya...

" huh, mujhe neend aa rahi hai..." Saying this she immediately lies down on the bed and covers herself well with the quilt.

" Ye accha hai koi jawab naa mile to soo jao... aur dekho tumhare is fake gusse se main nahi darta...." Saying this he also comes from the other side and enters inside the quilt and hugs her from behind on which Avni smiles

" Himmat jyada nahi badh gyi...."

" Haan, aapne hi ye himmat badhaayi hai madam aur ab chahogi to bhi khud ko mujh se dur nahi kar paogi....and now sleep because someone said last night that my warmth can reduce someone's cold...." saying this Neil hides his head in her neck.

" Neil, my cold has increased, please stay away from me... you too will catch cold..." she says worriedly

" Mujhe fark nahi padta, Anyway, my immunity is very strong, nothing will happen to me. So now relax and rest.." saying this he pulls her more into himself and then Avni actually sleeps because of ill health and what would Neil do without her, so to get rid of the boredom he also sleeps with her.


In the evening, both of them wake up from their nap and after freshening up, as soon as they come into the room, Raj and Simran also come to spend time with them...All four are sitting in the room talking and once again due to the stubbornness of all three, Avni has to drink the khada.

" Aap sab kitne bure ho, aap sab coffee pii rahe ho aur mujhe ye kadwa khadaa de diya hai...." She speaks with a crying face on which everyone looks at her but no one shows mercy.

" Maine kaha tha n khayal rakhne ko.... jab pta hai tumhe thand jaldi lag jaati hai to kyon apni bhabhi ke plan me unhe support karne baahar gyi raat me ab ye punishment hai tumhari " Raj says this to Avni

" Hwww bhai, aap kab se mujhe punishment dene lage..."

" Tab se jab se tum apni bhabhi ki team me gyi ho.... Kal tumne pehli baar meri help karne se mnaa kiya... yaad hai na ? I didn't expect this from you..." Raj says this to her faking his fake disappointment

" Haan to aap bhabhi ko humesha paresaan karte ho... to mujhe unki help karni hogi na "

" Tumhe galat jaankari hai beta... ye karti hai mujhe paresaan aur fir pretend karti hai ki sari galti meri hai..."

" Bhai, wo to har ladki ka right hota hai....apni galti naa maanna, aap humse ye right nahi chheen sakte..." On hearing this, Neil gives her a look that it is like that ? On which Avni gives him look yes.

" Rehne do avu ye bhi kam nahi hai....kabhi apni galti nahi maanenge...."
Simran says to Raj and then all four keep talking like this and then suddenly Avni says

" Waise bhabhi you know hm galat time par yehaan aaye hai..." Everyone looks at her confused at this.

" There is a lot of snowfall here in winter, but see hum September me aaye and there is no snow fall here in the month of September but I like snow fall" she said and slightly pouts

" Hahaha... chhenke ruk nahi rahi aur inhe snow fall chahiye...." Neil tells her to which Avni glare at him

" Huh, i said I like snow fall, not that I want snow fall, I can't demand something that can't happen.. "

" oh, Intelligent ho..." Neil says smiling

" Haan, kaash aap bhi hote..." Raj smiles at the way she responds to Neil...he has rarely seen her talking to Neil like this... but no, never he never seen her talking to Neil like this... but he likes to see whatever it is between them.




Later, around 10 p.m.

Today all four also have dinner in the room and then on Avni's insistence, Raj and Simran go to their room to rest because she is not feeling well but these three are worried.


Here in Avneil's room

" Neil mujhe ghutan si ho rahi hai... aaj pure din room se nikli nahi... please thodi der ke liye baahar lekar chalo..." She tells Neil, who is sitting next to her on the bed, doing something on the phone, but after listening to her, he answers.

" Avni no means no....." Hearing his answer she pouts

" Huh, I hate you " she says this to him

" But I love you meri jaan.... aur dekho tumhe bore lag raha hai n... jao balcony me thodi der khadii ho jao accha lagega...."

" huh, Mujhe nahi jaana kahin, main to yehaan Sone aayi hu to Sone jaa rahi hu...." Saying this Avni is about to cover herself with the quilt and lie down but Neil catches her and then lifts her in his arms and brings her to the balcony and there he takes her down and hugs her from behind.

" Hmm, look how nice the weather is..."

" Hmm, to chalo is weather ko baahar enjoy karne chalte hai..." Avni says this but suddenly she gets surprised when she suddenly sees snow fall outside.

" Snow fall ?" her eyes get wide with surprise

" Neil, see baahar snow fall ho rahi hai...."

" Wow, ye to magic ho gya... tumne kaha aur God ne itni jaldi sun li..." Hearing his words she smiles

" Neil baahar chalte hai, please...." she says excitedly

" OK..." Neil answers her seeing her excitement but before going out he makes her wear a cap on which Avni makes a face but wearing this look Uber cute on which Neil cannot stop himself and kisses her cheek and then she is about to open the cap, on which Neil refuses her and replies that there is no carelessness with health.

Both of them come outside the hotel where Avni becomes happy seeing the snow fall.... She leaves Neil's hand and goes a little further and move round and round enjoying the snow and Neil smiles at her while playing with the snow......Avni's eyes go to Neil who is standing far away looking at her... She signals him to come closer to her on which Neil goes closer to her...


" Neil sab rain dance karte hai, hum snow dance karte hai..." Avni says this chirping to which Neil smiles and then holding her hand they both do a small couple dance on which Neil then holds her finger and spins it round and round but as soon as she moves round and round suddenly she looks all around Where snow is falling from the snow machines from all four corners... and then she notices that snow is falling only in the hotel area...And somewhere seeing this thing she understands something and looks at Neil

" Neil ye tumne karwaya hai ?" She asks in disbelief...he is really crazy...what was the need for this?

" No, not at all... ye God ne karwaya hai..."

" Accha toh God ne sirf is area me snow fall karwaya hai..." She speaks with her hand on her waist, on which Neil bites his tongue.

" And yes, those four men are also sent by God... no?" She looks around and says On which Neil sees how those four men at the four corners are operating that snow machine and now what is the use of lying to her ?

" If you like this thing then how can I not fulfill this wish of yours..." Avni looks at him on this.

" And I promise jab humari shaadi hogi n to hum humare honeymoon par aisi jagah jaayenge jahan snow fall hoti ho" Avni smiles at his words.

" Ye deal Pakki hai ? " She shows her index finger to him and speaks to which Neil entangles his index finger with her and speaks

" yes pakki deal..." Avni smiles and hugs him, on which Neil kisses her forehead and then both of them enjoy the fake snow fall.


And on the other hand, Raj and Simran standing in their balcony see this moment and both keep smiling.

" Awww, mujhe nahi pta tha mera bhai itna cute hai... abhi se Avu ki saari demands puri karta hai... usne bas kaha aur bin mausam snow fall karwa di Neil ne....." She says this tauntingly to Raj, to which Raj looks at her in disbelief.

" Maine aapki kaun si demand puri nahi ki hai Madam....?" Raj asks her

" Ummm... ruko yaad karne do..." she smiles remembering

" Kuch adhuri khawishe hongi to yaad aayegi n ?" Raj says proudly tauntingly to her, to which she smiles:

" Wo to hai... I have got the best husband in the world who fulfills all my wishes without saying anything..." Saying this she hugs him

" Hmm... par aaj main avi ki ye wish puri nahi kar paaya jo Neil ne puri ki.... actually mujhe thoda bura lgaa kyonki wo humesha main hi hua karta tha jo avi ki wishes puri karta tha par aaj......

" Ohooo... tumhe to khush hona chahiye ki tumhari avi ko tumhare jaisa koi mil gya... You know, for every girl her first love is her father or brother and it is no less than a good fortune for a girl to get a life partner just like her father or brother..." Simran says

" Aisi baat hai ?" Raj asks playfully

" Hmmm...."

" OK fir to ab Neil final meri avi ke liye..."

" Chalo, finally...." Saying this, she hugs him more tightly and both of them standing there and look down at them outside the hotel who's enjoying the snow together.





Later


Both of them come back to the room where Neel makes her lie down properly and himself lies next to her and suddenly he comes over her and understanding his intention Avni says to him

" Neil no, I'm warning you... you'll really catch cold...

" one kiss won't harm anything, and I was with you the whole day and see nothing happened to me.....so please...." He makes a request to which Avni does not refuse and again both of them shared a beautiful kiss and lost in their moment, both of them do not know when they fall asleep.








The next morning Neil wakes up with a severe headache and when he wakes up he realizes that he has finally caught a cold....After knowing this, Avni makes fun of him by saying that

" Waah aapki to immunity strong thi....? Kya ho gya Mr. strong immunity ko....?" She says, to which Neil sneezes in return.

" Mna kiya tha maine... par meri sunta kaun hai " She says repeating his line What he said when she caught cold.

" Huh, I have no regrets....sneeze....actually the way I caught a cold.....sneezes....is pretty worth it..." after completing his answer he again sneezes and Avni smiles hearing his answer.




Then later, when Raj and Simran come to check Avni, they are shocked to see another patient.

" Ab tujhe kya ho gya ?" Simran speaks worriedly to which Neil is not in a position to say anything because his condition is worse than Avni. He is lying on the bed, covered with a quilt.

" Bhabhi Neil ko bhi cold ho gya hai...aur inhe dekh kar to lagta hai ki inhe breakfast, lunch, dinner sab me khadaa pinaa padega..." Avni makes fun of him and says, on which he gives her a look that I will see you later

" Yaar ab tum dono yehaan se jao... warna 2 aur marij ho jaayenge...." He tells Raj and Simran, on which both of them ignore his joke and then everyone starts taking care of him.



























To be continued.......

















































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