ADMIRING LOVE

Por Richaa_Sharma

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[ Part 1 of Admiring Love.] [ He fell first but she fell harder.] [ If you like to read love stories based on... Mais

Note
Prologue
CHARACTER
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
Teaser
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
A/N
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
chapter 59
chapter 60
chapter 61
chapter 62
chapter 63
chapter 64
chapter 65
Chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
A/N
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
Reviews
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
A/N : Thank you
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
Thank you ❤️
chapter 95
chapter 96
chapter 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
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chapter 24

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" You are making fun of my height..." this is what Avni says to Neil as he rests his chin on her head

This is their second day here and
Both of them are currently standing in a market where Avni is looking at some things at a street side shop and right there, Neil stands behind her and rests his chin on her head to which Avni tells him that he is making fun of her height because it will make her look shorter.

" Arre, where am I making fun of you ? I am just resting my chin on your head, I'm tired of your shopping, so this position is very comfortable."

" Huh, hum abhi yehaan aaye hai and you're tired already...." Neil smiles hearing her words but then instead of answering her he puts his hand forward from behind and holds her by her waist due to which Avni gets nervous

" Neil, hum market me hai..." she warns him

" To kya hua ? yehaan hume koi nahi jaanta, to yehaan tumhe kisi se sharmaane ki koi jrurt nahi hai...." on his words she slightly shook her head

" Accha! bhulon mat, bhai bhabhi yehi hai...dono bas side ki shop par gye hai...." Avni says this, because today all four have come together in this market. But Simran goes to the other side with Raj giveing them both a chance to spend time together.

" dono saath me kitne cute lagte hai....thu thu thu...?" Simran says this who was coming towards them with Raj but stops at a distance when they sees them together like that

" nahi ? dono saath kitne acche dikh rahe hai...ekdam perfect..." Simran speaks again to which Raj looks at her and nods, to which Simran smiles.

" Accha ab chalo yehaan se..." Simran says while putting her hand in Raj's arms.

" Ab kahan.... hum to un dono ke paas jaa rahe the...."

" No, hum thodi der baad yehaan wapas aayenge....ab tum chalo n...mujhe kuch aur shopping karni hai...." Saying this Simran takes Raj away from there again.

And there back to avneil..... hearing her bhai's fear, Neil sighs and removes his hand from her waist but suddenly his eyes fall on the earrings in the next shop and before Avni can say anything when he removes his hand, Neil separates from her and goes closer to those earrings and Avni looks at him

" Kya hua ?" Avni questions him seeing those earings

" Ye kaisa hai ?" He says while showing her an earring.

" It's beautiful, aunty ke liye pasand kar rahe ho ?" Hearing her question, Neil gives her a looks

" No, mom ke liye dad hai.... mom apni ye sab chize dad ki pasand ki hi leti hai " Hearing his words Avni smiles

" Fir ye earings kiske liye dekh rahe ho.... bhabhi ?" Neil sigh hearing her words

" Simmi ke liye uska Raj kaafi hai..." he reminds her

" hmm, wo bhi hai....To fir ye kiske liye ? Meri mom ke liye... unhe impress karne ke liye ?" On her words he sigh again

" No, Neela maa already mujh se impress hai... mujhe unhe aur impress karne ki jrurt nahi..."

" To fir ye kiske liye le rahe ho....?"

" Ab tumne itne naam liye hai, ek do aur naam le lo... shayad jawab pta chal jaaye..."

" Ummm let me guess... Avni ke liye ?" She said smiling on which Neil smiles

" No " he answers on which Avni pouts

" Fir kiske liye ?" She says angrily on which Neil smiles

" Ye meri tubelight ke liye hai... jise ek baar me chiz samjh nahi aati...."

" Oh please main samjh gyi thi... main to bas aapko paresaan kar rahi thi....." Avni says this but immediately bites her tongue but before she can react, Neil's lips are on her cheek feeling this, Avni closes her eyes in shyness and Neil looks at her with a smile as he moves away from her after kissing her cheek

" Ek idea doon ? Tum n mujhe aap hi bolo karo..." he said with teasing smile on which Avni blushes slightly but she composes herself

" Huh, ab hato mujhe meri shopping complete karne do...." Saying this Avni pushes him aside and starts looking at some things again but Neil holds her hand

" Ise try Karo...." Neil says while showing her the earings

" Par Neil mujhe is trah ke heavy earrings nahi pasand "

" heavy kahan hai... ye to aajkal sabhi girls pehnti hai..." Neil says this but soon regrets when Avni says

" Tum baaki girls ko notice karte ho ?" Hearing this, Neil widens his eyes.

" What ? No, I already have such a cute & beautiful girl, why would I notice someone else ( he said cupping her face....) wo toh bas maine ye social media par dekhi thi to maine btaaya

" Accha! Iska mtlb tum girls ko follow karte ho...." Neil gulps at her words

" what, No, not at all... wo...wo bas, bas main......... Neil not complete his sentence when Avni interrupt him

" Wo bas... main...kya..? bhai sahi the... tumhari n sch me bahut girlfriends rahi hogi.... mujhe samjh aa gya... tabhi girls ke baare me itni knowledge rehti hai tumhe...." she said glaring at him

" sirf ek earings lene ko bola aur khud fas gya... but wait ye jealous hai.... wow madam ko pehli baar jealous hote dekh raha hu... thoda aur kar doon...? no no, very bad idea.... naraz ho jaayegi to problem ho jaayegi...." He is thinking all this when Avni speaks again.

" Ab kis ladki ke khayal me kho gye...." Hearing this, Neil comes back from his thoughts.

" Tumhare baare me hi soch raha hu meri maa... shaq karna band karo aur idhar aao" Saying this he holds her hand and pulls her into his arms, Avni looks at him.

" Main inhe tumhe pehna doon ?" Neil says while showing her the earrings to which Avni nods...

Neil smiles and then puts her hair on the left side and wears the earring first in her right ear and then in the other ear in the same manner, but Avni did not like those earrings much, so after trying two or three more jhumkas, she finally liked one earring which Neil bought for her.

Neil fixes the earrings well in her ears and turns them towards himself and then speaks

" waise tumhari jaankari ke liye btaa doon main ladkiyon ko notice nahi karta.... par haan meri life me kuch ladies hai jinhe main admire karta hu... jaise bebe, mom, neela maa, simmi...." Avni smiles at how he didn't forget to mention her mother and Neil continues

" In sabko ko dekh maine tumhe bhi ek alag roop me imagine kiya hai...btaaun ?

Avni nods

" Hmmm...chalo...." Neil says

Saying this, first of all both of them go away from that shop and sit on a bench which is nearby, the place is a bit crowded where people are also shopping, enjoying food on the street side, children are running here and there...Overall everyone present there is having a good time.

Sitting there, Neil takes Avni's hand in his and gives her his answers.

" log kehte hai ki ek ladki sabse jyada beautiful saree me lagti hai to mujhe tumhe bhi ek din saree me dekhna hai...." avni sees him when he says this.

" uske upar ye jhumke... fir maathe par ek choti si bindi, aur fir tumhari in khubsurat aankhon me kajal jo bahut important hai warna nazar lag jaayegi tumhe... " Avni lets out a light laugh after hearing this on which Neil smiles too

" fir thoda niche aate hai, tumhare haathon par.... tumhare in khubsurat haathon me chudiyon ki khankhanaahat sunna chahta hu..." Avni looks at him who takes both her wrists in his hands and looks into her eyes saying this

" Ab thoda aur niche aate hai.... tumhare pairo par... tumhare pairo me main ek Sundar si payal dekhna chahta hu jis me thodi awaz ho... taaki jab tum Chalo to mujhe tumhara pta Chal jaaye.... aur insab ke upar tumhare khule baal..." Saying this he opens her hair which was tied with the clutch, on which Avni looks at him.

" bas itni si hi khawish hai meri " Avni smiles hearing all these things of his, and somewhere she feels shy too... What else does he imagine about her? First the morning dream and now all this.

" Jis din tum is trah taiyaar hokar aaogi, kasam se meri to saansen ruk jaayegi.. " he says again dreamily

Avni smiles at his words but how will Avni let such dreams of his come true? That's why she says teasingly to him

" To fir tumhari saansen naa ruke uske liye main ye sab chize kabhi nahi pehnungi..." Neil looks at her, how unromantic is she...he said this in a romantic way...but she ruined the vibe

" Aur ab main aapko ek baat btaaun... "

Neil nods

" Mujhe insab me se kuch nahi pasand....to mujh se umeed bhi mat kariyega ki main kabhi saree pehnkar aapke saamne aaungi...." hearing her words Neil makes faces

" Come on yaar... ek baar to pehan hi sakti ho ?"

" Nope " she said shaking her head in No on which Neil makes faces

" Aur waise bhi baaki chize ko pehnne ke baare me ek baar socha bhi jaa sakta hai par saree... na baba na.. don't know jo log penhti hai wo log itni lambi saree kaise sambhaalti hai "

Neil listens to all this things of her and makes faces...

" Tumse se to koi romantic vibes ki umeed hi bekar hai..... tumne mere acche khaase romantic sapne ki band bjaa di " he said making faces

" Oh no, I'm not at all sorry for spoiling your dream...aur ab yehaan se Chalo... mujhe bhukh lagi hai...

" Haan, Chaliye madam aapke pehla pyar ke paas...jo ki khaana hai..."

" Bilkul " she said smiling on which Neil shook his head in disbelief

Both of them enjoy some street side food there on Avni's demand and then later come and sit at the same place where they were sitting earlier.

" Neil aaj maine bahut enjoy kiya...." Avni says happily and seeing happiness on her face Neil smiles

" Waise Raj ne call kiya tha... wo log yehaan pahuch rahe hai... toh tumhe aur kuch karna hai yehaan "

" Candy floss " Avni shout all of sudden

" Kya ?" Neil Asks

" Mujhe candy floss chahiye, wo rahi...."
Avni speaks while pointing with her finger and Neil looks towards where a candy floss seller is standing at a distance from them.

" ok, Chalo, saath me chalte hai "

" No, main bahut thak gyi hu... aur nahi chalna, please tum lekar aao "

" Par Avni main tumhe yehaan akele nahi chhod sakta, accha chalo main tumhe apni bahon me uthaakar le chalta hu...." Saying this, Neil is about to bow down to pick her up in his arms but Avni refuses him.

" Neil no, bhai kabhi bhi aa jaayenge...accha nahi lagega... aur tum time waste mat karo... jao lekar aao...." she said stubbornly on which Neil sigh

" Theek hai... par tum yehaah se kahin mat jaana... main abhi aaya...." Avni smiles at him saying ok and then Neil gives her a smile and goes from there to get candy floss for her.

After 2 minutes, Neil reaches the candyfloss seller but before he takes the candyfloss, his phone starts ringing where he sees that Shweta is calling:

He picks up the call but he doesn't hear anything because of the poor network... because they are in the mountains so they don't get the network properly...He goes here and there a bit and talks to Shweta

" Ji mom, ji yehaan sab theek hai.... hum sab theek hai mom...." Neil replies to Shweta when she asks about their well being but then suddenly Neil find some network issues.. to which Neil says

" Mom yehaan network ka thoda issue hai, aapki awaz clear nahi hai....main aapse baad me baat karta hu....." Saying this, Neil disconnects the phone and then goes to the candy floss seller and buy some different colored candy floss because nothing can be said about madam's mood that which flavor she wants at what time.

Neil comes back with candyfloss but is shocked when he doesn't see Avni there.... He wonders where she would have gone....He looks here and there, goes here and there but Avni is nowhere to be seen.

He becomes worried and suddenly bad thoughts start coming in his mind which he brushes away and he puts every thought aside and calls her but her phone comes off but suddenly he feels a hand on his shoulder from behind.

" Avniiiiii " Saying this, he turns back but is shocked when instead of Avni, he sees Raj and Simran in front of him...And seeing him restless like this, Raj says

" tu paresaan kyon lag raha hai... aur Avi kahan hai....?" Raj asks him this question to which Neil looks at him.. his lips are dry due to bad thoughts and his breathing is uneven.

" Neil, avi kahan hai " Raj asks again when he doesn't see Avni around Neil.

" Pta nahi, pta nahi kahan chali gyi hai..." Neil answers him which shocks Raj and Simran.

" Kahan chali gyi hai se mtlb...? aur iska kya mtlb hota hai pta nahi....wo tumhare saath thi toh tumhe kaise nahi pta ki wo kahan hai......." Suddenly Raj's voice becomes angry and Neil doesn't understand what to do now and Raj looks at him angrily at his carelessness.










To be continued.........
























































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