ADMIRING LOVE

By Richaa_Sharma

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[ Part 1 of Admiring Love.] [ He fell first but she fell harder.] [ If you like to read love stories based on... More

Note
Prologue
CHARACTER
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
Teaser
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
A/N
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
chapter 59
chapter 60
chapter 61
chapter 62
chapter 63
chapter 64
chapter 65
Chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
A/N
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
Reviews
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
A/N : Thank you
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
Thank you ❤️
chapter 95
chapter 96
chapter 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
Thank you ❤️
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chapter 23

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By Richaa_Sharma

Next morning


The morning there is a little different for them from every other morning, due to the cold weather their mornings are quite pleasant...the sun rises but the atmosphere remains cool, Meanwhile, the birds fly in the sky with their enchanting voice which is echoing all around.

Raj open his eyes because it doesn't matter whether he is on leave or where he is, he is an early riser, so at a certain time his eyes open automatically.

As soon as he opens his eyes, he sees the love of his life in his arms, curled up in his arms and sleeping peacefully with her face buried in his chest.

He takes a deep breath as her scent hits his nostrils and tightens his grip on her, closing his eyes but then he slightly separates her face from his chest and looks at her beautiful face and then kisses her forehead, and as soon as his lips touch her forehead, Simran also loses her sleep and when she opens her eyes, she finds her husband looking at her lovingly

" Good morning jaana " Raj says smiling when he sees her eyes open, Simran smiles at his wish and while incorporating herself into him, she also wishes him good morning. Seeing her like this, Raj smiles and tells her to sleep more, he is going to take a shower but Sirman stops him and says that she wants to stay with him like this for now, on which Raj smiles and fulfills her wish and stays with her.









Other side

Neil is already awake, his sleep was broken some time ago and as soon as he opens his eyes he sees the face of his special person whose face he has been dreaming of seeing in front of him every day for years... Every day he used to wake up and look at her through the phone but today... today she is in front of him...

He sees that the distance at which both of them slept last night has not completely ended but has definitely reduced a little. There is just a pillow distance between them which Avni is sleeping holding...he feels a little jealous of that pillow too but no problem, soon the time will come when every morning she will be in his arms and she will sleep holding him instead of this pillow.....How much he wanted to remove that pillow from her arms and take her in his arms, but still he doesn't cross that distance even if he wants to...But in his place, lying on half of his body, facing her, he is staring at her beautiful face which is currently sleeping peacefully.

She stirs a little in her sleep and Neil notices this and then soon rubbing her eyes she opens them and as soon as she opens her eyes, she finds a smiling Neil in front of her, seeing whom a beautiful smile appears on her face too.

" Good morning lily...." Saying this, he lifts himself a little from his place and kisses her forehead, feeling which Avni's smile brightens.

" Morning " Avni also wishes him when Neil lies down in his old position again.

Both are looking at each other... then Neil says

" You know, today one of my dreams has come true..." Avni looks at him confused at these words, And to clear her confusion, Neil says further

" To see you so close to me... I have been dreaming for years that I would open my eyes and see you like this in front of me..." Avni shyly smiles at his words

" And see today my dream has come true...you are in front of me, close to me..... Now there is just one more dream, that just like this pillow is in your arms, I should be there every morning and you will see that this dream of mine will also be fulfilled soon...." he says dreamily on which Avni smiles and notices the pillow which is between them.

" Come closer to me...." Avni says to Neil by removing the pillow between them on which Neil looks at her and seeing him not moving Avni says again

" Come closer to me Neil, I want to give you something..."

" What ? I mean what do you want to give me...? Having his expectations low from his tubelight, he questions her when she says this.

" I said come closer to me..." Hearing this, Neil goes a little closer to her but still there remains a little distance between them.

" Thoda aur.... Avni speaks again

" Is se jyada karib aaya to tumhara bhai meri jaan le lega.... aur tum shaadi ke pehle hi vidhwa ho jaogi.... " Avni's eyebrows shrink after hearing his nonsense in the morning.

" Tum apni bakwas band karne ka kya loge.... " Neil slightly smirks at her words

" Maybe a kiss would be enough to shut my mouth.... Neil immediately changes her irritated mood to shy one with his words but then she brushes off and again asks him to come closer to her.

" Thoda sa aur karib... Avni says

" Dekho mujhe tumhare iraade sahi nahi lag rahe... pehle is sarif insaan ko bed par bulaaya aur ab is trah karib aane ko bol rahi ho...." he says mischievously on which Avni smiles

" Ya ya I know tum bahut sareef ho, tabhi to bhai bhi tumhari sarafat se waakif ho tumhe mere saath room share karne se mnaa kar rahe the....." Hearing this, Neil suppresses his mischievous smile and Avni says again

" Waise, bas thoda sa aur karib...." Hearing this, Neil moves closer to her and now there is really no distance between them, their hands are touching each other under the quilt.

Both of them looking into each other eyes and before Neil asks what she wants to give him, Neil's eyes get big when he feels that Avni has given a small peck on his lips.
But this small peck gives like an electric shock in his body when her soft lips touch his but she has only given a peck nothing more than that and after doing this, she gets off the bed and is about to run to the washroom, but in a quick move Neil gets off the bed and catches her hand.

Avni's heartbeat increases. gathering the courage she did it, but now she doesn't have the courage to stay close to him right now... While watching her back, Nil smiles at her initiative... He had never imagined that their first will be from Avni's side. But what kind of kiss was it? She is really tubelight.

Holding her hand, he gently pulls her closer to him and turns her towards him, Avni starts looking down shyly...he sees her like this.... placing his finger under her chin he makes her looks at him


" Kya tha ye ?" On his question Avni blushes but doesn't says anything

" If you keep spoiling my decency like this, I too will not be able to maintain my decency for long....and then I will finish what you have started..." Hearing this, Avni's face starts turning red, and he understands what she is feeling at this moment, she is not saying it clearly but she wants it as much as he does, And without talking much, he asks her....

" May I proceed what you started...?" On this question, both of their eyes meet and Avni slightly nods her head shyly, on which Neil smiles.

She knows that he will not move even a little without her permission, No matter how much he flirts with her, he remains very gentle with her when it comes to touching her and today the way he told her about his dreams, suddenly she felt like giving him something that he doesn't say but wants and that's why gathering the courage she gives him that small peck.

Getting her permission, Neil moves his hand towards her and moving his hand he cups her neck gently with one hand while the other hand rests comfortably on her waist..

Caressing his fingers on her neck, he leans towards her... Feeling this, Avni closes her eyes and Neil also closes them..., he moves so close to her face that his breath falls on her lips, causing her heartbeat to speed up.

But as soon as Neil slightly touches his lips against hers, both of them open their eyes after hearing the knock at the door.

While resting his hand on her neck, he looks at the door in an irritated mood and Avni also looks there but then she pushes him back, He looks at her...


" Bhai.... Avni says in panic, how can she forget that Raj comes to see her every morning after waking up.

" Tumhare bhai ki to..... Neil stops when Avni glare at him

" Tumhare bhai ki to...timing bahut achhi hai.... kya sahi time par aaya hai....." Neil speaks in an irritated voice with a tight smile and both hear the knocking sound again.

" Jao, swagat karo unka...." Neil says this and Avni moves closer to the door...Before opening the door, she takes a deep breath to composes herself from the things about to happen, and then she opens the door and sees Raj in front of her.

" Good morning avi " Raj says, on which Avni moves closer to him and hugs him

" Good morning bhai... " Raj smiles and kisses her hair softly... Simran is still sleeping so Raj thinks why not see Avni once, He hasn't seen or talked to her since last night, so that's why he came here now.

" Maine disturb to nahi kiya.... so rahi thi ?" Separating her from himself he asks on which Avni shook her head in No

" No, main to kaafi der pehle hi jag gyi thi...." on which Raj smiles

" Theek ho, tumhe yehaan koi paresaani to nahi ho rahi..." He says because his sister is a little delicate, she gets cold easily.

" No bhai, Actually, I am liking the weather here very much... " Hearing this, Raj smiles and then after thinking something, Raj says

" Neil ? Kya wo abhi uthaa nahi hai...?" he questions, not seeing him anywhere

" Wo...wo....ye... Saying this she turns and looks into the room and is surprised to see him sleeping on the couch and completely covered with a quilt from head to toe.
She wonders how he did it so quickly?

So, something like this happened as Avni turns to open the door, so to appease her brother, he quickly takes another quilt kept in the room, lies down on the couch and covered himself properly so that by looking at his face no one can know that he is pretending.

Whereas when Avni turns towards the room, Raj's eyes also go to the room and he gets surprised to see him sleeping on the sofa, but then he smiles after thinking something.

Happy with Neil's action, Avni turns towards Raj and says

" Bhai aap andar aao n... kab se baahar hi khadee ho..."

" Nahi, ab main jaata hu... tum ready ho jao.... breakfast par milenge "

" OK " on this Raj smiles and then goes from there.






After Raj leaves, Avni closes the door and comes closer to the bed from where she sees Neil lying on the couch....She thinks something and then without saying anything to him, goes to the closet on one side of the room where their bags are kept... And their bathroom is also attached through another door.

She opens her bag there and searches for her clothes to decide what to wear today.She is doing this work when suddenly Neil comes there and hugs her from behind, due to which she gets a little shocked but immediately relaxes.

" Neil, kya kar rahe ho, chhodo ab mujhe....ready hona hai...." Avni says to him

" Saath me hoye ? " Avni blushes at his words, while Neil tightens his grip on her and buries his face in her neck, nuzzling which makes Avni feel a little tickling.

" Jawab nahi diya tumne, saath me ready hoye....waise bhi, you have become quite bold these days....to ye bhi....."

" Ji nahi, bilkul nahi, uski koi jrurt nahi hai....." She turns in his arms and says, Neil looks at her with a pout to which Avni smiles.

" huh, Waise tumhare bhai ne mera jo moment spoil kiya hai n uska badla to main us se lekar rahunga "

" Aur wo kaise loge....?"

" Ek baar tumse shaadi ho jaaye meri.... bada avi avi karta rehta hai... ek mahine tak milne nahi dunga tum dono ko..." Hearing his words Avni suppresses her smiles

" Hasne ki jrurt nahi hai, main serious hu..."

" I know tum serious ho, but tumhare ye iraade bhai ko pta chala to kabhi shaadi hi nahi hone denge "

" Aise kaise nahi hone dega... aur use mere ye iraade btaayega kaun... tum ?" He says thinking something... ye btaa sakti hai use... and on this Avni nods her head yes

" Dhokhebaaz, yehaan main tumse apna dukh baant raha hu, aur tum ye sab jaakar apne bhai ko btaa dogi "

" Ab jo mujhe mere bhai se alag karne ka sochega, uski taarif to nahi karungi n jaakar unke saamne...."

" Mujhe umeed bhi aapse yehi hai...."

" Aur main tumhari umeed kabhi tutne nahi dungi " Hearing her words Neil smiles, seeing which Avni smiles too, and Neil shook his head on her talk... out of no where both have come where, where both were in a romantic mood and now they are talking about all this which makes no sense.

But then Avni speaks keeping all this things aside

" waise Neil, thank you... bhai ke saamne tumne jo couch par Sone ka natak kiya us se bhai happy ho gye...." Hearing her words Neil smiles

" I know use kya pasand hai aur kya nahi..... main aisa kuch nahi karunga jis se wo hurt ho... I know maine use already hurt kar diya hai ye bolkar ki use tumhare life ke decisions lene ka koi right nahi hai...but seriously mere use hurt karne ka koi iraada nahi tha... bas mere muh se nikal gya... I know wo show nahi kar raha but wo meri is baat se abhi bhi hurt hai....
But jaisa log kehte hai... kahe hue sabd wapas nahi le sakte to ab aage se main is baat ka khayal rakhunga ki use aisa kuch naa bolu..."

Hearing his words Avni smiles and moving close to him she hugs him which he reciprocates wrapping his hand around her.









After some time

All four gather to have breakfast... All four sit at a table but Raj goes a little to the side to attend a call, so now they're waiting for him to come

" Neil now I'm warning you... room ki baat to ho gyi... but ab aisa kuch mat karna jis se Raj gussa ho... teri gaari shaadi tak le jaate jaate mera divorce ho jaana hai...." Simran warns him

" Arre koi ni, main teri dusri shaadi karwaa dunga...." on this Avni gives him disbelief look on which Neil says

" Kya ? Kuch galat thode kaha maine..." on which she shook her head...right now she can't punch him for saying this because Simran is sitting with them

" Tujh se mujhe yehi umeed hai bhai... main yehaan tum dono ko ek karne ke liye apne pati se ladti hu aur tu meri dusri shaadi karaane ki planning kar raha hai...." on Simran words Neil smiles and then says seriously

" Nahi yaar... thank you tune sch me bahut kiya hai humare liye...ab aage jo hoga main khud sambhaal lunga... waise bhi ab bas family ko hi to mnaana hai... mnaa lunga...." he said biting his nails thinking their reaction

" Sab maan jaayenge, don't worry " Simran says looking at both on which Avni slightly smiles but Neil again says

" hmm, waise ab tu Raj se mat ladna.... bechara bahut paresaan ho jaata hai... waise bhi tera Raj se ladna mere mama banne ke raaste me rukawat ban sakti hi...." Simran widens her eyes... This boy can never be serious, he is serious for a minute, then again his same madness.

" Neil tu pagal hai... kuch bhi bolta hai...." Simran says

" Pagal kya ? Ab mere bachche to is janam me to hone se rahe... he said looking at Avni on which Avni widen her eyes

" Meri gaari bahut slow motion me hai....to mujhe apne bhanjhaa yaa bhanjhi ko hi ghumaane firaane le jaana padega, ab tum log bhi der karoge toh meri life to boring ho jaayegi...." Simran smiles at his words... She knows how much he is fond of children, he picks up anyone's child and starts loving them.

But there Avni feels shy after listening to him, this boy is really shameless.. he says anything in front of anyone...Simran is not juts anyone but still she is his sister and her bhabhi, he does not feel shy before saying something like this.

And Simran notices Avni's face on Neil's talk...She smiles and before she says anything, Raj comes there to become his sister's savior otherwise she knows now after Neil, her bhabhi also says something teasing her.

" Kya baate ho rahi hai yehaan " Raj says while sitting next to Simran

" Mere mama banne ki baat ho rahi hai" he said again shamelessly on which Simran glare at him

" Neil chhup ho jaa ab " Simran warns him

" Kyon, mere liye bahut serious topic hai... mujhe mama banna hai jald se jald, main kuch nahi jaanta..."

" Accha! Chal teri ye wish grant ho jaayegi..." Raj says smiling on which Simran sees him

" Ye hui na baat, chalo tum bhi khush ho jao... jald maami ban jaogi.... " He says to Avni who's sitting next to him, but how can Raj see Neil Babu so happy, that is why he says, reducing his happiness.

" Nahi bro... wo Buaa banegi, maami nahi.... " Neil's smile slows down on which the other three smile but immediately Neil's mind also goes to

" Koi ni main fufaa banne ko taiyaar hu..." Raj shakes his head in disbelief at him and Avni looks down...he did so much planning in one minute

And then with some other things, all four finish their breakfast and then on Simran's wish, Raj leaves Neil and Avni together and both the couples go out separately to see this place.




















To be continued.....

Hope you all liked Neil's planning of becoming a mama...? So do you all want to see Neil become a mama or a fufaa ? 🌚😝




































































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