Avni wakes up to the ringing of her phone lying next to her. She picks up her phone with closed eyes and puts it on her ear and says "hello" in her sleepy voice
" Waah, mera sukh - chain, neend - aaram sab chheen kar madam sukoon se soo rahi hai " Hearing these taunting words of Neil, Avni quickly opens her eyes and sees that Neil is on video call.
But like every day, instead of keeping the phone in front of her, she placed it on her ear.
She sits straight and places her phone in front of her where she sees a grumpy Neil looking at her...
" Aap ?"
" Nahi mera bhoot " Neil answers her question looking at her from the other side
" Par aap to gussa the, baat bhi nahi kar rahe the fir kaise call....
" Haan haan, tum aur tumhara bhai yehi to chahte hai ki main tumse baat naa karu...par main aisa hone dunga nahi....."
" Aapne subah subah mujhe taunt karne ke liye call kiya hai " she said and still she's feeling sleepy
" nahi, maine bas ye yaad dilaane ke liye call kiya hai ki main uncle aunty se baat karne wala hu... so ready rehna... now bye mujhe kahin jaana hai "
" Arre par... Avni is not able to say anything further because Neil disconnects the phone after saying bye but Avni smiles after he disconnects the phone. why is he looking so annoying
Later Avni gets ready for her day and comes down for breakfast but as soon as she comes down the doorbell rings.
She sees that there is no one around, because everyone else has not left their room yet, so she goes to open the door herself.
She opens the door but as soon as she opens the door she gets shocked when she sees Neil in front of her.
" Aap ? " Avni says this and immediately gets a kiss on her cheek which makes her eyes get big... She turns back and sees that no one is there
" Ye aap kya kar rahe hai " She says this and again Neil leans towards her and kisses her cheek and Avni, annoyed by his behavior, holds his hand and takes him out of the house to a corner and speaks to him
" Kya kar rahe hai, pagal ho gye hai... kisi ne dekh liya to ?
" To kya, tumhari galti bahut maaf kardi maine... ab ek aur baar " aap " bolkar dekho, sabke saamne kiss kar lunga "
Avni's eyes widen hearing this... has he gone mad... why is he behaving like this?
" himmat bahut badh gyi nahi hai aapki ? "
" Darta to main kisi ke Baap se bhi nahi hu " He said this and kisses her cheek again because in her last sentence she said him " aap " and there Avni gets annoyed
" huh, aap to baat nahi kar rahe the fir ye sab kya hai....?" Avni says this and again gets a kiss from Neil, Avni looks at him shocked, he's talking less and kissing her more
" Baat nahi kar raha hu, par tumhari sajaa maaf nahi kar sakta " he said slightly smirking on which Avni sees him
" Aapko kya ho gya hai.... aa... She can't say anything further when he again leans towards her and is about to kiss her cheek but Avni glare at him angrily keeping her palm on his mouth
" Kya hai ye sab, aur aap yehaan kya kar rahe ho... haan, aapko pta bhi hai aapki ye harkat kisi ne dekh li to kya hoga....?" Neil sees her on this
" ab chup kyon hai jawab dijiye...."
She says to which Neil tries to say something then Avni realizes that she has kept his mouth shut... She removes her hand from his mouth...But as soon as she removes her hand from his mouth, Neil cups her face in his palm and gives 4 consecutive kisses on both her cheeks, which shocks Avni.
" chaar baar aap, so chaar kiss " He said smirking
Avni gets irritated by his behavior and says in frustration
" Tum yehaan kya kar rahe ho Neil " Finally, fed up with his punishment, she called him 'tum'.
" Ahh, ab jawab dunga " Neil speaks on her question and Avni looks at him.
" To jawab ye hai tumhare sawal ka... ki main yehaan uncle aunty se baat karne aaya hu humare baare me..." Avni gets shocked hearing this
" Kya ? Kal jo kiya wo kaafi nahi tha... aaj fir se...
" Ji haan, fir se... aur ab main tumhe yaad dilaa doon main tumse baat nahi kar raha to please ab mujh se baat mat karo, dur raho mujh se aur mujhe andar jaane do......" Saying this, Neil does not wait for her to say anything and leaves her there and goes inside the house.
As soon as he goes inside, he finds Neela Ashish in front of him, who's about to go at breakfast table
" Aunty " Hearing Neil's voice, both of them look towards him and Avni also comes inside the house from behind him.
Neela Ashish smilingly comes closer to him, then Neil touches their feet and takes their blessings and then Neela speaks
" Accha hua tum aaye, kal bina mile chale gye " neela says this to him
" Isiliye to aaya hu aunty... I'm sorry kal mujhe kuch kaam tha to aapke haath ka khaana nahi khaa paaya... to socha aapke haath ka nashta kar loon ?"
" Ye bahut accha socha tumne... accha ab yahi darwaje par khadee rahoge kya... andar chalo...
" jiii...." Neil says smiling
Avni's heartbeat starts beating fast again seeing him with her parents and then she follows them and reaches the breakfast table where all four of them sit, Avni is sitting on the chair in front of hi. and then Simran and Raj also reach there together.
Neil shows attitude seeing Raj at which Raj rolls his eyes and Simran is happy to see him and hugs him coming close to him
" Waah Neil, subah subah... kya baat hai" Sirman speaks and while Neil says something on Simran words before that, Raj speaks while sitting at the breakfast table beside avni
" Tu yehaan kyon aaya hai ?" Everyone listens to Raj and looks at him.
" Kya matlb hai kyon aaya hai ? Raj ye kya tarika hai baat karne ka Neil se.. maine kal hi tumhe samjhaaya tha, aaj fir se batamizi kar rahe ho... And before this Neela says something else to Raj, Nil says
" Ek mint aunty, jiju ke sawal ka main jawab deta hu... dekhiye jiju, ab ye meri behan ka bhi ghar hai... hai naa aunty ?" He says looking at neela
" Bilkul " neela answers him
" To us naate main apni behan ke ghar aaya hu us se milne, us se kuch baate karne... aur saath hi aunty se milne aaya hu aur unke haath ke bane tasty khaane ko khaane.... aur apne pyare uncle se bhi milne aaya hu.. aur kisi se nahi...." He says looking at Raj and Avni.. Raj also notices this look of his on avni
" Bilkul aur Neil beta ye sirf simran ka hi ghar nahi tumhara bhi hai... tumhara jab man kare aa jaana..."
" Aunty kyon na main yehi reh jaaun... waise bhi aapne humse koi dahej to liya nahi.. to Simran ke liye main hi uska dahej bankar yehaan reh jaata hu...."
On this words of Neil, Simran Neela and Ashish smile but Raj Avni look at each other. He's really gone crazy today, what the hell is he talking about
" Bilkul beta, hume koi dikkat nahi hai " neela says smiling
" how sweet aunty.. aapke is pyar ko dekh aapko aunty bolne ka bhi man nahi karta... aap Bilkul maa jaise ho..."
" maa jaise se kya mtlb hai, main tumhari bhi maa hu..."
" ye baat aapne sahi kahi... fir theek hai aaj se no aunty, only maa... aunty waise bhi bahut odd lagta hai.... " neela smile on this words of his
" Theek hai, tumhe jo bulaana hai bulaa lo..." neela says pressing his cheek affectionately on which Neil smiles
" Theek hai fir aaj se meri do maa... aapko main aaj se sirf maa bolunga... aur ab is naate main uncle ko bhi papa bulaaunga... uncle main aapko papa bulaa sakta hu n ? " He says smiling on which Ashish smiles
" Bilkul beta..." ashish says
While seeing this thing of his, Raj gives him a look... Bhai, how much butter will you apply, leave some for later too.
Whereas Simran suppresses her laughter at all these things about her brother. His brother is really gone mad because of yesterday's rejection. Now he will impress Avni parents, not her brother.
But in all this suddenly Raj speaks
" Accha, agar mere maa papa ko bhi tum maa papa bulaaoge... to fir is naate meri behan ko bhi apni behan maan lo... use kyon side kar diya " Raj speaks on which Neil eyes get widen and Avni's too and Simran about to laugh but controlled
And there seeing Raj mischievous smile, Neil gives him a look and speaks
" Oh no thanks, meri already ek behan hai, jo bahut sweet hai..... main bas aapke maa papa ko churaa sakta hu... agar behan ko chura liya fir aap to rote reh jaoge...." he said with smirk on which Raj glare at him
" Isiliye avni ko tumhari behan hi bane chhod deta hu aur humara jo rishta hai use hi continue karta hu... kyon maa ?" He asked neela on which neela smile
" Bilkul, agar tumne is se iski behan chhen li to pta nahi ye kya karega tumhare saath... ye hume share kar sakta hai, Avni ko nahi " Hearing neela words Neil sees Raj who's giving him look that didn't you hear, what maa said, I don't like to share my sister...
" Accha! Par aunty Avni humesha to aap sab ke paas yaa Raj ke saath nahi rah sakti.. jaise meri behan ko mujhe chhod apne pati ke ghar aana pada, to ek din Avni ki bhi to shaadi ho jaayegi, tab Raj jiju kya karenge.... well main to khush hu apni behan ke liye... Raj khush nahi hoga apni behan ke liye...." Avni hears Neil words and sees Raj who's glaring at him and before neela says something on this... Raj speaks
" Tab ki tab dekhenge dost... Filhaal kuch saalon tak meri behan kahin nahi jaa rahi mujhe chhod, to relax... meri chinta mat karo " Hearing Raj words Neil gives him look...that I have also seen how her marriage will not happen.
And before this indirect conversation continue.... Avni speaks in between
" Maa, aap sab ki baat khtm ho gyi ho, to nashta kare... mujhe bukh lagi hai " Avni speaks to stop them on which neela says
" Bilkul, aur neil beta Raj sahi keh raha hai, Avni ki shaadi me abhi bahut waqt hai..."
" Oh ye to bahut achhi baat hai maa " He said faking his smile on which Raj sees him with teasing smile
Avni notices Neil mood and feel bad, But she can't do anything about all this even if she wants to... She convinces Raj but she doesn't know what will happen in future....
And after all this neela speaks
" Sch me tumhare aane se ghar ki raunak hi badal jaati hai, kitne pyaare bachche ho tum " neela says on which Neil smiles
" Kaash maa meri value sab samjh paate" He said looking at Avni on which she sees him.. Raj notices them and speaks
" Maa, ab aapki Neil ke liye taarif khtm ho gyi ho, to kya hum nashta kar le ?"
" Jealous creature " Neil whisper on which Raj rolls his eyes.
Then everyone finishes breakfast with Neil's fun talks and some other things.
Later Neil stays, but he still just sits and talks with Neela and Ashish. He doesn't say a word to Raj and Avni
Avni is standing at a distance, looking at the smile on his face while talking to his parents.
Raj places his hand on her shoulder from behind and Avni looks at him.
" Tum dono ki baat-chit nahi ho rahi ?" Raj asks her on which she sees him
" Wo...wo Nahi... aapne kaha tha n ki main unhe naa btaaun ki aap maan gye ho to maine unhe wahin bola ki aap nahi maan rahe to thoda gussa hai "
" Neil aur gussa ? Ye kuch Naya btaaya tumne mujhe.... wo natak kar raha hai " Hearing Raj words she sees him
" wo chahkar bhi kisi se gussa nahi ho sakta... kher jao aur use btaa do ki mujhe tumhare aur uske rishte se koi problem nahi hai "
" Aap unse baat nahi karoge ?" Avni asks him
" Filhaal ke liye tum us se baat kar lo aur hum dono dost ki baat hum par chhod do..." Avni hears this and doesn't say anything further
After a while, after talking to Neela, Ashish and Simran, Neil takes permission from them to go....
He comes out of the house alone : but finds Avni in front of him : ignoring whom he is about to sit in his car but Avni blocks his way
" SORRY " She says on which Neil sees her
" sorry, main bas aap...tumhe tang kar rahi thi raat me... please talk to me "
" Kyon, tum to wahi karogi jo tumhare bhai ne kaha hai... to ab kyon mujh se baat karna chahti ho..... kyon mujh se baat karke use naraz karna chahti ho.... Neil naraz bhi ho jaaye to kya fark padega tumhe.. tumhara bhai naraz nahi hona chahiye...." He said seriously, at this time there's no fun is hidden in his talk
While listening to him, Avni looks at him and before she saying something, Neil speaks
" Main sari baate hasi mjaak me taal deta hu iska mtlb ye nahi hai ki mujhe taklif nahi hoti...... Ye dusri baar kiya hai tumne.... kyon karti ho mere saath aisa... kya ek baar bina dare, apne bhai se ye nahi bol sakti ki tumhe mere saath rahna hai... tumhe pta hai ki tum ek baar bologi to wo maan jaayega.. par nahi...tumne aisa nahi kiya..."
Avni listens to him.... she had already told this to her brother that she wants to stay with Neil: but she finds it a bit strange to hear this from Neil. doesn't he this much trust her that she will choose him
Why does he always think that she will leave him. Yes, once she made this mistake, she told him to leave her but after that the things that happened between them, even after that, Neil still doesn't trust her...?
" tumhe mujh par bharosha nahi hai " All she says is Neil looks at her
" Har waqt tum yehi kahte ho ki main tumhe choose naa karke bhai ko choose karungi... mere liye tum aur bhai koi choice nahi ho... mujhe tumhare aur bhai dono ke saath rehna hai, main kabhi dono ne se kisi ek ko choose nahi karungi.... " Neil sees her
" Agar tumhe lagta hai ki main humare baare me serious nahi hu to main kabhi bhai se wo sab nahi kehti jo kal raat kaha maine unhe....
kal raat maine bhai ko sab btaaya ki tum mere liye kya ho, aur bhai ne meri baat samjhi aur unhone meri khusi chuni... unhone tumhe chuna mera liye....." Neil gets shocked
" Kya ?" Neil ask
" Haan.... tum kahte ho ki tum mujhe samjhte ho.... to kya tumhe mujhe dekh kar nahi samjh aaya ki main mjaak kar rahi hu tumhare saath... agar bhai nahi maante to main itni normal rehti ?" Neil hears her question and realizes that yes, this girl who gets emotional on every little thing is normal since last night, he didn't notice it in tension.
" Par theek hai, tumne jab maan hi liya hai ki main tumhe kabhi choose nahi karungi, to ab tum sch me mujh se baat mat karna...." Saying this, Avni goes inside the house and Neil is shocked to see her leaving like this....he was angry with her.... and now she didn't even pacify him and herself went inside after getting angry....
She does this every single time. He is angry, but she doesn't convince him and then gets angry herself.
" Gussa to main tha...? Usns mujhe mnaaya bhi nahi.....
mjaak isne kiya...kya jrurt thi... kal raat hi mujhe ye sab nahi btaa sakti thi...main to sirf uske isi baat par gussa tha par ab ye kyon gussa ho gyi...? Oh God why am I like this... why don't I listen and understand things at the right time... please God give me some patience....
par ab kya karu... andar wapas bhi nahi jaa sakta... mnaaun kaise use ?" He thinks all this and regrets why he didn't listen to her earlier.
To be continued..........
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