ADMIRING LOVE

By Richaa_Sharma

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[ Part 1 of Admiring Love.] [ He fell first but she fell harder.] [ If you like to read love stories based on... More

Note
Prologue
CHARACTER
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
Teaser
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
A/N
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
chapter 59
chapter 60
chapter 61
chapter 62
chapter 63
chapter 64
chapter 65
Chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
A/N
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
Reviews
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
A/N : Thank you
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
Thank you ❤️
chapter 95
chapter 96
chapter 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
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chapter 17

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Raj comes into the room, after talking to Avni he comes into the room, seeing which Simran immediately goes to the washroom to change to avoid any kind of conversation with him

Raj is sitting on the bed waiting for her, she comes after changing but without looking at him she comes to her side and starts going to the sofa with her pillow.... Raj gets shocked seeing this.. for God's sake, only 2 days have passed since the wedding and madam has started throwing tantrums.

" Kya kar rahi ho ?" Seeing her going on the sofa, Raj asks which Simran royally ignores.

" Maine puchha kya kar rahi ho....ye sofe par kyon jaa rahi ho... " Raj again questions him on which Simran does not say anything but goes and sits there and is about to lie down but Raj speaks again

" Main tumse baat kar raha hu, jawab kyon nahi de rahi "

" Par main tumse baat nahi kar rahi hu, isiliye jawab nahi de rahi...." Raj sighs at this and gets down from the bed and goes to her, Simran looks at him

" kyon tumhare saath kya kiya maine ?
Dekho jo bhi hai, main aaj pehle aur aakhiri baar keh raha hu, jo bhi matter hai, hum Avi yaa Neil ke liye ek dusre se nahi ladenge.... so please ye sab drama band karo aur chalo bed par soo"

He says this because no matter what the matter is, he does not want their relationship to deteriorate because of their brother or sister because it is possible that the relationships of others may improve but then whatever has to be spoiled will spoil their relationship...And he doesn't want this.

Avni is very important for him but he cannot fight with Simran for her....Yes, at that time he gave one or two reactions and taunted her a bit. But he cannot hurt Simran for any reason.

And listen to Raj, that they will not fight with each other for their brother and sister... she also understands that these two should not fight among themselves for the sake of both of them...

But now she has started this little fight, so how will she bow down... the drama will have to be completed... Why should she agree just because he said it once... Why should she go back to bed just because he said it once... He will have to convince her.

" Main nahi jaaungi bed par " Simran speaks

" Kyon, meri galti kya hai... galti tum teeno ne ki.... jhooth tum teeno ne bola aur chahti ho ki ab main sabko sorry bolu...?"

" To mat bolo, kisne kaha sorry bolne ko... tumhe lagta hai ki tum sahi ho to tum apni is galatfaimi me raho... aur tumhari jaankari ke liye btaa doon jise tum jhooth bol rahe ho... use jhooth nahi sirf sch chhupana kehte hai " Saying this she get up from the couch

" Dono ek hi baat hoti hai... aur tum maano yaa naa maano tumhare bhai ne galat kiya hai...

" Haan usne sirf galat nahi... bahut galat kiya hai, kyonki wo itna dramatic nahi banaa tha jab tumne use btaaya tha ki tum uski behan se pyar karte ho....wo to bechara khush ho gya tha... yehi galti ho gyi us se " Raj sees her on her this words

" kaash Neil ne bhi yehi reaction diya hota ki tumne uski behan ke baare me socha kaise...? tumne uski behan ko apni behan ki nazar se kyon nahi dekha... par kya kare mera bhai mujh se pyar nahi karta n isiliye usne drama nahi kiya " she says taunting him

" Mera bhai jaanta tha ki jise uski behan ne choose kiya hai wo ladka best hoga... kaash yehi bharosha tumhe avu par hota...." Raj silently listen her

" kuch galat nahi hai unke rishte me siway is chiz ke ki avu bas us se thodi choti hai... warna unka rishta bhi humare jaisa hi hai.... bachchi bachchi bolkar tumne use kabhi bada hi nahi hone diya.... I agree that she is younger than all of us but now she has grown up, there will be many changes in her life.

" Aur rahi baat uske jhooth bolne ki ? tumse sch chhupaane ki ?
to tumhe yaad nahi... tumne use aaj tak kisi ladke se baat karne diya hai... jo bhi ladka uske aas - paas nazar aata tha tum use bhaga dete the... kabhi pitkar to kabhi apni gusse bhari nazron se hi draakar.... kaise aakar wo btaati ki bhai mujhe aapke dost se pyar ho gya hai.....?"

Raj still not try to says anything but listen to her silently

" kya pyar karne ka haq sirf tumhe hai...avu ko nahi.... kya apni pasand se shaadi karne ka haq sirf tumhe hai, use nahi....?

Raj listens to her silently and when she is silent after saying all this, he speaks to her

" Ho gya? " Simran looks at him on his question

" Nahi, kuch lines miss ho gyi ho to unhe bhi yaad karke boldo.... uske baad shayad mujhe bhi kuch bolne ka mauka mile...."

" Huh " Saying this, Simran again sits on the couch.

" Ab jab tumne itna bola hai to kuch meri bhi sun lo.... main Neil aur avni ke rishte ke khilaaf nahi hu... par unhone jis tarike se ye chiz chhupaayi hai us se mujhe narazgi hai..."

" Neil humari baat karta hai... humne kabhi family se yaa kisi se kuch chhupaaya nahi.. jab hume lgaa hum ek dusre ke liye sure hai humne sabko sab btaa diya
Baate wahaan Chhupaayi jaati hai jahan kuch galat ho raha hai... par agar is par bhi main kuch bolunga to main over react kar raha hu...."

" Aaj samjh aaya ki achank se us din tumne kyon kaha ki mujhe Avi ko privacy deni chahiye..... meri behan ne to kabhi mujh se aisi koi complain ki nahi but tumhe uski achank se chinta hone lagi... kyon ? Kyonki hum us din wahaan the aur shayad Neil ko avi ke saath time spent karna hoga... aur tumne ye kahkar mujhe rok liya..."

" Iske saath hi aur bhi bahut si baate ab mujhe samjh aa rahi hai par agar main unsab par react karunga to main over react karunga...so better hai ab main kuch naa bolu "

Simran listens to his points which is probably not wrong, yes they should not have hidden this thing for so many years... Somewhere she is understanding that the way Avni Neil hid their relationship was wrong somewhere.... Raj and she never hid anything so much....Yes, when they felt that now their relationship is more than friendship, both of them first told Neil and then to everyone....Both of them never met secretly but here both of them used to do everything secretly....even their friendship is secret... Yes Avni's fear was right but Raj's reaction is also not wrong.

but now how she said that you are right Raj, that is why she remains silent.

Seeing her silent, he smiles because from her expression he understands that she wants to say something but now she does not understand how to say it....

That's why he comes closer to her and sits next to her on the couch... Seeing this, Simran turns a little and sits showing her back to him...Raj smiles but doesn't continue his drama anymore because the entire argument between them is over that's why he comes closer to her, hugs her from behind, puts his chin on her shoulder and says

" Waise ye speech jo tumne di, aaj likhaa ya pahle se sare points note kar rahi thi... ?" She doesn't say anything on this

" hmmm, Waise main aapke is lecture ke liye ready tha madam, avi ko bolkar hi aaya tha ki mujhe apni biwi ka lecture sunne jaana hai... but itna sab kuch.... Uff, chahkar bhi ab main drama continue nahi kar sakta... to suno maine Avi ko keh diya hai ki mujhe uske aur Neil ke rishte se koi problem nahi hai... wo uske saath rah sakti hai...."

" Kya ? Tum sch keh rahe ho ?" Simran is surprised to hear this from Raj and turns in his arms.

" Ab jitna bura tum mujhe samjh rahi ho, utna bura bhi nahi hu main...I know the value of love.... " Saying this he starts telling her what happened in Avni's room.









Flashback



" Maine puchha kab se chal raha tha ye sab " Raj again speaks on which Avni thought to speak truth now

" On my 21st birthday, he.... Saying that she tells him everything that how and what happened...how he confesses his love but she didn't say yes to him earlier but after gradually understanding him, she said yes on his wedding night, but even before that she loved him."

Raj listens to her and first of all he remembers her lie that how she lied and went out of the house on her 21st birthday and after that her lies probably didn't stop.

"Pyar jhooth bolna sikhaata hai avi" After listening to all this, Raj's first question is to which Avni looks at him.

"Tum khud ko dekh rahi ho tum kaisi ho gyi ho... har baat tumne jhooth kahi, kiske liye Neil ke liye....? kya pyar me log jhooth bolna sikhaate hai... usne tumhe badal kar rakh diya" Avni gets shocked seeing Neil defamed like this.

" Bhai nahi, Neil ne kuch nahi kiya hai aur na hi insab me unki koi galti hai....wo to humesha se aapko sab kuch btaana chahte the Par maine unhe mnaa kiya.." on her words Raj sees her and Avni continue...

" unhone mujhe kabhi jhooth bolne ko nahi kaha par aapke darr se... aap hurt naa ho isiliye maine jhooth bola aur fir ek jhooth se kitne jhooth bol diye maine, mujhe pta bhi nahi chala... I'm sorry bhai par sch yehi hai ki sari galti meri hai, Neil ne kabhi mujhe kuch galat karne ko nahi kaha "

She speaks in support of Neil, because whatever happens, it is not really Neil's fault, today such a big blunder has happened only because of her...Neil told her to tell the truth but due to fear she did not dare and because of her, Neil also had to tell many lies to everyone... If she had listened to Neil and told everything to Raj herself, perhaps all this would not have happened today...

" Waah, usne to sch me tumhe badal diya hai, uski galtiyon par is trah parda daal rahi ho" Raj says this on which Avni sees him

" Bhai aap samjh kyon nahi rahe, Neil ki koi galti nahi hai, main darr gyi thi, mujhe lgaa pta nahi aap kaise react karoge aur wahi sab soch kar main kuch bol nahi paayi...."

" Kyon tumhe mujh par bharosha nahi tha ki main tumhe samjhunga... maine kaha tha n ki maine to khud love marriage ki hai fir mujhe tumhari love life se problem nahi hogi...
us din bhi mere itna sab kahne par bhi tumne kuch nahi btaaya.... mujhe par bharosha nahi tha ? Yaa ab sirf Neil par hi bharosha rah gya hai tumhara ?"

Hearing this Avni closes her eyes....yes she did wrong....she should have once trusted his brother in this matter but now she has no answer to this question.

" Aur tumhe pta bhi hai pyar hota kya hai... do din saath ghoom lene ko, phone par baat kar lene ko pyar nahi kehte, tumhe pta bhi hai wo tumse kitna alag hai..... aur ye bhi to ho sakta hai tum uska sirf attraction ho, attraction pyar nahi hota " on his words Avni sees him

" Bhai aisa nahi hai..... aur ho sakta hai mujhe nahi pta pyar kya hota hai... But I know this for sure that the person who can wait for you for 12 years without any selfishness just to hear a yes from your mouth is something more than love.... It is also wrong to doubt the love of a person who cry just because of the fear of losing you " she said because that day she saw how Neil was crying for her when she asked him to leave her and end it all..... hearing Avni this words Raj sees her

" ho sakta hai mujhe pyar ki samjh naa ho.... But the way Neil treats me is not an attraction....After this, she told Raj that Neil has not been with her since yesterday and not since 2 years ago but he has been in love with her since the time she did not even know the word love.....He never tried to do wrong with her, if she was just his attraction, he would have fulfilled his selfishness by now.

Whereas for Neil, hearing all this from his sister, Raj smiles mentally, doesn't he know how his friend is.... He has more faith in his friend than himself, he is sure that his friend will not make his sister his attraction, will not try to take advantage of her.
He has thought about all these things while spending time alone since evening till now.

But he wanted to hear from Avni's mouth that why she has chosen him... what has he made her feel that she has fallen in love with him...So the answer is....he has made her feel not just love and care but respect which is the first thing in any relationship

He can see how his sister is talking to him today just for Neil.... He has never seen her so fearless and confident and this Neil has probably taught her.... Neil has taught her not to lie but to speak the truth fearlessly... It is his love that Avni is talking like this for him otherwise if it was the old Avni then she would never have opened her mouth, like always...

From all this he understands what Neil means to her now.

But while examining her a little more, he says

" Theek hai, Neil bahut accha hai par ab tum batao agar main kahu ki tumhe use chhodna hoga to kya karogi.... ? I mean mujhe aur us me tumhare liye kaun important hai... kise chunogi tum ?" Avni is shocked at this question of Raj but immediately gives her answer.

" Aapko " Raj is shocked by her answer

" Main aapko chunungi, par bhai I know aapke liye meri khusi important hai aur meri khusi Neil hai to aap mujhe unse alag hone ko nahi kahoge " Raj mentally smiles seeing her smartness...how easily she twisted her words and chose both at the same time.

" Sch me kaafi badi ho gyi ho, bhai ke saath chalaanki ? " Avni tries to hide her smile after hearing this because she also knows how she has answered...she chooses both.

" Theek hai... jab tumhe jawab pta hi hai ki mere liye tumhari khushi important hai fir main aage kya bolu... raho apni khusi ke saath " Avni is surprised at Raj's statement, she cannot believe that Raj agreed so quickly for her and Neil.

" Bhai aap sch keh rahe ho " she asked to just confirm on which Raj slightly nods his head yes

Avni becomes happy and in that happiness she hugs Raj.

"Thank you bhai, you are really the best bhai in the world..."

" Isiliye is bhai par bharosha nahi tha ?"
Avni gets sad after hearing this and separates from him and looks at him holding both her ear

" Sorry "

" Main jhooth nahi bolunga, tumne mujhe thoda hurt kiya hai par it's ok shayad galti meri hi thi main hi tumhe itna bharosha nahi dila paaya ki tum apni ye sab baat mujh se share kar sako"

" Aisi baat nahi hai bhai "

" It's ok avi, don't explain, i understand everything.... waise kaafi der ho gyi hai...so jao... mujhe ab apni biwi ka lecture sunne bhi jaana hai...." Hearing this she sees him

" I'm sorry meri wajah se bhabhi aap se naraz ho gyi hai "

" Uff ab tum apna sorry ka repeat telecast band karo... aur haan ek aur baat Simran ko yaa Neil ko humare beech hui baat mat btaana ki main maan gya hu.... "

" Kyon "

" Kyon ka koi jawab nahi hota... jitna bola hai utna karna... itna to mere liye karogi... ab tum sabne itna jhooth bola hai thoda main bhi sabko paresaan kar loon ? I promise jyada paresaan nahi karunga tumhare Neil ko...." Avni blushes a bit the way he told her ' tumhare Neil ko ' but at the same time she is understanding what he is trying to do on which she agrees to his point.

" Ok main kisi ko kuch nahi btaaungi"

" Good girl, now sleep... good night" Saying this Raj gets up from there and is about to leave but Avni stops him.

Raj turns towards her and Avni immediately gets up from the bed and goes closer to him and hugs him, Raj wrapped his hand around her shoulder and caresses her hair.

" Kya hua " Avni does not say anything on his question but then separates from him and says

" Aaj ke baad aapse kabhi koi jhooth nahi bolungi " Raj smiles at her saying and then wipes the light tears that came in her eyes, kisses her forehead and then leaves from there..Avni sees him leaving and really thinks how lucky she is to have such a good brother.

Flashback End


" I hope your anger has reduced now.
main Dushman nahi hu Neil ka.... I know usne mujhe kitna support kiya hai.... aur main ye bhi jaanta hu ki wo meri behan ko kitna khush rakhega... par fir bhi aakhiri faisla to maa Papa ka hoga... jaisa tumhare bhai ne kaha... jaise abhi usne mujhe ye yaad karwaya hai n, jab baat maa papa tak jaayegi, us waqt main koi help nahi karunga, samjhaa dena apne bhai ko..."

Hearing his all words Simran smiles but hearing his last line she says

" Mera bhai maa papa ko mnaa lega, use tumhari help ki jrurt nahi "

" Accha! " on his this words Simran nods yes.

" To ab bed par sone chale madam...yaa fir dono is sofe par hi soyenge... kyonki kisi haalat me, aapko main akele chhodunga nahi " Simran smiles at his words and then hugs him, Raj smiles wrapped his arms around her.















Other side

After Raj leaves, Avni quickly picks up her phone and calls Neil as she knows that if there is more delay, he will reach here in worry.

On the other hand, Neil who's sitting in his room picks up her phone on a ring and says

" Baat ho gyi, kya bola usne ? Usne tumhe daanta to nahi..." Neil asks as soon as he picks up the phone

" Bahut jyada " Avni says

" Kya ? " Neil ask

" Bahut jyada daanta unhone, kaha ki ab Neil se milogi bhi nahi " she said suppressing her smile

" Kya, aise kaise nahi milogi, wo kaun hota hai ye decide karne wala "

" Neil wo mere bhai hain, wo jo bolenge main wahi karungi "

" Bhai hai to kya hua... main tumhara hone wala pati hu " He reminds her

" Yehaan bhai nahi maan rahe hai aur aap abhi bhi shaadi ke sapne dekh rahe hai "

" haan kyonki mera sapna jald pura hoga..."

" Accha! "

" Jiii.... aur ye kya baat hui jo bhai bolega wahi karogi... dekho maine usi waqt kaha tha bhai aur mujh me chunna pad gya to kya karogi... mujhe pta tha tum use hi chunogi.... par ab main bhi tumhe chhodne wala nahi hu, ab main sidha uncle aunty se baat karunga, i know wo log meri baat samjhenge...."

Hearing this, Avni feels that he may not really talk to her parents out of sadness, so she thought to speak truth to him that Raj agreed

" Neil aap aisa kuch nahi karoge... aur suno meri baat....... She doesn't finish what she said when Neil interrupts her

" No, mujhe kuch nahi sunna ab, tumne kitni asaani se keh diya ki jo tumhara bhai bolega wo karogi... to ab mujhe tumse baat nahi karni "

" Arre par meri puri baat to suno....

" No, mujhe nahi karni baat tumse aur tum ab phone rakho, kabhi baat nahi karunga tumse..."

" Arre but fir shaadi kaise karoge...?

" Shaadi karunga but baat nahi karunga, aur ab phone rakho...." He says this and disconnects the phone sadly... How easily she said that she will do whatever her bhai says... She couldn't fight for her love....he thinks.

Neil is so disturbed by all this that he cannot understand the joke in her words and he utters whatever comes to his mind and hangs up the phone.


Whereas Avni smiles when he disconnects the phone... He is really crazy and a child too.

Everyone in the house calls her a child, but here this 28-year-old man gets sad on little things like a child.





























To be continued.........

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