ADMIRING LOVE

By Richaa_Sharma

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[ Part 1 of Admiring Love.] [ He fell first but she fell harder.] [ If you like to read love stories based on... More

Note
Prologue
CHARACTER
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
Teaser
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44
chapter 45
chapter 46
chapter 47
chapter 48
chapter 49
chapter 50
chapter 51
chapter 52
chapter 53
A/N
chapter 54
chapter 55
chapter 56
chapter 57
chapter 58
chapter 59
chapter 60
chapter 61
chapter 62
chapter 63
chapter 64
chapter 65
Chapter 66
chapter 67
chapter 68
chapter 69
chapter 70
chapter 71
A/N
chapter 72
chapter 73
chapter 74
chapter 75
chapter 76
chapter 77
chapter 78
chapter 79
chapter 80
Reviews
chapter 81
chapter 82
chapter 83
chapter 84
chapter 85
chapter 86
chapter 87
chapter 88
chapter 89
A/N : Thank you
chapter 90
chapter 91
chapter 92
chapter 93
chapter 94
Thank you ❤️
chapter 95
chapter 96
chapter 97
chapter 98
chapter 99
chapter 100
chapter 101
chapter 102
chapter 103
chapter 104
chapter 105
chapter 106
chapter 107
chapter 108
chapter 109
chapter 110
chapter 111
chapter 112
chapter 113
chapter 114
chapter 115
Thank you ❤️
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chapter 14

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It was late night time. In that silence of the night, where everyone is sleeping, two people are talking about their future.

" Neil aapne dekha n, aunty ne bhi mnaa kar diya, ab bhi aap kahoge ki sab easily maan jaayenge... maine kaha tha koi nahi maanega " Avni says this on the phone, which only worsens Neil's already bad mood.

" iss waqt tum mera mood aur khrab mat karo mom ki baat yaad dilaakar... aur ab bas...bahut ho gya.. ab kal hi main sabse pehle Raj ko humare baare me btaaunga aur jrurt padi to baaki sab ko bhi...
pta nahi kya soch kar Mom ne mnaa kar diya par main unki ye baat maanunga nahi " Neil says all this to which Avni sighs.

" Neil ab insab baaton ka kya fayda, aap aunty ke khilaaf to nahi jaa sakte "

" Main puri duniya ke khilaaf jaa sakta hu tumhare liye, par mujhe darr sirf tumhara hi hai ki kahin sbko khush karne ke chakkar me tum mujhe hi naa chhod do waqt aane par... " He still has some doubt that she may not retrace her steps out of fear.

" Neil aapko mujh par bharosha nahi hai ?"

" sorry but yes is maamle me mujhe tum par bharosha nahi hai.... jab bhi kuch hota hai tum is trah ki baat karne lag jaati ho ki humara future kuch nahi hai...
mujhe nahi pta mom ne waisa kyon kaha par main mom se baat karunga aur I know wo sanjhengi meri baat... fir tum kyon is trah ki baat karti ho... aur ab jo ho kal main Raj ko humare baare me btaa raha hu "

" Neil, No, kal nahi "

" Kyon ? Pehle hi tumhe mujhe accept karne me itna waqt lgaa diya, ab sabko btaane me darr rahi ho... aise hi sab slow motion me chalta raha toh pta nahi is janam me main apne Bachchon ki shakal dekh paaunga bhi yaa nahi..." This topic is really serious for him, whereas Avni widens her eyes after hearing this, What is he saying, has he gone mad along with being in a bad mood? She thinks

" Ye kya bakwas kar rahe hai "

" Bakwas kya ? Dekho ab mujh se ye chhupan chhupaai ka khel nahi hoga... mom ne aaj sirf mnaa kiya hai, pta nahi kal kisi se shaadi fix karde... no no main ye sab risk nahi le sakta aur dekho ab tum soo jao mujhe kal ki preparation karni hai "

" Preparation?"

" haan tumhare bhai ke joote khaane ki preparation... Tumhare bhai se humare baare me baat karunga to sabse pehle wo mere picche joota lekar hi bhagega maarne ke liye to uske liye Preparation to karni padegi....." He clear his point

" Par Neil... She is about to tell him again that he should think about it once, but before that, Neil says good night to her and hangs up the phone.






Next morning

Today, Simran's first Rasoi ceremony takes place at Mehra House, Simran is preparing breakfast for everyone in the kitchen...

Neela is also helping her but she goes out of the kitchen for a while and at the same time, Raj comes from behind and hugs Simran, on which Simran gets shocked.

" Kya kar rahe ho, maa kabhi bhi wapas aa jaayegi " This is Simran's first reaction to which Raj sighs.

" kya yaar, jab se shaadi hui hai ek ghanta tumhare saath nahi mil paa raha mujhe... kabhi kuch rasm puri karne apne ghar chali jaati ho... aur ab khaana bnaane me busy... bechare pati ko bhi waqt de do..."

" Insaan ko itna jhooth nahi bolna chahiye pati dev... ek ghante ki baat kar rahe ho... puri raat tumhare saath thi " simran reminds him

" Ab wo to hai, par main raat ki nahi.. din ki baat kar raha hu... din me mera waqt kab aata hai ? "

" Filhaal ke liye ye waqt bhi aapka nahi hai... yehaan se jao... maa aa jayengi "

Saying this, she asks him to leave her, but Raj tightens his hold on her, moves his face to her neck and starts kissing her slowly to which Simran smiles shyly... although she likes this side of him but at this time both of them are in the kitchen and she does not want to be embarrassed in front of anyone for this.

But at the same time she starts melting due to his actions and at one point even stops struggling...Raj bites her neck gently and gives her a deep kiss and she closes her eyes but immediately she opens them in shock: when both of them hear Avni's voice, who comes there calling her bhabhi... but upon coming there, seeing her bhai - bhabhi, she herself gets embarrassed and both see her at the kitchen door...Raj is still holding Simran by her waist because in shock he forgets to let go of her and seeing them like that, Avni says


" Sorry, main baad me aati hu " Saying this, Avni immediately runs from there.

After she leaves, Simran angrily turns towards Raj and before that he says something...

" Nikalo yehaan se " Simran orders him, following which he leaves from there making a puppy face.

He leaves the kitchen and comes to the hall where Avni is sitting with Ashish....
Seeing Avni suppressing her laughter, Raj becomes more embarrassed and runs away from there and Avni smiles at her brother's condition.



Later, Simran serves breakfast prepared by her hand to everyone and everyone appreciates her hand made food very much.

After all this, Simran comes to Avni's room where she asks her what she had come to talk about in the kitchen which she has not finished till now.


" Kya baat hai avu " simran ask her

" Bhabhi Neil "

" Neil ? Kya hua use " sirman ask her

" Bhabhi wo theek hai par neil yehaan aa rahe hai "

" Accha usne mujhe to nahi btaaya.. Waah kya baat hai lagta hai mere bhai me himmat aa gyi hai khulam khulaa tumse milne aa raha hai "

" Bhabhi nahi aisi baat nahi hai "

" Fir kya baat hai... aur tum itni paresaan kyon lag rahi ho "

" Bhabhi Neil yehaan bhai se baat karne aa rahe hai "

" Oh, mujhe lgaa wo tumse milne aa raha hai... par avu wo kuch kaam se Raj se baat karne aa raha hoga us me itna paresaan hone waali kya baat hai..."

" Bhabhi no, wo humare baare me bhai se baat karne aa rahe hai " Avni finally complete her talk

" Kya ?"

" Haan, bhabhi please wo meri baat nahi sun rahe... please aap unhe mnaa karo n wo aaj aisa naa kare " seeing Avni worried face Simran thinks something

" But avu, aaj nahi to kal ye baat karni hai n Raj se.. fir tum itni tension kyon le rahi ho... use aane do.. jitni jaldi ye baat ho jaaye utna accha hai..."

" Par bhabhi....

" Par war kuch nahi aur tum is baat ko lekar itna tension mat lo... Neil manage kar lega aur main bhi to hu yehaan... kuch nahi hoga aur dekhna tum jitna soch rahi ho Raj utna react bhi nahi karega " She says this to Avni but somewhere she knows that Raj will be very angry but to keep Avni calm she says this to her








Later

It is about to be evening, Avni is pacing here and there in tension in her room and suddenly she hears the sound of a car stopping below the house and when she comes near the window and looks down, she sees Neil's car from which he is coming out, she gets shocked, he has really come...He had not come yet so she thought maybe he had changed his mind but he really has come.

Avni immediately comes out of the room and comes down so that she stops him at the door and warns him once again not to do this today....

Neil is about to ring the bell, but before that, Avni opens the door and stands in front of him, seeing which Neil smiles.

" Waah, tumhe kaise pta chala ki main aa gya hu... let me guess... madam mera intezaar kar rahi thi isiliye mere aate hi tumhe pta chal gya..."

" Neil please, bhai ko kuch mat batao.." Ignoring his words, Avni says this.

Now Neil ignores her after hearing this and looks at Neela behind Avni

" Namaste aunty " Avni gets shocked hearing this and turns back where Neela is coming....Passing Avni, Neil moves forward and bows before Neela and touches her feet on which Neela blesses him.

" Kaise ho beta ?" Neela ask him

" Aapke aashirwaad se bilkul theek " on his words neela smiles

" Aunty, Raj ?"

" Wo apne kamre me hai " neela answers him

" To aunty me us se wahi mil leta hu... actually mujhe us se kuch chiz discuss karni hai " he speaks showing the file in his hand

" Theek hai beta, tum wahi chale jao... main wahin tumhare liye kuch bhejti hu.... Avni chalo mere saath " Saying this, Neela takes Avni with her to the kitchen, where while leaving, Avni turns back and sees how Neil is moving towards Raj's room.









Other side

Neil reaches outside Raj's room and knocks on the door seeing it closed

Simran opens the door and is happy to see her brother in front of her and hugs him which Neil reciprocates.

"Wow, what a surprise...." Raj says on his sudden arrival.

"It's not a surprise bro, it's work " Raj looks at Neil confused at what he said.

"Sorry love birds but I have to disturb both of you for a while.... Raj, we have to discuss a file which is important...You are not coming to office, so I came here with work for you."

Simran smiles after hearing this from Neil, he has come to talk to Raj on the pretext of work.

" To tu baahar kyon khadaa hai... andar aa " Raj says this to him

" Haan Neil, aur tum dono baat karo... main baahar jaati hu " Saying this, Simran leaves from there, but not without patting Neil's shoulder and whispering all the best to him on which Neil smiles....

And then after Simran leaves, here Neil comes inside the room







Other side

Simran enters the kitchen where Neela and Avni are preparing something for Neil.

" Maa, main kuch help karu ?" Simran asked while entering into the kitchen

Seeing Simran, Avni asks her signaling her if something happened in the room, to which Simran gives her a non-worrying smile.

" Nahi beta, coffee to almost ban gyi hai... Avni jao aur ye Neil aur Raj ko dekar aao " neela answers Simran and after that says this to avni

" Maa, main ?" She asked because she's now very afraid to go infront of them

" Haan tum... " neela confirm

" Chalo avu main bhi chalti hu tumhare saath " Simran says this to her







Other side

Neil really talks about work with Raj for some time and Raj also carefully looks at the file that Neil had brought.

At the same time, Avni and Simran reach the room and seeing the calm atmosphere in the room, Avni heaves a sigh of relief and prays that Neil will change his mind.

Seeing Avni and Simran, Raj gives them a smile, and then with trembling hands Avni places the coffee tray on the table in front of them but because of her shaky hands, the coffee is about to spill, but just in time, Neil grabs the tray as well as Avni's hand.

" Aaram se " Neil says this and holds her hand, which Avni immediately removes and stands straight.

" Theek ho avi " Raj asks seeing her sudden nervousness.

" Haan bhai main theek hu..." Saying this, Avni leaves the room and Simran follows her... This girl is too scared, nothing has happened yet and she has become like this... she thinks.


Simran goes after her and stops her and says

" Avu relax, kuch nahi hoga..." Avni's eyes fill with tears thinking about the consequences of revealing her secret, while Simran wipes her tears seeing her like this and to calm her down she hugs her and then says

" Chalo, hum room ke baahar khadee hokar sunte hai... Neil kya baat kar raha hai... ok.." Saying this Simran again comes towards the room with her.




While in the room, Neil takes a deep breath and suddenly speaks to Raj who's immersed deep in the file.

" Raj, mujhe tujh se kuch baat karni hai"

" Haan bol na " keeping his eyes on the file he speaks

" Kya main tujh se kuch puchhu "

" tu kab se permission lene lgaa "

" Nahi aisi baat nahi hai... accha ek baat btaa... tujhe kabhi ye pta chala ki maine tujh se kuch chhupaaya hai... yaa tujhe dhokha diya hai to tu Kya karega ? " On hearing this, Raj lifts his eyes from the file, looks at him and smiles.

" toh Main tujhe maaf kar dunga " Neil is shocked by his answer, and Simran and Avni standing outside the door are also shocked.

" Koi bhi dhokha, humari dosti se badi nahi hogi... aur bhai mujhe ye bhi pta hai ki tu mujhe kisi trah ka dhokha dene ka soch bhi nahi sakta " Hearing this from Raj, Neil suddenly starts realizing why Avni was feeling so guilty in hiding their relationship from Raj. He trusts them so much

While saying this, Raj starts reading the file again and Neil, while composing himself, speaks further

" Accha itna trust karta hai tu mujh par ?"

" Tujhe abhi bhi mujhe ye btaane ki jrurt hai ? " Raj answers him on which Neil slightly smiles

" Accha! Ek aur baat bolu " Neil said this

" Haan "

" Agar main tujh se kuch aisa maangu, jo tujhe bes-kimti hai to tu Kya karega ?"

" To main tujhe haste haste wo de dunga..." Raj answers him

" Bol tujhe kya chahiye, tere liye jaan haazir hai " Raj looks up from the file and looks at him with a smile and says, to which Neil smiles.

" Jaan nahi chahiye.... bas... tumhari behan ka haath chahiye.... pyar karta hu main us se "

Finally, turning things around, Neil speaks the main thing, on which Raj's face turns pale and Neil gets a little scared.














To be continued..............

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