Nadan Parindey ( Complete )

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Two brothers who are unaware of each other, completely different from each other, one like hot sun and the ot... Більше

character sketch
prologue
1️⃣ :- business man of the year
2️⃣ :- truth
3️⃣ :- taking care
4️⃣ :- new beginning
6️⃣ :- revelations
7️⃣ :- life lesson for laksh
8️⃣ :- result's celebration
9️⃣ :- dream college
1️⃣0️⃣ :- starting of new friendship
1️⃣1️⃣ :- growing relations
1️⃣2️⃣ :- ayush's lucky charm
1️⃣3️⃣ :- bitter memories
1️⃣4️⃣ - trouble alert
1️⃣5️⃣ :- mission zombie uncle bhagao
1️⃣6️⃣ :- Taking Stand
1️⃣7️⃣ - Unexpect turn of event
1️⃣8️⃣ - Distruction Of Vardhan
1️⃣9️⃣ :- Locked
2️⃣0️⃣ - Collage Trip
2️⃣1️⃣ - Safar
2️⃣2️⃣ - Angry Ayush
2️⃣3️⃣ - Coming Back to Bhaiya
2️⃣4️⃣ - Mountain Of Misunderstanding
Epilogue

5️⃣ :- eventful day

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Next morning atharva wake up because of his alarm and see his brother is sleeping peacefully with cute pout softly snoring cuddling him

He gently free himself and went to freshen up after covering him properly and closing curtains so that sun rays don't disturb his sleep

After freshnup he went to jim for workout as he missed his workout from three four days and he is being fitness freak never miss his workout if it's not necessary

After hour and half he went to his room and get ready for day and went downstairs as he decide to do work from home for few days till laksh get adjusted

When he informed his pa about this he got shocked like hell as it's first time when atharva ask them to handle work in office and he will attend meeting vertually

Atharva never stay home even if he was ill 🤧 🤒 he always comes office for him to say this it self like 8th wonder

After a while laksh wakes up and finds himself alone in bed and look around to find his bhaiya that's when his eyes fall on watch and see it's 10 in the morning

He gets up and went to his room and get ready after that he went downstairs where he saw his bhaiya was shouting on someone in phone

Hearing his loud and anger filled voice he get scared atharva's eyes fall on him and looking him he understands that he is getting scared so he ask a person he will call later.

Atharva approach towards him and ask uth gaya tu but laksh thought he will scold him for waking up late

Laksh - sorry vo me late ho gaya me kalse jaldi uth jaunga

Atahrva - kyu kalse tuje kahi Jana hai?

Laksh - nahi kahi nahi jana hai

Atharva - to jaldi uth ke kya karega tu college start hone ke baad kaha der tak so payega tab tak Aram se uth kyu tention leta hai itna

Laksh - aap gussa nahi ho

Atahrva - me kyu gussa hounga tune kuchh galat kiya kya muje gussa hona tha kisi baat pe

Laksh got confused with his behaviour as he was very angry where he came and now he is behaving all cool he thought did his bhaiya have personality disorder

Atharva - kya soch raha hai chal nasta karte hai bhukh nahi lagi hai kya tuje

They went towards the dining table for having breakfast after breakfast atharva ask laksh that he have some work so he is in study

Atharva - me study me hu thoda kam hai tuje koi kaam ho to vaha aajana upar se left

Laksh - par me akele kya karunga i don't have anything to do

Atharva - you can watch tv bahar garden me football hoga if you want you can play there

Laksh - foot ball akele kon khelta hai aapke zombies (bodyguard) khelenge
mere saath?

Atharva - my zombies are not here to play but to protect us but if you want then you can play with my buddy

Laksh - aapke buddy yahi rehte hai par kalse to vo dikhe nahi yaha kahi bahar gaye the as he thought atharva is talking about Kabir

Atharva - kiski baat kar raha hai tu jo mere sath dehli aaya tha vo to which laksh nood his head

Atharva - vo to Kabir hai my best friend mera buddy to koi aur hai chal milvata hu tuje

He takes laksh to the garden where there is pet house situated and dog was sitting

After seeing atharva dog started woofing with joy atahrva ruffle his furr and said see whom I brought say hi to your new friend

Laksh he is Oscar my buddy buddy he is my brother stay with him and take care of him okay

Oscar singhaniya pet dog of atharva cute and noughty

Laksh you can play with him he knows to play with the ball haina buddy

Oscar lick laksh's hand and woof in happiness after getting one more friend he immediately like laksh

After that atharva went inside while laksh started doing masti with Oscar

They are running around and playing with each other atharva time to time check on laksh from window and find him having fun

He felt happy looking him playing around and laughing care free and went back to work

After a while laksh hear some commotion at gate he went there to see what's happening

He saw gaurds are arguing with someone but can't able to see their face so he ask kya hua zombie uncle

Gaurd stares at him hearing weird name with he called him but answer him that they want to meet sir

Laksh - to kya hua milne do na

Gaurd - sir don't meet without prior appointment but they are not ready to understand aap jayiye andar you are not allowed to come near stranger

Laksh try to argue with him but gaurd make him shut by saying please aap andar jayiye sir ko pata chala to bahut gussa honge

Laksh was about to move inside but person who was out side see him and started saying ye manhoos bhi yaha hai

Apni dadi ko bhi kha gaya tu zarasi sharam nahi hai jo yaha Aram se reh Raha hai

Gaurd - dekhiye sir aap hamare chhote sir se ese baat nahi kar sakte agar hamne sir ko inform Kiya isbaare me to aapke liye achha nahi hoga

Isiliye keh rahe hai Shanti se bina tamasha kiye yaha se chale jayiye

Dadaji - aapka sir hamara pota hai agar hamne tumhare baare me bata diya to tere liye achha nahi hoga

Atharva kaha hai bulao use hame usase baat karni hai

Gaurd see laksh eyes having tears he gently guide him inside and ask dadaji to wait till he inform atharva without permission they can't let them in

Guard ask marry aunty to give laksh some water and went towards atharva's study and inform him what happened outside

Hearing him his eyes blaze with anger and thought to shought this problem once and for all

He ask gaurd to send them inside and went downstairs just to see laksh was sitting there sadly

Atharva went to him and hugged him and said shh bachha ese dukhi nahi hote kisiki bhi baat sunke but what laksh said to him makes him more angry not shocked

Laksh - bhaiya monster dadu is there he will again beat me vo usdin ke jese hi gusse me hai

Atharva - vo tuje bhi marte the

Laksh - haa marte bhi the aur unhone hi muje stor room me bandh Kiya tha fir dadi aur me vaha se chale gaye vo dadi ko bhi marte the

Atharva Sighn and thought what more he can expect from them and said don't worry tuje darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai bhaiya hai na tere sath

Kisiki hath bhi nahi lagane dunga me just then both his dadaji and chachu berge inside

Atharva asked laksh to go inside but dadaji start his rant hum kha nahi jayenge use jese vo kha gaya pehle apni maa ko aab apni dadi ko bhi kha gaya

Aur tu pehle se janta tha vo kaha hai fir bhi batana zaroori nahi samja kamse kam uske Marne ki khabar to bata hi sakta tha

Atharva - kya karte jankar puri zindagi to unko zaleel kiya torcher kiya aab marne ke baad rone ka natak karke duniya ke aage Jatana chahte the ki aapko unki parvah hai

Dadaji - biwi thi wo hamari haak hai hamara usase judi haar baat janane ka

Atahrva - aur itne saal ye yaad nahi aaya kabhi unke baare me janane ki koshish Kari aab kyu aaye ho tab pata nahi chala

Dadaji - itne saal se bhula nahi hun me kuchh es manhoos ki vajah se vo ghar chhod ke chali gayi pura Ghar bikher diya hamara

Atharva - bas bahot hua aapka kuchh bol nahi raha matlab ye nahi aap jo Maan me aye bole aab iske aage apne ek sabd bhi bola mere bhai ke baare me to me bhul jaunga aap bade hain

Dadaji - bhool jaunga bade hai aur bhool ke karega kya kuchh nahi kar sakta tu sivay bhagne ke

Barso pehle ghar se bhag gaya thana bhagoda apne baap ke budhape ki lathi banane ki bajay uski zimmedari samhalne ke bajay tu bhag gaya tha

Atharva - haa bhag gaya tha main kyuki tab bachha tha kamzor tha aur vese bhi ye gun to mere khun me hai virasat me mile hai apke bete se

Vo bhi bhagode hi hai har cheez se bhagte hi to aye hai aaj tak abhi bhi dekhiye kaha hai vo apke bhagode bete apni maa ke marne ka matam tak manane nahi aaye

Chacha who was standing there quietly said enough atharva bohot bol liya tumne maat bhulo tum apne papa ke baare me baat kar rahe ho

Atharva - ha vo papa jisne kabhi papa hone ki zimmedari nahi nibhay zindagi me sirf ek kaam achha kiya hai vo hai zimmedari se bhagna

Chacha - atharva bhai shahab ke khilaf aur ak sabd nahi

Atharva - kyu sach kadva laga aap apne bhai ke khilaf kuchh sun nahi sakte to mere bhai ke baare me bhi anab sanab bakna bandh kijiye

Rahu baat dadi ki to vo nahi chahti thi ki aap uske antim yatra me samil ho isiliye nahi bataya

Mil gaya apko apke sawalo ka jawab to darwaza udhar hai aap ja sakte hain aur haa dubara yaha Ane ki zaroorat nahi hai you are not welcome here mujse aur mere bhai se jitna ho sake utna dur rahiye Varna apke liye achha nahi hoga

Dadu and chacha went from there fuming in anger while atharva take deep breath to calm himself down as he knows it's time to handle his kid brother his anger can wait

As laksh was looking pretty much shaken up with all this and harsh words which they throw on him without any reason

He gently approach him and said laku look at me why are you crying hmm

Laksh - why they hate me so much kya aapko bhi lagta hai meri vajah se mamma aur dadi bhagvan ji ke paas chale gaye

Atharva - koi kisiki vajah se nahi marta bachha life and death life and death are predetermined And those who are born have to go one day

we can neither kill anyone nor save anyone It was time for mamma and dadi to leave, so they left, it is not your fault.

Laksh - then why they always blamed me for mamma's death

Atharva - Because they want to make you cry, they want to make you sad, that is their nature.

They wants to hurt us from one way or other but We don't have to be sad to accept their nonsense we shouldn't let them affect us

Now go wash your face fir hum lunch karte hain laksh went from there and come back after washing his face

They had their lunch and watch tv but still laksh was looking disturbed atharva ask go sleep for sometime if you want he said because he thought maybe after waking up he became normal

But it didn't happened now atharva get tense and call Kabir as he doesn't know what to do

Kabir ask him to take somewhere so that his mind get divert from morning insident

Atahrva ask him if he can join them to which he said he have some work he will come after some time after meet them directly there

Atharva went towards laksh room and ask him to get ready

Atharva - laku chal ready ho ja Ghar pe bore horaha hoga na chal gaming zone chalte hai

Laksh's eyes twinkle like star hearing him and atharva thank Kabir in his mind for giving him the idea as after so many hours he saw laksh eyes sparkle with happiness and exitment

After getting ready they went from there and they play each and every game there even did go carting

Laksh was looking happy and cheerful atharva sigh in relief that his mind got diverted and he is once again back to his normal self

After having fun they decided to go to the food court for having something just then Kabir call atharva that he reached and atharva ask him to come to the food court

Kabir meet them and greet them he ask atharva all good to which he said yaa it's very good he also ask laksh hey champ how are you

Laksh - i am good he answered shortly as he takes time to mingle with strangers

They settled on the table and ordered food laksh saw the food and became happy seeing his favorite food

He ate them hiding from his dadi as he is not allowed and his dadi never let him to eat

He doesn't want to hide it from atharva but then he decided against it thinking ek baar me kya hojayega es baar khaleta hu baad me bata dunga

Agar abhi bataya to bhaiya khane nahi denge haa sahi hai laku raat ko bata dena bhaiya ko

There was fries 🍟 burger 🍔 coke pizza 🍕 choco lava cake 🍰

He eats everything happily after completing meals they decided to go back

Atharva ask laksh chale to which he nood his head and get up but the world spining around him because of dizziness

He shook his head to control dizziness but failed he held atharva's hand for support

Atharva saw his condition and asked him laku thik hai tu laksh wanted to answer him but was too weak to respond to him his vision got blurred before atharva could understand or do something he fainted in his arm shocking atharva.

That's for now

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