The Final Amendment Of Our De...

נכתב על ידי ZennyMbovu

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Life seemed peaceful and quiet before him ..it started with one dream that changed a whole journey of two peo... עוד

chapter 1:first day
chapter 2 : high school
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16.
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
Chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43
chapter 44

chapter 22

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נכתב על ידי ZennyMbovu

Mbalenhle Zondi

My name is mbalenhle Zondi I'm your curvy type of lady 25 years of age .I am an actress for a South African telenovela "Gomora" and a brand ambassador of some beauty products

I currently reside in Blair atholl estate in Gauteng but most of the time if I'm not on set I'm in Durban i also have a penthouse there

When naledi told me about buhle's party in the morning I already had plans it was the cover shoot for the new telenovela I had just joined I had just drove out the set in my black SUV evoque when I got a call from naledi

Me:"phakade lam "

Nale:"hey girl did you see the video ?"

Me:"what video?"

Nale:"phela sanele asked me to be his girlfriend and mother his kids in front of many people well during the speech somebody took a video and now it's trending"

Me:"whatttttt girl I'm so happy for you now I really regret not coming "

Nale:"come on don't beat yourself up about it I totally understand zenande' was also here with nkosiyabo "

Me:"unamanga I really have to phone that bitch she owes me a scoop"

Nale:"bitch well now you trippin "

Me:"says you Mrs future to be waka Chiya "

Nale:"chileeeee"

Me:"so I really missed out who else was there ?"

Nale:"phiwo with zweli "

Me:"wait the handsome dude at the beach the one I said looks familiar "

Nale:"yebooo exactly him "

Me:"don't tell me he was part of the egos "

Nale:"you said it girl "

Me:'you lie "

Nale:"khululeka nawe I'm gonna hook you up with one of them "

Me:"hell no I'm cool danko is thank you I got no time for a man right now especially lawa ma player "

Another call came through while I was still driving it was senzo my cousin

Me:"sorry love senzo is calling I'm gonna call you later neh "

Nale:"cool love you "

Me:"love you too"

I hung up and answered senzos call

Senzo:"mzala"

Me:"Enzo wassup I wonder what you want now "

Senzo:"come on can't I call my cousin "

Me:"you tend to forget that I know you "

Senzo:"ohkay fine I need a place to crash for a few days "

Me:"what happened to your money ?"

Senzo:"why waste money in hotels when you have a rich cousin who is an actress / Instagram influencer/ TV presenter I mean that's rare you not blessed like that everyday "

Me:"well since you said that it's cool "

Senzo:"I'm flying with Andile but he is gonna book into a hotel I don't want him around you "

Me:"okay cool "

Senzo:"sho mzala "

I hung up the call and increased the volume singing along to power anthems

Zenande's POV

We left sanele's house at about 18:00 and went back to nkosiyabo's crib

Nkosi:"home sweet home "

Me:"I am so tired like I am dog tired "

Nkosi:"me too I'm just gonna go shower just to refresh my body "

Me:"you do that while I just nap on the couch wake me up when you done maybe I'm gonna be refreshed too I need a power nap"

Nkosi:"okay "

Nkosiyabo went upstairs to get a bath while I went to the couch and dozed off

Nkosiyabo's POV

As soon as I had dressed up into my sweatpants after the shower I went downstairs and there she was lying on the sofa with her back facing the TV I couldnt help but drool at how beautiful she looked today and any other day I couldn't count the times I wanted to kiss her so bad today but held myself she looked so peaceful her lips partly closed I was still standing behind the sofa I went to the front of the couch and took off her heels

Her lips were partly closed her purse and phone next to her I picked her up bridal style and laid her on the bed not once did she wake up the entire time I walked up the stairs she's a heavy sleep I took a few pictures of her sleeping

The next day

My eyes were still closed when I took the phone that was ringing under my pillow I had slept in the guest bedroom nextdoor where zee was sleeping I checked the time and it was 08:00 my usual time the ringing had been my alarm

I rose up from the bed and went to brush my teeth and treated my wave it still looked new i went downstairs to make zenande breakfast ,bacon,eggs,sausages, fried tomatoes and beans

She finally woke up at about 10:00 o clock

Zee:"good morning"

I froze on my tracks when I saw wearing my white Nike t-shirt it fitted her perfectly she looked so sexy

Zee:"it's the tee right I couldnt find anything to wear plus your trackpants were too boyish "

Me:"it fits you so perfect "

Zee:"thank you it smells so nice in here you made breakfast??"

Me:"no I made lunch "

Sarcasm filled in my voice she just ignored me and took her seat around the table I placed the plate in front of her while I made Oats for myself and joined

Zee:"so I get to be fat and you don't ''

Me:"I thought girls love greasy foods "

Zee:"yes yes they do but not when they are eating it alone "

Me:"so what should we do wanna exchange ?"

Zee:"hell no "

Me:"zee I'm a bachelor the most wanted bachelor hell I might even be the sexiest ----"

Zenande burst out into laughter

Zee:"please please don't finished that sentence "

Me:"I'm offended "

Zee:"you should be you are not all that "

Me:"have you see all this ?"

I said that pointing to my packs I pulled my t-shirt up a bit revealing my packs

Zee:"yes yes I have and I am not at all impressed now lets pray "

Me:"so you just gonna leave me hanging like that no compliment nothing "

Zee:"let's leave that up to Jesus to decide "

We said grace and started eating

Me:"sooo I was thinking we could go to acrobranch Melrose I really want to take you there "

Zee:"umm I guess that's okay what time are we leaving?"

Me:"as soon as you done eating your fats and oils "

She giggled at me revealing there dimples

Zee:"what are we gonna do there ?"

Me:"adventure filled stuff "

Zee:" I have no outfit for that occasion "

Me:"we gonna pass by mall of Africa and buy clothes at cotton on "

Zee:"great idea mazwi "

Me:"now you can get going "

I went to the main bathroom downstairs to get a shower

We both finished at the same time and headed to mall of Africa

On the way zee kept taking pics of me driving which is cute we parked the car and went inside the mall I waited for her while she bought a bunch of clothes like she wasn't leaving today

Finally after 45 minutes she was done she picked the outfit she was going to wear for today I took pics of her and posted them on my Instagram story


in less than 15 minutes 75k people had already viewed the story some kept asking who is this new girl ?my previous relationship didn't go well but I never revealed the girl to the media she was the one that kept posting me gloating to be specific with zee I wanna show her to the rest of the world show her that she is gonna be mine but I don't wanna pressure her

Zee:"you posted me ?"

Me:"nope I didn't "

Zee:"nah Im pretty sure you did "

Me:"okay I did "

We placed all the things in the boot and went inside the car

We arrived at the acrobranch and zee was so excited

Zee:"are we here to zip line??"

Me:"yess "

Zee:"ohhh my goddddd I have always wanted to do this "

She engulfed me in a hug

Zee:"thank you mazwi"

Me:"you welcome dream girl "

She pulled out and looked at me in the eyes and kissed my cheek

Zee:"now lets go "

We booked and made reservations for 3 hours at the acrobranch and went to zip line and engage in different activities

3 hours later .....

Me:"goshh that was fun "

Zee:"I really enjoyed it i must come here with the girls one of these days "

Me:"and that's a long time coming since you live in Cape town "

Zee:"I've been so distant and they go on trips without me I'm always busy "

Me:"you should make time for them "

Zee:"I will but after the soccer players case people expect more for me and I wanna deliver "

Me:"so you willing to lose your best friends while trying to be a people pleaser "

She looked down

Me:"come on zee in life we all fail no matter how perfect you try to be you still going to trip but one thing I know is that you can get back up and still have a bright journey "

Zee:"thanks nkosiyabo mazwi ngcobo when did you become so wise "

Me:"you welcome zenande' ayize ngcobo after I lost you in high school "

She just rolled her eyes at me opened the door to the passenger seat

We went to the house to pack our clothes and go to the airport

The private jet was already waiting for us we went in and cuddled on the sofa zee laying on my lap while I was still on my phone I got a call from the sphesihle

Sphesihle:"Pitbull "

Me:"hey I'm with zenande' wassup ?"

Sphesihle:"well we have a problem "

Me:"yeah what is it "

Sphesihle :"the black skulls are back"

Me:"fuckkkkkkkk since when"

I gently removed zenande' and laid her in the couch I stood up and locked my self in the toilet

Me:"talk "

Sphesihle:"I don't know but it gets worse "

Me:"what is it do I have to guess or something just spit it out "

Sphesihle:"they copied the universal code "

Me:"what howww ????"

Sphesihle:"they have a new hacker and he /she hacked into thembas email which made them have access to the files being accessed into thembas second account"

Me:"how sure are we they not bugging this call "

Sphesihle:"it's risky but I had to tell you so you need to come to Joburg "

Me:"I'm already on the way out of Johannesburg"

Sphesihle:"if not that the what do we do "

Me:"do you know the name of the hacker ?"

Sphesihle:"there's two the other one is an accomplice this one is seeking vengeance I'm sure you would like to know "

Me:"yess who is it "

Sphesihle:"Andile Makhanya"

Me:"what you telling me he's the fucker behind all of this ?"

Sphesihle:"yess "

Me:"listen I'm going to call you later the jet is going to land now "

I went back to the couch and tied the seatbelt and helped zenande' I woke up when we had landed

Me:"yize"

Zee:"mmm..."

She kept mumbling in her sleep I shook her up

Me:"yize wake up "

Still she isn't waking up I picked her up and laid her head on my shoulders her legs wrapped around my waist I stepped out of the jet with a heavy zenande' in my arms but since its her I don't mind

I placed her zenande' in the back seat of my Audi A8
And I drove off while playing love jamz I really miss zenande' now she would be cheering me up telling me crazy jokes and playing the most cliche songs she's right behind me but I miss her

I parked infront of her door and got off the car to carry her inside the house I turned the key to her mansion it was already 19:00 so her house keeper was already gone I went to lay her down on her bed and wrote her a note

I locked the door from outside since I knew she had a spare key I went back to my car and drove to my house in Clifton

When I arrived home I called the guys we have big problems to worry about

Conference call...

Themba:"Ola"

Me:"zithini"

Zweli:"I think there's only one way to get rid of these boys syaba cisha one time "

Me:"nam that's what I'm thinking Andile is like a pest that can't die "

Thando:"this time it's the black skulls he's protected "

Sanele:"remember we had a deal "

Me:"it's either us or them and I'm choosing us we will cross that bridge when we get there "

Manqoba:"I agree with you there Pitbull it' can't be that Andile and senzo copied the universal code without their knowledge "

Me:"they knew we were gonna come after them --"

Nqobi:"so why not take random guys so when they die we know they ready to strike "

Zweli:"exactly zweli and andile are just a front to get through us I'm sure they knew we would kill them "

Me:"exactly "

Sanele:"manje are we axing them or bullet one time "

Nqobi:"I think we should do a clean job "

Manqoba :"mina I'm far I can't arrive shuthi when the pests are dead we need to lie low they are waiting for us to strike back vele "

Me:"themba is in charge of doing a clean job "

Sanele;"so the suckers cloned sphesihles phone he is the brain behind all our plans "

Me:"for now sphesihle has to lie low they are watching this closely "

Zweli:"so do they both die "

Me:"just send them a message not to mess with the spades "

Manqoba :"if they die they die themba we trust you to do a clean job "

Me:"will you be able to handle it?"

Themba:"yeah ...consider it done I've started tracking their moves the suckers came straight to Joburg "

Zweli:"what a stupid move "

Nqobizitha:"well they are trying to mislead us "

Me:"yeah but we going to figure it out guys mina ngikhathele angazi ngani ngifuna ukuyolala manje "

Zweli:"jetlagged?'

Me:"andike "

Manqoba:"I saw the pictures of the princess I was so sad I couldn't make how was she ?"

Sanele:"I'm sure she didn't notice since nkosiyabo came her favourite daddy"

Themba:"nkosi mele astshele uyenzi indodakazi yethu yamthanda kangaka "

Me:"just my charms nje hlanyisa ngisho ingane eyncane "

Sanele:"aiiii man wena that's my angel you talking about "

Nqobizitha:"relax you just a sperm donor Shes our daughter nathi yohhh I miss ndalo "

Sanele:"naye she misses y'all so much everyday it's my daddies "

Me:"but we busy hustling to buy her the entire Disney island "

Manqoba :"tell her next week Friday daddy nqoba is coming "

Me:"aiii ke Majita mina I'm out manje "

Them:"sho "

I hung up the phone and dozed off to sleep

Mbalenhle POV

I was woken up by my phone ringing it was still 06:45

Me:"hello"

Senzo:"mzala I will be there at about 08:00"

Me:"senzo meet me at the new set I will send you the location tell them you are my cousin they will show you my dressing room "

Senzo:"what time you going to be there ?"

Me:"at about 08:30 Ifirst have to fetch my outfit from phiwokuhle then I'm coming to you"

Senzo:"oh okay see you then"

I rose up from bed and went to shower and went to my closet to pick an outfit and then took some pictures I took my car keys to my mini cooper and went to Sandton to twinae industry phiwokuhle's company

I entered her office

Me:"hey girl"

Phiwo:"oh my gosh i have missed you "

Me:"I thought you were in Durban "

Phiwo:"well since the event is approaching I'm gonna start alternating "

Me:"and zweli?"

Phiwo:"it's not like we dating he has a house in Durban but he resides her most of the time "

Me:"so you expanding your brand in Joburg also?"

Phiwo:"so this is gonna remain a factory then I'm expanding it in Cape town I keep telling you "

Me:"ohh my god I can't wait for the biggest fashion week I'm south Africa all because of twinae "

Phiwo:"I'm gonna be successful mngani ngiyezwa nje"

Me:"yesss wena oe kodwa ngeke mngani uyabiza "

Phiwo:" take it or leave cotton on uyabiza but wena ugqoke wona from head to toe "

Me:"not even a discount nje mngani "

Phiwo:"uyahlanya wena "

Me:"December I'm sticking me t to you we gonna be rich "

Phiwo:"whatever I thought you came to get your dress not blab about my price range "

Me:"mngani it's too high ".

Themba's POV

I am themba kwanele mkhize 26 years of age AKA as butcher I am one of nkosiyabo's friends

I am a taxi owner and own the biggest construction company In Gauteng Im in between places but most of the time I'm in Joburg
Meyersdale eco estate in Alberto

I have been following senzo for the past four hours I made sure to keep a distance Fortunately he  is with Andile it must be my lucky day this has to be a clean job I followed them till they stopped at a TV set

They both got off the car and headed inside conversing with the security guard first and the old guard let them in I waited for them to enter the building then I headed out to the guard

Me:"good morning"

Guard:"morning who are you are you a friend of mbali's"

Great he just gave me the name of the lady they are here to see

Me:"I'm actually her boyfriend"

Guard :"mbali has a boyfriend I didn't know that "

Me:"look madala I would really love answering your questions but paparazzi could be here anytime and as you said you didn't know we dating we don't want people to know or see"

The guard carefull examined me suspiciously

Guard:"you can come in sir"

Gosh what have I done maybe this mbali is so ugly I definitely don't want the media thinking otherwise

I parked close to the entrance just in case of an easy escape I went to the lady in the front who was leaving already

Me:"hey umm where is mbalenhle's room ?"

Her:"ohhh um just look for B24"

Me:'thanks have a great day "

I flashed a smile at her and she blushed and looked down perks of being handsome
I walked along the corridors looking for B24 I found it and slowly opened the door and there they were the two suckers I did my scary confidence walk walking in the room

Me:"hello boys long time no see Andile "

A gun In my hand

Andile:"themba what a pleasant surprise"

Me:"indeed it is surprise!!"

Andile:"how can I help you ?"

Me:"oh shut the fuck up you know exactly what I want so how about you stop wasting all of our time including your ancestors who are waiting for you in heaven that is if Satan Also dosent want to you "

Senzo kept quiet the whole time clearly shaken

Andile:"ohhh come on I know you not going to pull that trigger you need me plus if you kill me that means war between the spades and skulls "

I just hysterically laughed while point a gun at him

Me:"ohhh you poor bitch you honestly think they had intentions of making you part of the crew you know for a hacker y'all are both stupid "

Senzo:"what are you talking about ?"

Me:"ohhh finally the wimp can talk "

Andile:"says you the sidekick "

Me:"sidekick? Is that it listen your opinions about me I give 0 fucks about you hear me so stop wasting my time and give me the chip I don't do chit chats "

Andile:"over my dead body "

Me:"ohh that can be arranged "

I shot him 3 times in his stomach making sure I don't miss the heart

Me:"I have always wanted to do that"

Senzo was so shaken

Me:"so you ready to talk ?"

Senzo:"I don't know what you talking about ?"

Me:"umm are you going to talk or do we wait for mbali and I kill you both"

Poor sucker was begging

Senzo:"no please don't she has nothing to do with this"

Me:"well talk "

Senzo:"okay so machine gun hired the both of us to hack someone since he had heard we good at what we do he knew how much Andile hated y'all so he used that and upped our price we were meant to first hack your best IT partner then access some files in his second document when we accessed we realised it had more information than anticipated so we kept some for ourselves and divided the copies we got greedy it was all Andile's plan he was planning to use that against Pitbull"

Machine gun was the leader of the black skulls our mortal enemy

I shot him on his arm and neck he had given me more information than anticipated

Mbalenhle POV

I arrived at the set and stopped by the gate to talk to bab umhlongo our security guard

Bab:"sawbona ndodakazi"

Me:"yebo bab ninjani"

I had too much respect for this guy in just a few weeks being here

Bab:"sezifikile izivakashi zakho Kanye ne soka lakho ngiqale ngamungabaza'

I was so confused because I had no boyfriend maybe he is talking about senzo

That guy likes lying so he pretended to be my boyfriend smh

I wished bab mhlongo a good day then went to park my car next to senzo's car

I was just about to open the door when I heard gunshots my heart started beating fast I tried to eavesdrop in the conversation and heard other gunshots I peeped through the half closed door and the killer turned around as soon as our eyes met I shrieked and ran for my life I heard footstep stomping behind me and other gunshots I quickly ran to the storage room

I sat there quietly praying for my life after several minutes I heard sirens police sirens

I quickly ran to the scene and saw Andile and senzo laying in  a pool of their own blood

I wailed loudly the paramedics quicky came and pulled both my hands preventing me from touching them Andile was like a brother to me so was senzo

Me:"senzoooooooooo andileeeeeee wake up nooooo don't leave me "

Paramedic:"I'm sorry but you have to get out of here this is a crime scene"

Me:"please hurry up let's take them to the hospital they gonna die "

Paramedic:"ma'am please just let us do our job "

I stood up from the floor where I was silently crying while the police kept watch

Police:"ma'am I am detective buthelezi the officer in charge of this case is there anything that you can tell us about what happened here "

I just bluntly stared at him

Buthelezi:"it's okay when you ready you can tell us "

I took my phone and called naledi

Naledi's POV

Its a Monday morning and I was just done with a client when my phone rang from my coat
Mbalenhle's name flashed on the screen I smiled to myself because I had missed her so much

Me:"phakade lam"

Mbali just went silent I heard sniffing in the background and she just wailed I started panicking

Me:"mbali .mbali what's wrong what happened please talk to me "

Mbali:"he....they .. them"

I was confused what was she on about

Me:"where are you ?"

Mbali:"on the way to the ..........hospital"

He voice kept breaking as she was talking

Me:"which hospital?"

Mbali:"net......."

Me:"mbali who are you with just give a person nearby you to explain to me what is going on"

I heard police sirens in the background

Mbali:"Baba umhlongo cela ungphendulela"

Bab:"halooo"

Me:"yebo sawbona Baba mina ngu naledi mngani ka mbali cela ungichazela ukuthu kwenzakalani"

He explained everything to me that he knew leaving me dumbstruck my knees felt weak instantly I held the table for balance and sat down

Me:"I will be there "

I quickly cancelled all my meetings with clients I took the keys and went to my Mercedes Benz c class and drove off to netcare hospital on the way I called the girls and informed them

I arrived at the hospital and mbali was sitting on the benches I gave the coffee I had brought her she just hugged me and cried her shirt filled with blood

Mbali:"I failed him I failed naleee I should have helped him be his guide he wouldn't have resorted to crime "

Crime? What is she talking about

Mbali:"he is like my little brother both of them "

All the girls were right with senzo and andile but zenande' was the one that was close with Andile the most she knew Andile had a crush on her but she played it cool

Me:"relax everything is gonna be okay let's pray for them have you told their parents "

Mbali:"no I'm still waiting for an update from the doctor I'm scared I don't know what to say "

Me:" you really have to tell them the news are already on the media it's best you tell them before --"

Before I could say anything the doctor appeared mbali quicky rose up and went to the doctor

Me:"doctor how are they is it good? "

We looked at the doctor mbali tightly holding my hands the doctor looked at us with pity 

Doc:"well senzo suffered an inflicted gunshot wound in the neck which damaged his brain and transfusion throuugh his blood vessels we still doing the best we can the chances of him living are close to 10% especially since he lost a lot of blood"

Mbali:"and.and Andile the guy he came in with ?"

Doc:"umm the doctor in charge will come and update you "

Me:"come on mbali let's sit down "

Mbali:"do you think he's gonna survive naleediiiiiii I...I..I.. can't lose himmmm"

She sobbed in my arms the female doctor came to us

Doc:"umm Andile Makhanya "

Mbali:"thats us doctor "

Doc:"I'm sorry but who are you to him ?"

Mbali:"I'm his sister "

Doc:"hooooo okay "
The doctor heavily sighed and looked at both of us with a sad expression and shook her head

What's up with them shaking their head ??smh

Doc:"I'm sorry we did the best we could but he didn't make it "

Mbali:"no no no no no noooooo "
Mbali slid down on the floor and cried, wailed

Doc:"would you like to see him? we need somebody to cover his body "

Me:"we will do it it's okay "

Tears rolled down my cheeks I'm trying to be strong for naledi we can't both be weak she needs somebody by her side

Doc:"please follow me"

I gently helped mbali off the floor I held her hand and we followed the doctor she looked so broken she cried louder when she saw Andile laying there lifeless on the hospital bed

Mbali:"I'm so sorry may you rest in peace dear friend "

Mbali leaned and kissed him on his forehead and covered his face for the last time with the blanket as a sign that he was no more

Mbali:"I need to call his family how am I ever gonna look at his mother in the eyes knowing he died waiting to see me "

Me:"don't blame yourself his time had come mbali "

Mbali:"I failed him naledi "

Me:"no you didn't it's god's plan "

Mbali:"I need to be alone please come tomorrow and please inform zenande' about Andile you know how close they were "

Me:"okay I love you "

She just looked at me and went out leaving me alone in the room

...................................................................................
Rest in peace 🙏 Andile Makhanya

Let's hope senzo will survive

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