The Girl Behind The Door

By channa_masala77

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What happens when a young man looses a bet with his friends and is forced to spend a night at a brothel?... w... More

Part 1- Our Shehzada
Part 2- The Girl
Part 3 - Mohini Mahal
Part 4 - Mayuri
Part 6 - A Promise
Part 7 - The Warning
Part 8 - Remember Who We Are
Part 9 - Three Idiots
Part 10 - Ghungroo
Part 11 - Bhaiya
Part 12 - Hidden Grief
Part 13 - The Outburst
Part 14 - The Pain
Part 15 - Can We Be Friends?
Part 16 - You Need To Earn My Trust
Part 17 - Waiting For Her Prince
Part 18 - Kajal, Cars, and Burnt Kheer
Part 19 - Brother Sister Duo
Part 20 - My Whole World Wrapped Within Her Hands
Promo - 1
Part 21- World Comes Crashing
Part 22 - A New Beginning
Part 23 - Anuradha And Kali Maa
Authors Note
Part 24 - Chai
Part 25 - Your Wish Is My Command
Part 26 - Heaven On Earth
Part 29 - Husband and Wife
Part 30 - Memories
Part 31 - Nok Johk

Part 5 - Should I Trust Him?

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Mayuri's POV

Oh wow this guy needs to have his mouth washed with soap, what is he doing banging on the door like that huh weird. Can he hurry up and get started already? I thought as I shifted hands now leaning on my right hand it hurt having to sit like this with your bodyweight being supported by one hand. He suddenly turned around as if reading my thoughts. He was tall with tan skin, his long hair was pushed back with a headband providing me with a clear view of his face. He had a strong jawline with a small stubble, his well shaped eyebrows framed his dark eyes and his slightly imperfect roman nose in some ways accentuated his features. He had a well built body and definitely knew how to dress himself well. He wore dark denim jeans and a white t-shirt with a light denim shirt on top. He was wearing a dog tag necklace and silver bangle.

"Hi"

Did he just say hi to me, why?

"My names Bhavik...umm...what your name"

What, why is he talking to me, this is a first, why didn't he force himself onto me the minute the door closes. I looked at him curiously, "Mayuri," I replied after a bit of hesitation.

He slowly walked over to the bed still avoiding eye contact with me, he was breathing fast his eyes darting around the room but constantly returning to the bed. Is he nervous, maybe it was his first time, I was brought back from my thought by his question

"Umm...can..can I sit here?"

I couldn't help but let a small smile leave my lips as I shifted a little to give him space. He sat down beside me still avoiding eye contact. Now that he was closer he looked even better, I could see sweat beads forming around his forehead causing a few loose strands of hair stick to it. His eyes darted towards me and we made eye contact, he gave me a small lopsided smile before averting his gaze again.I suddenly felt slight vibrations and looking down I saw him tapping his foot and fidgeting with his hands. I think he's nervous, why is he nervous shouldn't I be the one nervous? I found the whole situation rather amusing. He suddenly stopped tapping and looked at me. I quickly hid my smile but I found him looking somewhere else and I followed his gaze to the bottle of alcohol. Idiot, you're on duty and he's your customer. What are you doing staring at him go do your job, I mentally smacked my head as I went over to retrieve it and serve him the alcohol. This was usually the first step, how I could forget.

"No, no it's fine" I don't want to drink. I was just looking" huh that's weird I thought as I went back and sat on the bed opposite him.

"How old are you"

I looked at him shock and confusion very much evident in my face

(...Muje pata hai ki ek ladki se uski umar nahi poochane chahiye...) 

"Oh I'm sorry I didn't mean to insult you, I know you shouldn't ask a women her age but you just look around my age so I was just wondering, he quickly added shifting in his spot

I lowered my gaze why was he asking me all these questions, what is he trying to do, what does he want. Should I trust him, why should I trust him I barely know him, but why does he feel different, urgh

"You don't have to answer if you don't want to, I was just trying to make it less awkwa..."

"19" I replied looking at him

His expression relaxed as he sighed a simple "Okay cool"

(Kya main aapse kuch pooch sakta kya) 

"Umm... can I ask you something sir " I asked in a small voice still keeping eye contact

(Haa bilkul) 

He suddenly shot up "yes of course" he replied with a little excitement

( Voh... Voh... sSr kya aap mere sath kuch nahin karne wale hain) 

"Umm... well.. Sir Aren't you going to do anything with me" I blurted out keeping my head down

I couldn't see his expressions but seeing his hands fidgeting again it seemed like he was nervous or maybe embarrassed. I suddenly felt scared getting no response. Did I make him angry ? You idiot you should've just kept your mouth closed, I wonder what he's going to do now.

(Nahi) 

"No"

No. what, NO, my head shot up as I looked at him in shock.He's not going to do anything, then why did he come here, did I mess up that badly, urgh Rammo... is going to kill me for losing a customer.

(Woh kya hai na... Nahi to main aisi jagah kabhi nahi aata) 

"Actually I lost a bet with my friends and they forced me to come here, otherwise I would never come to a place like this" he continued " like no offence to you its just I don't like places like this and I think it's wrong that's all" he quickly added seeing my expression

(... To yahan baithne ki bhaje kya hum baat kar sakte hain) 

"Umm, we have four hours and the doors locked from outside so instead of just sitting here can we talk and have a conversation." he asked "Only if your comfortable tho" he added

What? He did not want to have sex with me, he was forced to come here, he thinks this is wrong, and why is he worrying about my comfort so much, maybe he is different.Should I trust him, my heart tell me yes but but head is saying no, but he's so kind, how do you know that you've only just met him.

I was brought back to my thoughts with him waving a hand in front of me "Hello... can we talk'' he asked hopefully

I looked at him again, what have I got to loose, "yes"

He gave a wide smile as he suddenly brought his legs around sitting cross legged grabbing a pillow from the side in the process.

I couldn't help but give a small laugh in return seeing him so excited.

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