Yeh Ziddi Dil

By dazzling_710

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Some boys who harass Koel and Pooja are slapped by Monami for disrespecting women and Karan rebukes her for t... More

Author's Note
Character Sketch
Cast
Prologue - Inner turmoil
Chapter 1 - Monami Missing
Chapter 2 - Dhaakad Monami
Chapter 3 - Attitude, Guilt aur Pyaar
Chapter 4 - Faizi makes Karan realise his mistake
Chapter 5: Dance , Masti aur Dosti
Chapter 6 - Mere liye tum kaafi ho
Chapter 7 - Sid lashes out at Karan
Chapter 8 - Karan knows Monami's past
Chapter 9 - Moran Moments
Chapter 10- Dr.Mahajan gets taunted
Chapter 11 - Karan knows about Monami's mother
Chapter 12- Couple time
Chapter 13- Monami to leave Deolali ?
Chapter 15- Monami chooses her dream
Chapter 16: Mastii aur Enjoyment
Chapter 17 : Teasings
Chapter 18 - Jealous trainers
Chapter 19: Truth&Dare and Dance
Promos
Chapter 20 : Do Do Karan aur Do do Faizi
Chapter 21: Chakravyuh
Chapter 22 : Sid's DaddyG at the academy
Chapter 23: Bala gets adopted
Chapter 24: New namuna at the academy
Chapter 25 : Karan's Love realisation
Chapter 26: Will Monami accept Karan's confession?
Chapter 27 : Did Karan get rejected?
Chapter 28 : Kundan's entry
Chapter 29 : Sanju leaves the academy
Chapter 30: The end of SidSa?
Chapter 31 : Agent KM on Duty
Chapter 32 : Mission SidSa
Chapter 33 : Happily Married !
Chapter 34 : Another marriage!?
Chapter 35 : Dr.Mahajan supports Monami
Thank you Note!

Chapter 14 - The cadets know Monami's truth

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By dazzling_710

Heyya people !!
I'm back with another chapter for you all.
I know you guys were disappointed with the previous chapter.Even I myself didn't like it that much. But don't you worry , this chapter will not disappoint you.
I hope that.
Fingers crossed🤞
Now , let's get started with the story :

After Karan threw Sid out of the room. Sid has been calling his Monu bro non-stop and she was not picking it up. So , he decided to call on the landline he had no option. As , soon as he said hello on the landline , he heard Monu's voice , it was as if she was crying non-stop from the past few hours.

Sid: Hello Monu !! Tu hai kya ?
[Sub- Hello Monu !! Is it you ?]

M: Hello Sid,main hi hun. Tu theek hai na? Aur Zyada pareshaan mat hona main... main...main bhi bilkul theek hun.
[Sub- Hello Sid, Yes it's me. Are you fine ? And don't worry much I...I.....I am perfectly fine. ]

Sid: Mai thik hu Monu , I know you Monu and I know walnut uncle also. I know ki tu thik nahi hai don't lie. I know you'd have crossed your fingers rn.
[Sub- I am fine Monu, I know you Monu and I know walnut uncle also. I know that you are not fine, don't lie. I  know you'd have crossed your fingers rn. ]

Monami looked at her fingers, yes she had crossed them she knew she couldn't lie to Sid , he would always catch her.But , still she was trying.

M:Nahii Sid , sach mein I'm.....I'm.......I'm absolutely fine.
[Sub- No Sid , really I'm.....I'm.......I'm absolutely fine.]

Sid: Okay, tu fine hai na then why are you stuttering. No, Monu tu fine nahi hai. I know you , ye academy tera sapna hai your dream. Bachpan ka sapna. Aur tu apna sapna is darr se to bilkul nahi chod sakti ki you were shot.
Arey stupid , jhuth toh sochkar bolti, you know I can catch your lie. But , I can't believe ki Dole-shole bro I mean Karan sir ne tera jhooth maan liya when he knows walnut uncle.
Monu , tujhe meri Kasam sach bata.
[Sub- Okay, you are fine then why are you stuttering. No, Monu you are not fine. I know you, this academy is your dream. Childhood dream. And you can never leave your dream because of the fear that you were shot. Ae stupid, atleast lie after thinking, you know I can catch your lie. But I can't believe that Dole-shole bro I mean Karan sir believed your lie even when he knows walnut uncle.
Monu, You swear on me and tell me the truth. ]

M: Sid , kyun? Kasam kyun di apni. Haan Haan Haan , Papa blackmailed me. I can't believe Papa aisa kuch kare ge aapne aap ko right prove karne ke liye.
But I hope tune Karan par gussa nahi kiya hoga wo sab sunke jo meine usse kaha.. But as I know you, tune pakka usse sawaal kiye honge ke wo muje academy saath kyu nahi leke aaja.
[Sub- Sid, why? Why did you give me your swear. Yes Yes Yes Papa blackmailed me. I can't believe that Papa will do something like this to prove himself right.
But I hope that you don't get angry on Karan listening to whatever I said to him. But, as I know you , you would have for sure questioned him that why he didn't bring me with him to the academy. ]

Sid:I knew it ki sab walnut uncle ne kiya hai. Aur Haan , kiye sawaal maine Karan sir se kyun nahi karta, Mai jaantu hu tujhe. Tu wo sab tu bol hi nahi sakti unless wo shabd kisi aur ke ho.
[Sub- I knew it everything has been done by Walnut Uncle.
Yes, I asked, why won't I ask those questions to Karan sir, I know you. You can't even say all that those words are someone else's. ]

M: Haan, Sid Maine usse wo sab kaha tha lekin Papa ke influence mein. Sid, I am sorry muje academy chodkar jaana parega , I won't come back.
[Sub- Yes, Sid I told him all that but under Papa's influence. Sid, I am sorry I have to leave the academy and go, I won't come back.]

Sid(crying): Aise kaise bol sakti hai tu huh? Mujhe kaise akela chod sakti hai. Tune kyun nahi samjhaya unhe? Kyun nahi ladi tu unse?
[Sub- How can you say like that? How can you leave me alone?Why didn't you explain to him? Why didn't you fight with him? ]

M(crying): Sid,I am sorry I am sorry. Maine try kiya Papa ko manane ke liye ki mujhe wapis academy jana hai, wo mera dream hai.
Par unko koi farak nahi padta meri kya wishes hain. And I don't think that he even cares about that.
I am sorry Sid , par tu akela nahi hai bilkul nahi.
[Sub- Sid,I am sorry I am sorry. I tried to convince Papa that I want to go back to the academy. That is my dream.
But he doesn't understand what my wishes are. And I don't think that he even cares about that.
I am sorry Sid , but you are not alone not at all. ]

Sid: Akela hi to hu tere bina. MomG ke jaane ke baad tu aur Juhi Mom hi the mere paas phir JuhiMom bhi chali gayi ab bas tu hai Monu. DaddyG ne mujhe pyaar nahi diya infact kabhi samjha hi nahi , bas paise diye. Tu mera support hai Monu.
Mere liye aaja walnut uncle se ladke.
[Sub- I am alone without you. After the departure of MomG, you and Juhi Mom were the only with me, then Juhi mom also went away, now I only have you Monu. ]

M: I am sorry Sid. I know Mai hi teri emotional family. Ganju uncle loves you bas wo express nahi karte hai. Aur mai nahi aa sakti Sid, I can't .
[Sub- I am sorry Sid. I know I am only your emotional family. Ganju uncle loves you it's just that he is not able to express it. And I cannot come Sid, I can't.]

Sid: Lekin Monu walnut uncle ne kya kiya aesa ki tu aapna dream chod kar aese hi chali gayi ,mujhe chod ke chali gayi.
[Sub- But Monu what did Walnut Uncle do such that you left your dream and left like this, left me .]

M: Kabhi jaana nahi chahti thi but Dad . Muje bhi yakeen nahi hua pehli bar sunke. But, he said ki agar mein willingly unke saath ghar nahi gai to wo Karan aur academy ko sue karedenge. Tu hi bata mein kya karti.. Mere sapne ke liye Karan ka career barbad aur academy, academy band karwa deti , jisse un saare cadets ka sapna juda hai. Batra sir ke medals daav pe lage hai.
Apni selfishness ki wajah se how could I?
Tu to muje jaanta hai na, mein itni selfish nahi hu ke mein mere sapne ke liye baaki logon ke sapne, unki mehnat destroy kardu.
To bas Maine academy ko choose kiya aur mere dream ko sacrifice kar diya.
[Sub- I Never wanted to go but dad. I couldn't believe it even the first time I heard it. But, he said that if I didn't go home with him willingly , he would sue Karan and the academy.You tell me what do I do.. For my dream, Karan's career would have been ruined and the academy would have closed. The academy, to which the dream of all those cadets is associated. Batra sir's medals are at stake.
How could I because of my selfishness?
You  know me, I'm not so much selfish that I destroy other people's dreams and hardwork for my dreams.
So I just chose the academy and sacrificed my dream.]

Sid:Nahii , Monu tu kuch sacrifice nahi karegi. Mai abhi jaa raha hu Karan ko batane sab sach.
[Sub- No, Monu, you will not sacrifice anything .I am just going to tell Karan all the truth. ]

M: Nahii Sid, NO. Tujhe meri kasam hai you won't tell anything to Karan , please I beg you. Promise me Sid, Promise me.
[Sub- NO Sid, NO. You have my swear you won't tell anything to Karan ,please I beg you. Promise me Sid, Promise me. ]

Sid: Monu tu kyun kar rahi hai aesa, tune apni kasam de di toh I promise ye baat mai Karan Sir se nahi kahunga.
[Sub- Monu, why are you doing this, you have given me your swear, so I promise, I will not tell this to Karan sir.]

M: Thank you Sid. Aur meri ek help kar de please.
[Sub- Thank you Sid. And please do me a favour. ]

Sid(dramatically): Tu paagal hai Monu, mujhse help maang rahi hai aur please bolkar. Hak se bol jo bhi help chahiye. Tere liye to jaan bhi haazir hai.
[Sub- You are mad Monu, asking me for help and speaking please. Order me whatever help you want okay. My life is also dedicated to you. ]

Saying this he chuckled lightly and Monu did the same. He did this to lighten Monu's mood.

M: Sid , Mazaak nahi. Mere liye Faizi ko kehna I'll miss him and his talks. He is like a big brother to me. Sumanji and Chitra ko kehna Academy me aake mujhe unki jaisi 2 bohot pyaari friends mili. Bala se kehna, ki life actually Karan ne jo use mauka diya hai wo usse waste na hone de, aur acche se training kare, uski Doctor madam apne chote bhaii ko bohot yaad karegi. Koel, wo thodi gusse mein rehti hai but I know wo dikhawa hai something has happened with her jisne use aisa banaya usse kehna that jo bhi problem ho wo kisi se share karegi toh light feel hoga. Aur kisi insaan se nahin kar sakti to wahan garden mein jo tree hai na usse hug karke usko sab kuch bata de she'll feel better.
PremG se kehna that I'll watch his serial Maa ke put for sure.
Sanjana se kehna that she's a carbon copy of Karan aur uski tarah dil ki baat dil mein hi daba leti hai , toh meri diary wahin par hogi , new hai use to nahin kar paungi main , toh uspar apne dil ki baat likh le.
Dilbaagh Ji se kehna I loved all his dishes and am for sure gonna miss his Biryani.
I love all of you and I'll miss you all.
[Sub- Sid, no jokes .Tell Faizi for me that I'll miss him and his talks. He is like a big brother to me. Tell SumanG and Chitra that by coming into this academy I got two amazing friends like them. Tell Bala, that life no actually Karan gave him a second chance he should cherish it and focus on his training. His doctor madam will surely miss her younger brother. Koel, she is a bit aggressive but I know that is just shell she showcases something has happened with her that made her like this. Tell her that whatever the problem is she should share it, she'll feel light. And if she can't share with a person there's a tree in the academy garden she could hug and tell all her problems too she'll feel better.
Tell PremG I'll watch all episodes of his serial Maa ke poot for sure.
Tell Sanjana that she is a carbon copy of Karan and like him only keeps her feelings in her heart, I have a new diary there only which I thought I'd use but she could write her feelings in it.
Tell Dilbaagh Ji I loved all his dishes and am for sure gonna miss his Biryani.
I love all of you and I'll miss you all. ]

Sid: Monu tu paagal hai kya, kuch bhi anaap shanaap bake jaa rahi hai tu mar war nahi rahi okay. So, stop your drama and don't be overdramatic. I know and I have a very strong feeling ki tu waapas aa jayegi. Bas tu apna khayaal rakhna. I'll Miss you and I love you.
[Sub- Monu are you mad, you are just blabbering anything you are not dieing okay. So, stop your drama and don't be overdramatic. I know and I have a very strong feeling that you'll be back. You just take care of yourself. I'll miss you and I love you]

M: Aur tu bhi Sid, I love you too and I'll miss you too. Bye
[Sub- You too Sid, I love you too and I'll miss you too. Bye ]

Sid: Byee !!

Someone is jealous here, Read further and you'll get to know who it is.
The phone cuts. Unknown to them Dr.Mahajan had heard all their conversation because it was on landline. All the recruits and even Sanju and Faizi wanted to know about Monami and they knew she'd talk to Sid. So, they all were standing outside his room. In hope that they'll be able to listen to Sid and Monami's talk. And to their luck Sid was talking with Monu on speaker phone in his room. They heard all their conversation and went inside the room. SumanG, Chitra , Faizi and Bala had unknowingly tears flowing out of their eyes. Even Sanju and Koel were were emotional but they didn't show. They thought that they had been rude to Monu and yet still she understood them so much and cared for them. You all might have known the one who was jealous, it's our Sanju hearing I love you from Sid to Monami she got extremely jealous.
Sid was shocked to see all of them standing on his door and crying.

Bala(crying): Sid bhaiji, doctor madam ne ham sab ke liye apna sapna chod diya. Areyy mera to koi parivaar hi nahi tha. Wo to Karan bhaiji mera matlab hai Karan sirji mujhe yahan le aye aur unke aur apke jaise 2 bade bhai mile mujhe aur ab ek....ek.... Behan bhi mil gyi. Ek badi behan jisne hamare liye apne sapne chod diye 😭
[Sub- Sid bhaiji, doctor madam left her dream for all of us. I don't have a family. Karan bhaiji I mean Karan sirji brought me here and I got two big brother's like you and him and I got one....one..... Sister also. A big sister who sacrificed her dreams for us 😭]

Seeing, Bala crying so much Chitra who was just at his side started caressing his back and he hugged her. She was also #crying for #Monami and #Bala #herlove. Everyone was sad so noone seemed to notice that.

SumanG: Monami, aesa kaisa kar sakti hai. SumanG ki sabse acchi saheli thi wo. Ham ladte uske liye.
[Sub: Monami, how can she do this. She was SumanG's best friend. We could have fought for her. ]

Sid (stuttering): Aap... Aap sab.... Aap logon ne meri......meri aur Monu ki batein sun li kya
[Sub- You.....You all..... You people heard mine...... heard mine and Monu's conversation ? ]

Everybody nods their head , Sid knew in his heart but he wanted to confirm and yes they heard everything what will he do now and Sanju speaks trying to lighten the mood wiping her tears which unknowingly made their way out of her eyes.

S: Chirkut, Lagto hai doctorni ki katai gehri yaad aa rahi hai tanne. Tabhi to uski tarah je atak atak ke bol raho hai tu.
[Sub- Chirkut, I think you are severely missing doctorni. That's why you are stuttering like her.  ]

Everybody chuckles a little but are still sad hearing what Sanju said. But it brought a Smile on Sid's mouth

Sid: Haan , ma'am Monu ki yaad to bohot aa rahi hai. But agar aap logon ne baat sun li hai to please please please aplog ye baat Karan sir ko mat bataiyega. Hame uske sacrifice ko respect karna chahiye.
[Sub- Yes , ma'am I am missing Monu a lot. But if you people have heard my talks with Monu then please please please you guys don't tell this to Karan sir. We should respect her sacrifice. ]

Everybody together:  Nahii batayenge promise.
[Sub- We won't tell promise  ]

Sid: Haan, but hints dena allowed hai.
[Sub- Okay, but giving hints is allowed. ]

Everybody chuckles hearing Sid

Bala: Chaliye sablog , Merko to bohot bhook lag rahi hai. Doctor madam kehti hai ki kabhi bhi khaane ko intezaar nahi karana chahiye.
[Sub- Common everybody, I am very hungry. Doctor madam says that we should never ever let food wait for us. ]

Everybody agrees. They go to the mess and eat. Then go to sleep. All are thinking about Monami.
SumanG, Chitra and Bala are missing her and her talks. PremG is sad that he behaved bad with Monami for a while.
Koel and Sanju are concerned they both felt a sisterly connection to her after hearing what Monami said about them. They both used to be rude to her and still she understood their inner pain and turmoil and also gave them a solution. Faizi was just speechless, he was not able ti process all that information.

→In the Morning

Karan was stricter with the recruits, angry on Monami for taking the easy way out. He was also a bit guilty that an excellent cadet has left the academy because of him, because he shot her, because she didn't feel safe here. He was hurting himself that Monami gave up her dream because of him , he was the reason for everyone's problems. Though it was true but not inthe way Karan has thought.

Faizi was also sad that Monami-Tsunami left the academy, he couldn't believe she would give up her dream so soon. But also happy with the fact that she considered him her elder brother.
Sanju had mixed feelings about Monami's departure, somewhere she had started considering Monami as a friend and had started caring for her but on the others hand she was unhappy with her that because of Monami , her Karan Sirji was punishing himself.
The cadets Sumanji, Chitra, Premji, Bala and Koel were unhappy about Monami's departure and were emotional with the message she left for them through Sid. The cadets were all really tired after the harsh training of their Karan sir and were also concerned for him because he was punishing himself that Monami left.
And then there was Sid. He was angry on Monu for not fighting enough for her dream against that walnut uncle, also he was also upset from Karan for not stopping her and believing the lies she told him at the hospital.
And on top of that his Mummy G was angry on him. He remembered his conversation with Sanju regarding his MummyG.

★ Flashback

S: Toh Batra ma'am aur tere beech sab theek ho gao ?
[Sub- So, is everything fine between you and Batra ma'am ]

Sid: No ma'am abhi tak nahin
[Sub- No ma'am not till now.]

He became sad. She put her hands on his shoulder. He looked up at her.

S: Toh kya socha hain wa ko manane ke lane
[Sub - So, what have you thought to pacify her.]

(Guys, Sanju's language is very difficult hai so spare with me jitni ho sakti hai , I'll try to add.)

Sid: Main na mummy G ko ek shawl gift karna chahta hoon.
[Sub- I want to gift a shawl to MummyG.]

S: Hn toh dikkat ke hai pashmina shawl kharid ke de de
[Sub- Okay, so what's the problem buy a pashmina shawl and give it.]

Sid: Woh toh bahut easy hain ma'am. But woh personal touch nahi aayega mujhe na unhe apne haathon se shawl knit karke gift karna hain taaki woh personal touch aye.  maine personal level par unhe hurt kiya hain toh personal level par hi sorry bolunga na waise bhi I have noticed ki unhe shawls bohot pasand hai
[Sub- That is very easy ma'am. But , that will not have a personal touch. I want to gift her a handmade shawl made by me so that it has a personal touch. I've hurt her on a personal level so I'll apologize on a personal level only. And anyways I have noticed that she likes shawls very much.]

S: Ek baat bata chirkut ke tanne lagta hain ki je silai bunaai ka kaam sirf ladkiyon ka hain
[Sub- Tell me one thing chirkut , do you think that stitching and knitting are only girl's work. ]

Sid: No ma'am aapse aisa kisne kaha. Ye kaam toh koi bhi kar sakta hain iss par ladkiyon ka copyright toh nahin hai.
[Sub- No ma'am who told you that. This work can be done by anybody , girls don't have a copyright on this.]

She was shocked for a bit and happy listening to his POV and then said

S: Jaanto hain hum aise logo ko iss duniya mein jinhe yahin lagto hai ki ye sirf ladkiya kar sakti hai aur yahi ladkiyon ka kaam hai.
[Sub- I know people in this world works who think that this can only be done by girls and is the only work of girls .]

Sid: Aapko pata hai ma'am stitching aur knitting karne mein jitna concerntration aur perfection lagta hain, utna hi concerntration lagta hain drone udaane mein , toh is baar se koi fark nahi padta chahe woh ladka ho ya ladki.
[Sub- You know ma'am the concentration and perfection which is required in stitching and knitting is also required in flowing drones. So it doesn't matter whether the person is a boy or a girl. ]

Sanjana was really impressed with her chirkut after this talk.

★ Flashback ends

He decides that he won't let his Monu bro suffer again this time and leave her dream and will also manaofy his MummyG. He had to do something but what could he do .
Whereas in the mess all recruits were there. They told everything to Dilbaagh Ji about Sid and Monami's phone call, he was also emotional listening to it.
When Sid enters the Mess he sees something actually someone. He can't tell Karan directly or indirectly but this person can. He walks over to the person and says

Sid: Monu ka dream bachane ke liye. Would you help me ?
[Sub- To save Monu's dream would you help me ? ]

The person: Kyun nahi !!
[Sub- Why not ? ]

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Tan tan tara cliffhanger guys.

Guess who the person would be ?
It can be anyone male, female / singular, plural/from the academy, out of the academy anyone.

So guys,
That's it for this chapter.
I hope I didn't disappoint you guys today and the dialogues were a bit different from the serial.
Did you like the twist of everyone except Col.Batra, Mrs.Batra, UstaadG and Karan knowing Monami's truth about leaving.
Do let me know your views.
Also, I hope you guys liked this chapter and if you did please vote and comment.
Will try to update next chapter asap.
If you still not liked tamatar, juta, Chappel i.e. tomatoes, shoes, slippers everything are welcome

Now, Byee guys !!
Loads of love to you ❤️

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