Satwatīnāndānā~The Cynosure O...

By Satyam_Sanatan

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The life story of maharathi abhimanyu Cover credit- @Bloominginmythology More

Disclaimer
Main characters
Invitation and dyut sabha
Aftermath
Like father, like son
Childhood
The Bitter truth
RaudraDhari
My brother Ghatokach
Meeting with my father
Arsu❤
Meeting with juesth mata
Meeting with my soul mate
Wedding and first night
Journey to dwarka
Jealousy
Happiness
taking preparation for war
Uloopi and Iravan
last moments of happiness
Uttar's death
Last night
Death
Arjun's reaction
Revenge and feelings
Saubhadreya~Pride of kuruvansh
Varchas~The Divine Form of Abhimanyu

Subhadra's reaction

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Arjun was feeling like his own heart is bleeding.

Arjun: Madhav! Did something bad happen?

Krishna: In a war, what good thing you can expect, Parth?

Arjun: Madhav! I am having a strange feeling. The same feeling what I felt during Iravan's death. Does it mean I am going to lose someone my own? Abhimanyu? Is he okay?

Krishna: Let's go back to the camp.

Arjun was hearing from soldiers of kauravas side that Satwateya showed great valour today. He smiled hearing that but his smile faded when he heard 7 maharathis and other warriors of kauravas side tortured him mercilessly inside of the chakravyuh. Arjun was shocked and frowned hearing this as he couldn't teach him how to come outside. That soldiers noticed Arjun and went away.

Arjun: Have you heard Madhav?

Krishna: Yes Parth. Let's go to the camp.

Arjun: Madhav! I couldn't teach him how to come outside. What I will say to Chitra if something will happen to my dearest son Abhimanyu? She already bear a lot and I don't think she can bear if anything will happen to her son. I am scared; Madhav! How will she react if she hear her husband and his brothers were not able to protect her son? How I will say face her?

Krishna: Parth, my sister is not that frugal now. She let her son participate in the war knowing about it's consequences only. Now, let's go Parth.

This news went to pandavas shivir. Without Uttara and Subhadra, other pandavpatnis heard this. Draupadi was about to faint but Uloopi held her tightly.

Devika: Do you know what are you saying? I can't believe you. How's this possible when all the sons of Pandu were present there?

Soldier: It's true maharani. Sindhuraj Jayadrath came with the blessing of stopping all the warriors of pandavas side without pandava Arjun.

Valandhara: Where was he when that beasts were torturing his son?

Soldier: He was fighting in another side.

Draupadi: My son abhi left me. How will we face Uttara and auspicious Krishnaa now?

On the other side,

Subhadra was thinking what happened. She was sure nothing had happened with Arjun as Krishna was there then Abhimanyu. But no.... it's not possible because 4 pandavas are there to protect him. Satyabhama went to subhadra after gathering courage. The incarnation of Bhudevi was also scared to tell the truth to the mother who raised her son alone and now had to see his corpse.

Satyabhama: Bhadrey....*in a low voice*

Subhadra: Pranipat bhabhi! See na, I am feeling very restless but I don't know the reason.

Satyabhama smiled controlling her tears and she was not getting that courage to tell this to Subhadra as she knows Subhadra loves her son more than anything and she was scared if Subhadra will do something unexpected after hearing this.

Subhadra was looking at Satyabhama and her quietness was scaring her from the core. Her charming smile was not visible on her face today. Does it mean something bad happened? It seems she came with any bad news today.

Subhadra: What happened bhabhi? Is anything going to happen or happened? Why are you so quiet today?

Satyabhama: What was going to happen, that happened.

Subhadra: Meaning? See, you are also making riddles nowadays like bhrata. *Frowns*

Satyabhama: Nothing. Abhimanyu showed great valour today. Only for him, pandavas won today. His name will be written in the golden letters for his great valour.

Subhadra:I know my son is also a great warrior like my husband. I knew he will make us proud. *smiles*

Satyabhama was going to say her the truth but at that time, a soldier told that pandavas came. Subhadra took the plate of aarti and called Uttara. Then they went outside.

Yudhistir was carrying his corpse. All pandavas were crying and they were thinking that what they will tell to Arjun, Subhadra, Draupadi and Uttara who is expecting. How will Uttara react?

Upapandavas were very sad and they were controlling their tears thinking about their Subhadra maa.

All pandavpatnis were standing quietly and looking down.

Satyaki: Sister Subhadra whom are you going to welcome?

Subhadra: My son who showed great valour today. Obviously he deserves a warm welcome from me and his father.

Satyaki: Subhadra! Don't need to do this.Are you going to welcome your son's corpse?*sad*

Subhadra: Satyaki! Do you know what are you saying? How dare you to say this? Didn't your tongue shiver before saying this once?*angrily*

Prativindya: He is telling truth, mata.

Subhadra: You are also saying this? How can you do this kind of fun with your mother? Did I teach you this?

Nakul: They are telling truth bhabhi.

Subhadra: I am not going to believe you all. I know you all planned to prank me and maybe my son Abhimanyu planned to prank his mother today. I am not going to leave this naughty boy today. Where is he?

Bheem: No one is pranking with you sister. Please control yourself.

Subhadra: You too bhrata? Please don't say this. Where is juesth Yudhistir? Juesth Yudhistir, please say something.

Yudhistir came ahead with the corpse of Abhimanyu and keep it on the ground not looking at Subhadra and others. Subhadra was shocked and she was not ready to believe.

Subhadra:No, it can't happen. Putra.... *shouts*

Uttara: Arya...*shouts*

Uttara fainted seeing the dead body of her husband. Valandhara and vijaya took her inside.

Subhadra sat on the ground with a thud.

Subhadra: No...it can't happen. I can't believe this. Abhi! Please open ur eyes. *cries*

Draupadi was standing like a stone. Karenumati was trying to comfort her

Subhadra: Bhabhi Satyabhama! You told me....

Satyabhama: I meant this only my dear.

At that time, Arjun came there. He saw everyone is sitting there. Uloopi and Draupadi are standing like a stone. A unknown fear grabbed his heart. He looked at Krishna who's face was expressionless.

Arjun: What is happening here?

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