the demon is born
by manigandanrmec
completed : -
rating : -
tw⚠️ : car accident
chapters : 4 (ongoing)
age group : -
genre : mystery thriller
representation : -
summary :
investigator john, along with other detectives, try to
investigate the series of mass murders from the 1930s period, but the evidence leads to shocking events of a dangerous murderer behind his dreadful story.
will john able to bring the mysterious killer in front of the law?.
or will it lead to destruction of humanity... over generation to be reminded.
notes :
i think the summary needs a bit of work. the last paragraph could be one sentence/question. i would advise you to just read through it again and edit it. other than that, i don't see a problem with the title and cover.
unfortunately, i didn't enjoy reading this story and i think it is because i don't like the writing style. i'm still trying to figure out if it was the misuse of words and commas or the sentence structure but something was off. like there was no natural flow.
i can tell that you're capable of writing a great novel but sadly i couldn't read more than a chapter.
good luck and keep on writing!
okay that's it!