by: redrainbow13
At first I would like to thank you for giving us a chance. Hope you would keep supporting us throughout our journey.
Reviewer: lead-with-love
I loved the cover. It's joyful, happy, fun and all the things that give out positive vibes. Next stop, there are a bit grammatical errors in certain places. You can correct it by taking time and reading it (like super minor errors)
I loved how you portrayed LGBTQ in your story. THAT Abby girl is a bitch who represented those mean people in our society. On the other hand, Sophie is the person who lets u know you are not alone.
I liked the vibe of your story. In some places it felt like the story is going a bit slow. It would be better to spice things up a little bit. But I really loved how you put your thoughts through young love. It's been really a good read.
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