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Reviewer: Arisha_Ibnath
The title is unique and up to the point. And your cover is interesting too. But if you want to attract more readers you can change your cover.
The blurb is beautiful. From the beginning the story is promised with something amazing and it made it to that. The flow was really good. And what amazed me is how you presented the story from POV to everyone's point of view. I really loved that. But is your story fully complete? I feel like there is more to say. As you didn't mention anything or no authors note.
Now the story. Its so beautiful and kept me hooked up until I finished reading it. Strong background story of every Character and very breezy. I loved the chemistry between Zach and Aaliya, their dialogues to their relation. It was "Ah--maa--zing".
But the last part of the story made me unsatisfied. While Steven and Audra were fighting where was Jayden? She was really, powerful right? I guess Audras screaming made them halt but Jayden's part in this fight was poor show. And Steven kept hitting everybody and the focus was just on him. You can make them a little productive in this fight. Personally I really loved your story from beginning to end. The last part was unsatisfying
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