broken shells (fixing some serious grammar errors)

ch.13 Raph's p.o.v

"Hey guys I'm goin out." I said grabbing my jacket
"Alright then make sure something good happens out there kid." yelled Gris
"You got it." I yelled back leaving
I took my usual route hopping that I might run into the girl aging. She was so easy to beat up last time but she did take awhile to beat down because she put up one heck of a fight. I just don't get it though she wasn't from here she had to be from the upperside but she fought like she knew what she was doing. Almost like she had been taught but for got how to fight. Anyways back to combing the city for something to smash.
Tay's pov
"Hey Casey i'm leaving to the serface for a while." I said
"Alright Tay make sure your carful and don't get lot up there for me." He said jokeing around
"Will do Casey." I said skipping out the sewer
I started walking the street twoards the rats place like i romised him. When I ran into him aging the guy who beat me up.
"Well, well, well look what I found aging." he said coming closer
"Look don't do this its not who you are." I said trying to stay calme
"Wow you changed your look girly and how would you possibly know my story." He said tuff and glaring at me
"your name is Raphal, you go by Raph, you used to live in the sewers with your four brothers but then something hapened and you four split up. some how you ended up being part of the urle dragon." I spilled out of my mouth so fast it was hard to stop
"Look kid I don't know where you came from or how you know my life my life but I want to know what game your playing right now!" He yelled coming really close to me
" Look I"m not playing anything at all okay. Look I know that everything may seem fine over there and good but you can get out because trust me sooner or later they will eat you alive and all the good will be gone." I said pushing my finger in to his chest
"Look kid I don't have time for this why do you insist you know me and what I'm going through you don't know my life." He yelled taking my cruches as I feel to the ground ripping off my jacket
"I don't know your life but I know mine." I said flashing him my shoulder
"Thats a ... but .... why did you leave?" he said dumbfounded
"I left because the purle dragons they aren't good people getting mixed with them is bad news. look I don't know your story your right about that but i do know my life and how bad it was. you see my mom, dad, and sister all left me in an ally way to die. When they left Slash fund me. He picked me up in his arms and tossed me ove his shoulder saying lok i'm going to hurt you but you will be one of now yu got that. I was so scared that I just nodded and they all trained me and by the time I was seven I had the tattoo that you see right now and by the time I was eleven I relized something my life didn't feel right they were sucking the good out of me." i said strugeling to get up as tears were escaping as I scolded my self to stop but culdn't
"Here kid." Raph said handing me my cruches and helping me up looking to see if any body was watching before he did it
"Thanks." I said through tears
"Don't mention it punk. Look I get it what you are trying to do but my life aint the simple type can you understand that?" he asked
"yeah but one question." I said
"Yes what?" he said anoyed
"Do you ever think of Donnie?" I asked his face turning cold
"How do you know him?" He asked shocked and I responded with one name
"Casey Sam Jones." I said turning away and watching his mouth drop open a little but he quickly closed it
Raph's pov
what that kid knows Casey and Donnie wow. I can't ever understand that, why did she tell me? All I have ever done to that kid is bash her in and almost kill her. She trusted me and told me her life but why? I know Donnie wouldn't have ever put her up to it because he knew if he did I would tell.Something tells me though that even he doesn't know about her and what she is. something tells me that if I tell instead of the kid living it will kill her. I wont tell but I refuse to go back not after all that I've done
tay's pov
"I was beging to think you were whats called a no show." said the rat as I walked
"Sorry sir I was trying to get here I ran into some trouble nothing major though." I said coming in
"I see have a seat." he said gesturing to a coner with mat and a pillow
"Thanks." I said placing my foot on the pillow
"How did you get hurt?" He asked
"I got attacked by someone." I said quiet
" I see, defend your self no?" he asked
"Yes very much sir." I said
"I can teach you." He said looking in my eyes
" To defend my self?" I asked intreged
"Yes keep your promise show up here everyday and I will train you." he said
"Sounds like a plan." I said as he helped me up and I walked out
ATHUORS NOTE
hey people heres the latest update to my story hope you guys like it. Now i have a question and I just want to know what you guys think because i have the story already writen out word for word so it takes a long time to post but how do you think that my romance is doing am i doing a good job? I hope so because I don't want you guys to get bored. well guys i also have some news 7 more chapters left =( but don't worry i have a second book in tyhe makeing as we spaek. i wont be updating for a while camp and school starts right after that. if you made it all the way to the end of this rant thanks. well talk to all yous later. keep rocking!
P.S
DON'T FORGET TO TUNE INTO NICK THIS SUNDAY AY 11:00 AM IF YOU WATCH THE NEWER TMNT THEY FINALLY GO BACK TO NEW YORK HOPE TO HERE YOUR THOUGHTS ON THAT AFTER IT IS OVER
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Taylor covington