broken shells (fixing some serious grammar errors)

ch.17 taylors pov

        as i walked home from the rats place I couldn't help feel  like something or some one was following me. i stopped for a second to look at my phone when somone came behind me and i was knoked out and drug away.

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        when i woke up the room was dark and cold, and i could feel blood on the the side of my face dripping down my neck and onto mmy shoulder.

"Hello." i said my voice barly auditable

"Quiet!" yelled a girl who was kicking my side causing me to cough up blood

"whats wrong with you?" i asked wimpering as i felt my side bleeding so much that there was now a dark red puddle

"Master shredder will be happy that i've captuered you." said the girl

        she was dressed in all black with short choppy hair. her boots were combat style and had bloody silver spikes on the end from where  she had kicked me only moments ago

"Cam is the patient ready for being torchured?" said a man with menecing, metal claws

"Yes shredder." she said chaining me to a chair

" so this leonardo's girl, weak." He said

"wait who are?" i asked knowing the answer couldn't mean anything good

" I'm shredder the one who changed your little other half into what he is now." said he siad his claws cuting into my back and visously cutting through my soft fles. i let out an agonizing scream

"yeah me and him figured out how to take your mutant friends and well make them human." said Cam kicking me in the shin

"what do .... you ..... mean?" i stuttered

"oh you don't know can i tell her master please." begged the girl

"silence you weakling and you may." said shredder claws still implanted in my back like they would never move

"yes master ," she said turining to me as shredder detracted his claws and i started to see black around the eges " your boy friend and his brothers have a long history with my master. their rat master splinter took my shredder's love away( cam is like fifteen fyi so no love intrest there more like leader than anything) and well she died because of it. so your little boy friend later dared to take on my master with his brothers and lets just say one thing lead to another and opps turtles became humans." she said cleaning blood off her boots so they shined a bright silver once more

"what," i thought  " my boy firend's life everything i thought he was a lie. His brothers and him mutants just like the rat i had met. Master splinter had beenthe rat i was training with who leo feared was gone and I couldn't tell him anything because i had made a promis. Leo is a turtle i still can't belive it." the thought hit me like a tone of bricks. i thought that he was better, that he loved me butr how could he when he lied about being a freek of nature, a person who never gave me a second chance wouldn't of felt guilty about this, but Leo my love he should share everything with me at least i thought thats what his valuse were. i was lied to though and he doesn't even care and it stings worst than shredders claws in my back and cam's spikes in my side.

        Worst of all i'm going to die here and never get the chance to tell him my deepest, darkest secret of all. I know he will hate me for it, but i need to know something before i die, and that is that Leo hears from that i was a purple dragon. i was a fool, a fool in love and afraid to tell him i didn't want him to go. to leave because turth is that would rip my heart out and smash it in to infinty amount of pices. with this my greates fear creeps up on me like an ivisable hand choking the life out of me and i relize that his brother Raph is going to tell him first and Leo with his pationate eyes will have a fire that burns in his soul that says " taylor you are dead to me."

        as the very thought of those words creeps into my mind tears flood down my face like a water fall, and cam and shredder sart laughing maniacally as thunder and lightening roar with all thier might through the sky as a heavey down poor comes

"yes my plane is working perfectly soon i'll get what i wanted all those years ago the fate of those turtles ond o'neail will be finished," shredder said in triumph "and cam my darling, my trusty nija you will get to be the one that delivers the finale blow to the turtles and the we storm thier master and end the Hamato reing." He finished taking of his helment reveling a nasty scar that was burnt there permently

               the only thought thaqt was left in the back of my mind was "this means war."

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