Wayfarer's Lamppost Book Club - Vol. 2

Round 147 - August 2 - August 8, 2020

COMMENTING PERIOD: Sunday, August 2 – Saturday, August 8, 2020, 11:59 P.M. PDT

NOTE: Please let your partners know when they have reached the climax of your book so that they can use the Climax Comment Topic. We will no longer be listing it on the rounds as the club has grown so large it is hard to keep track. Thank you.

COMMENT TOPIC:

Show vs. Tell. It's fundamental in any good writing. Comment on the author's ability to convey their story by "showing" it to the readers. Min. length: 3 sentences each chapter. Please post each response in the corresponding chapter.META ANALYSIS (Each chapter, in-line comments, at least 5 per chapter):

👍 or THUMBS UP—Elaborate why you think so. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

☕ or NEEDS CAFFEINE—Elaborate why you think improvement is needed. (at least one time each chapter [1 MANDATORY per chapter])

💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]

😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]

❤ or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]

😵 or CONFUSED (don't understand something) [OPTIONAL]

😂 or LAUGHING (made you laugh) [OPTIONAL]

ASSIGNMENTS:

Member - Partner - Partner's Book - Chapters

ENFORCER:  AmericanBruja

AloofFloof: HKelle Rise the Red Sun - 14, 15

AuthorJMColes: PictureXThisX Beyond the Wildlands - 5.1, 5.2, 6.1

BreathingChemicals: JohnThomas1616 The Ones and Only - 27, 28

HKelle: AloofFloof Riven Isles - 15, 16