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1. Every time it Rains - Taefantasies
Judge #1
Title: [2/2]
Cover: [2.5/3]
Description: [2/4]
Hook: [4/5]
Unique: [4/5]
Flow: [4.5/5]
Delivery: [5/5]
Pacing: [4.5/5]
The sequence of Events: [4.5/5]
Writing Style: [9/10]
Reader EI: [9/10]
Characters EI: [10/10]
Character Dev: [10/10]
Logic: [10/10]
Grammar: [9.5/10]
Vocab: [10/10]
Overall: [9.5/10]
Satisfaction: [4.5/5]
Total: [114.5/124]
Review
Description→ It doesn't show anything about the book. Maybe if you added something that relates to the rain and a few catchy dialogues, it will do the trick.
Plot→ For starters it's really sweet and sad, but there a few things I want to point out:
(-) The friends with benefits discussion happened all of a sudden. It felt forced and eventually I had to take it as a fact.
(-) Since the friends-with-benefits thing was sudden, I felt it was because of the characters built up. I didn't feel like either Taehyung or Soo Ah will be into that kind of thing since their characters didn't hint anything related to that side. I mean sex and that kind of stuff.
(-) It would've been better if you tried to add false hope for readers to make the ending less predictable. The plot isn't that unique, but it was absolutely well delivered so great job on that.
Writing style→ It was pretty good, but there were repetitions of emotions and other things which in all honesty, I skimmed through because as I said it was mere repetition but in a rephrased form.
Overall→ This book is certainly underrated. It was full of emotions, and it was one hell of a rollercoaster, but damn, it was more than good to read. I would like to ask for a sequel, please 😂
Judge #2
Title: [1.5/2]
Cover: [2.5/3]
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