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This scene starts from when neil brings Avni Juhi and Mishti home when Juhi tries to create a scene by leaving the house.....

With some changes..

N: Avni kya zaroorat thi yeh sab karne ki...

A: Neil meri baat toh suno...

N: kya sunu aur kyu... Tumne ne kabhi suna hai meri baath.....

A: Ne.. Neil pls ek baar

N: No Avni Not this time... Tumhe vo sab kehna nhi chahiye tha and tum Juhi ko thappad kaise maar sakte ho.....

A: kya? Yeh... Yeh tum kya bol rhe ho aur yeh kisne bola..

N: Juhi ne bola... How can u do that Avni?

A: Neil maine aisa nhi kiya

N: jhut mat bolna Avni... Mai jaanta hu jab tumhe gussa aata hai tum kuch bhi kar sakti ho (being so angry and irritated)

A: Tumhe lagtha hai ki I can stoop this low? And you trust Juhi this blindly

N: hn karta hu mai aankh band karke trust....

Avni feels heartbroken

They kept arguing on this and at a point Neil's anger raises and he slaps Avni hardly on her cheeks..

N: Bas Avni... Bahut hogya......

Saying this he leaves a heartbroken avni behind in the room

Here I  Hall everyone were waiting for Avneil to come down for having dinner...

Neil comes down and sits in the dining and Juhi takes this as an opportunity and sits near Neil...

B: Neil , Avni kaha hai?

N: mujhe kya pata hoga agar usko khana hoga toh vo aa jayegi... Aap uska wait mat karo.... Saying this he started eating......


Everyone sensed the anger in his voice... They decided to speak about it later.... As they didn't want to create a issue....

After few minutes Avni came down wearing a black jean and white off shoulder tops with a shrug and sneakers and a clutch in her hand....

A: Mummy ji , Bebe, Papa ji mai bahar jaa rhi hu...

S: Puttar kaha ja rhi hai...

A: Mummy ji mere frnd ki yaha sleepover hai and mujhe abhi call karke bataya usne isiliye mai vaha ja rhi hu... Sorry Maine aapse pucha hi nhi ki mai jaa sakti hu ya nhi

N: logon ko sirf apni manmaani karne ki aadat hai salah puchne ki nhi....

P: Puttar tu jaa aur agar kuch chahiye toh hume ek msg kardena...

A: thanks Papa ji... Mai chalti hu...

Just then Bebe notices something on Avni's cheeks...

B: Puttar ek second......

A: ji Bebe

Avni stops... Bebe goes near her and touches her cheeks... Avni winces in pain..

B: yeh kaisa hua ??

A: Vo Bebe.... (She was fumbling)

B: Oo madam Madonna jaake ice cubes aur ointment le aana...

S: ji Bebe

Shewtha brings them and Bebe massages her cheeks with ice and then applies ointment....

Avni winces in pain

A: Bebe bas hogya mai late ho rhi hu... Mai chalti hu...

P: Beta pehale yeh bata ki tujhe yeh kaise laga....

A: Papa ji vo bathroom mai fisal gyi toh diwar pe lag gya.... Seeing Neil... Aur itna zor se laga ki .... Khair chodo... Mai chalti hu... Aur agar late hua toh kya mai Neelamaa ke ghar chali jau... Bahut din hogye unse milke...

B: hn puttar yeh bhi koi puchne wala baath hai kya... Tillu jao usse uske frnd ke ghar chod aa...

A: nhi Bebe mai chali jaungi aap chinta mat karo... Neil ka ek case hai.... Jisme he is so much involved usse use case ko complete karne do...

P: Na puttar Neil tujhe chod aayega...

Neil and Avni go out and avni sits in car without even telling a word... Neil also sits inside the car and starts the Car... Just then he notices how swollen her cheeks were and how blood ofen oozes out from her lips which she kept on wiping constantly


He felt so bad... And guilty for what he did and wanted to apologize to her... He was about to ask her sorry When she told...

A: ummm... Idhr rok do I can go by own...

N: Vo avi.... (Before he could complete)

A: It's Avni... And hn u dont need to worry I won't tell anyone...

N: Meri baat suno.. Pls...

A: Aree aap kyu sorry bol rhe hai sorry toh mujhe bolni chahiye sorry and hn thanku... Don't worry meri frnd aa rhi hai mujhe pick karne maine usko bol diya hai vo mujhe yaha se pick up kare...

N: Av.... (They hear a horn sound)

A: thanx for dropping me here(saying this she got down and went away).....

Precap (batau kya 🙄🙄)

With love
Tezz 😍




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