Hii guyss, my younger brother had an assignment. He had to write a story with a maximum of 1000 words. He wrote the story and I edeted it. He is really happy with it and I thought, i could pit it in my story/book-thing, please let me know what you think about it! It would mean a lot to the both of us :D
One hell of a ride
"Jim! Jim where is Jennifer? do you know where Jennifer is?!'' He sounds in panic.
"No I don't know where she is. She was here in the train, with us." said Jim also clearly in panic.
"OMG she is abducted I know it for sure!" Says Emma and tears gather in the corners of her eyes.
Emily stands up and walks towards Emma to give her an comforting hug. "Don't panic Emma," said Emily, "we will find her".
"Huh, why does the train car stops?"Jim is standing in the middle of us and there is a deep frown between his eyebrows.
12 hours before the train ride.
Ringgg!
"Okay class, there is no home work for Monday. Enjoy your weekend!" Mrs. Jefferson tells us.
"Hey Jim what's up?" said Jacob as we walk out of the classroom.
"The roof, the roof is up." Jim says and he chuckled a little at his own joke.
"Hahaha, you're so funny." Jacob replies. "But what I was going to ask you, there is an awesome new ghost ride at the theme park, would you like to join us? Emma, Emily en Jennifer will be there too." Said Jacob.
"I'll ask my mother what she thinks about it." said Jim.
"Call me if you can join us!" Jacob says to Jim and they separate.
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"Hi Jacob, how was school? By the way, did you ask Jim if he could join you to that theme park?" Jacob's mom asks him.
"Yes mom, I did. But he had to discuss it with his mother, so I don't know if he can join us, yet."He replies..
"Okay, it's fine then. " Jacob's mother nods and she walks towards the kitchen.
The phone rings.
"Jacob, Jim is on the phone!"
Jacob walks towards his mother to take the phone from her. "Hey, Jim how do you do?"
"I am fine thanks for asking." Jim replies. "And about the theme park, I can come! But can you give me some details?"
"We'll be there around eight o'clock, is that OK man?" said Jacob.
~~~
"Hey guys, how are all of you doing?" said Jacob.
"I'm fine, but where is Jim? " Emily asked in general.
" Oh look, there he is." said Jennifer "Let's go inside."
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"This popcorn is so good!" Says Jacob as he grabs some more popcorn. "Hey Emma, do you know what time it is?" Asked Jacob with his mouth full of popcorn.
"It's eleven o'clock, the park nearly closes." Emma replies and grabs some popcorn too.
"OK, let's take the ghost train, just as an final act." Jim suggest.
The groups just replies with some "Oh, yea that should be fun." And some "okay's". And they all walked towards the train.
"This place is so creepy!" Emily whined.
"Ooh shut up Emily, don't be a coward! Let's take a seat and ride."Jacob says to Emily.
"Aaaah don't scream that loud Emma! It isn't that scary!" Says Jim with a laugh.
"Jim! Jim where is Jennifer? do you know where Jennifer is?!'' He sounds in panic.
"No I don't know where she is. She was here in the train, with us." said Jim also clearly in panic.
"OMG she is abducted I know it for sure!" Says Emma and tears gather in the corners of her eyes.
Emily stands up and walks towards Emma to give her an comforting hug. "Don't panic Emma," said Emily, "we will find her".
"Huh, why does the train car stops?"Jim is standing in the middle of us and there is a deep frown between his eyebrows.
They went outside the train and go to search Jennifer, but they couldn't find her. They looked everywhere, and they saw it.
There when five zombies eating something, they saw it from a distance but they saw it clearly.
Oh no this couldn't be real, thought Jacob. Please don't let the thing they're eating be Jennifer.
But on that moment they saw her head with long blond hair and she had no eyes anymore. At that moment they sprint away from the incident but then they saw other people in panic. They went to the other people.
They all told each other what they saw. They all saw a girl getting eaten by zombies. On that moment they saw a horde of zombies.
"Come follow me!" One man yelled, he wasn't older than twenty-five. They followed him to a shooting rage. "Come we need to get some guns to shoot the zombies."
When they got the guns they saw Jennifer, but not the same Jenny.
A zombie Jenny.
Emma and Emily were screaming on top of their lungs. They started running. "Come let's go into the car and start it!"
They started the attraction and climb into the cars. When they were at the top, they could see the park and there where zombies all over the park.
The other people, who they've met, where gone. They were alone, four friends in a car. They knew that they were going to be eaten by the zombies.
The carts keep moving, way too fast for the four friends. They were scared and they didn't know what to do. And on that moment Jim said, "I know that we are going to die, but maybe we are going to survive this. We are the ones with the guns, so we can try to shoot them."
Jacob shot first, he shot right into a zombie's head.
"Headshot!" Yelled Jim.
Both Jacob and Jim started shooting, nearly missing anything. But Emma and Emily nearly hit anything, they where to scared. When they were almost at the ground, the zombies already climbed up to the car. They were just a few feet away.
"Jacob! Jacob wake up you already late for school!"
"Yes mom, I'm coming!"
" Jacob there is a new attraction in the theme park you could invite Jim, Emma, Jennifer and Emily."
Nooooooooooooooooooo
The End.
