Neverland, Wonderland, Narnia !SECOND BOOK TO SURE, I'M FINE!

I need your opinion.

So I'm thinking about redoing my first book, aka Ivy.

Now what do you guys think about this?

I have a much better idea and I think it will actually spike a bit of interest :P

I have a new name and everything.

Basically it will be called 'Paper.'

And the description will be,

'I'm not able to express my feelings, but simply give me a piece of paper, and I'll explain the world to you.'

COMMENT WHAT YOU THINK KAY THANKS ILY <3