This story is pretty bad right now, I think. But I won't give up on it, so I'll try to change some things, but keep it quite similar... get rid of the demon stuff (who know's what I was on, haha). It may be difficult, since I'm going into sixth form... soo much work :(
So basically any advice or point of views would be appreciated :)
***Also I can't believe that this story's passed 3000 reads *•*
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The Crimson Assassin
FantasyElentiya Savie is a 17 year old, first class assassin. She's been known to have a sharp-tongue and not follow the rules. After breaking yet another rule, Elentiya has been banned from The Assassin's Order for 2 years. Now in an unknown land and forc...
