overall enjoyment
for lovers of this genre they would enjoy this well written book
Calamity | The 125th Hunger Games - CherryQueen55
JUDGE:
• DETECTED NO MISTAKES
• AUTHOR MADE IT HER OWN
• WHY DID SHE NOT NOTICE HER FRIEND MISSING ON THE BUS
• SPOT ION DESCRIPTIVE SAW THE SCENES UNFOLDING
• WELL WRITTEN, PLENTY OF DESCRIPTIONS, THE STORY WAS VERY INTERESTING
Intelligence Isn't a Magical Thing - Flutterbolt667
JUDGE: Lily-B28
- punctuation was good along with capalization. Well written and easy to understand word choice.
- I haven't read any books about these characters, but I do feel like they were created before hand (this would be a great fan fiction).
- description of characters looks, personality, and backstories were phenomenal. I watched them grow through out the first couple of chapters and thought you did very good in the way the plot moved.
- again plot moved along at a good pace, I understood everything I was reading.
- I really enjoyed this story. All of the following criteria, as seen, so high shows just how great of a book I think this is. Continue to correct and revise your work.
JUDGE: anonymous
GRAMMAR
the book was in 3rd person it seemed like limited in some points and omipresent in others
UNIQUENESS OF THE PLOT
Couldn't tell what the plot was- falling for each other?
CHaracter building
had a hard time telling who was who as little points about them were awkwardly interjected without reference Magical friend/science lover)
writing style
Not bad- nned to invoke some atmosphere and the senses, tighten up on the grammar and use of punctuation
overall enjoyment
if the plot were cleared up and actual names were used at least in the begining to get the characters straight it might be a good read
JohnLock: The Prince and His Personal Guardian - CarrieGChandler
JUDGE: Happysmile4721
This is an amazing book! It's very descriptive and has no grammar mistakes (that I've noticed). Since it's set in the past, I didn't understand certain terms/words. I really enjoyed this book and am already reading the sequel.
The 7 Princes - pinkskyjihye
JUDGE: -
• structure lacking/rules not followed ellipses need three dots not two lower case "i"
• the structre was so distracting i couldn't follow the plot
• i didn't see much of bts chAracters in the first few chapters-a pity
• could not recognize one
• no real plot/no structure/ made a little sense but things were too convenient (cousin training at the palace as well?)
The Broken Diaries - sadcookii3
JUDGE: Lily-B28
- very well written, few mistakes.
- book was more so poetry(even though you stared it wasn't) and I feel like your quotes were very personal, overall uniqueness was fairly high. Although a little dark/depressing I get where you are coming from.
- no character was made here, this is a compilation of quotes and sayings.
- small blurbs, not a story. I'm sorry but I feel like this is in the wrong category. More suitable for poetry or other.
- although depressing, I actually really enjoyed reading this, (not in a twisted way...) EXTRA: I hope you have someone to talk to about your struggles and your thoughts, I'm always here as a judge but also as a friend.
WAVE 1 - MISCELLANEOUS
Magsimula sa umpisa
