- contest #5 results -

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Entries (in no particular order) :

DestinyErza

Box-of-Horror

Shaldeen101

xkittythebeastx

Without further ado...

In First Place, we have Box-of-Horror!

We loved the part where there was the note saying no one would believe her, and I thought it was a sharp and clever twist you made there, making the water the murderer. It chilled me to the bone when you started writing about how the girl was de-fleshed!

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In Second Place, we have xkittythebeastx!

Your story was amazing! I love how you wrote part of the story in the villian's point of view... but yet she wasn't entirely the villian, but part victim too. There's a lot of thinking involved, and short as your story was, it made my heart stop at the scary part. Literally.

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And in Third Place, DestinyErza.

Your ending was good as it wasn't something expected. Well done!

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If you wish to receive a review on your entry, private message my personal account Cady_Cheshire.

Congratulations to all the winners! First place winner, please PM @psychejay personally for your cover. If you do not wish to receive a cover, please let us know. You're strongly encouraged to send your respective stories to RelebornDavid via email to feature your stories in "One-Shots And Short Stories". If you do not wish for your story to be featured in there, that's fine too. PM her for her email if you're interested!


Additional prizes will be given out shortly. Thank you for entering, and don't be discouraged if you didnt win -- keep writing and trying, and you'll win one day!

- cady

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