Sukor - changes

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Hi I hope this time u will have enough to read 😊n if not then not 😋.

Recap; Imli used Suraj name n hit Chakor. Suraj reveals the truth that he knows KN reality. Chakor runs away.
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Suraj; KN u have done alot. U harmed the poor n innocent people of the village. KN; Suraj! how dare u to call me with my name. I'm still ur father n u have to honour n respect me. Suraj; U want respect? Do u respect the people of the village? Honour? do u even know what honour means that u expect it? U r just KN Rajvanshi a tyrant who has no heart n even use kids for his wrong work.

Suraj; KN tum ne bhot hi zulum kiye Hain un mujhboor aur beechare ghareeb insaanon per. KN; Suraj! yeh kaisa tareeqa hai mere naam se mujhe pukara tumne. Hum abhi bhi tumhare pitah hain izzaat se baat karo!. Suraj; Izzaat? Are tumhe pata bhi hai Izzaat kiya hoti hai? ke izaat kisko karte hain aur kyun karte hain? Kiya tumne kabhi bhi un gaunwalon kis Izzaat ki? Nahi. Tum sirf KN Rajvanshi ho. Ek Zalim admi jiske paas dil hi nahi hai. Bas apna kaam karne ke liye masoomse se baachon ka bhi istemal karte ho.

KN raised his hand. Suraj!. Suraj was standing in front of him with no fear. Teju; KN don't u dare to touch my son. KN; ur son? then who Am I? he shout at her. Teju; U r my husband. But Suraj is my son. My only child whom I send far away from u. That ur bad skills won't be adopted by him. KN; U!. Suraj; KN I'm warning u. Don't u dare to raise ur voice or hand against my mother. I will lose my kind.

KN ne apna haath uthaija. Suraj!. Suraj khara raha KN ke samne uske ahkhon main koi khauff nahi tha. Teju; KN khabardar agar apne mere bete pe haath uthaija. KN; Aapka beta? toh phir hum koun hain? woh cheekh ke poochbheta. Teju; haan pati ho humare. Par Suraj mera beta hai. Mera ek lauta beta hai jisko maine apne se dhur bheja sirf isliye ke tumhara bura saaya na lage mere baache per. KN; Kiya!. Suraj; KN hum tumhe ek baar hi kahenge. Khabardar jo apna haath yah awaaz meri maa par uthaija. Jaan se mardenge.

Mohanlal; Suraj u r a shame. Suraj want to say something but Teju stopped him. Teju; Suraj I'm not scared of anyone here u go n get Chakor back it's no use to talk with them. Suraj; Maa u r right,  I need to find her.

Mohanlal; Suraj tum humare naam pe ek dhaba ho. Suraj kuch bolne wala hi tha lekin Teju ne rohk diya. Suraj yeh koi waqt nahi hai inke saath behas karne ka jaou our Chakor ko leaou hum inse darte nahi hain. Suraj; haan maa aap sahi kehrahi hain. Hume Chakor ko dhoondhna hoga.
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Suraj left the haveli to search for Chakor.

Suraj - where has she gone? -
Suraj - Kahan gayi hogi? -

Suraj searched the whole village but couldn't find her. Chagan was on his way home. Suraj n he bump into each other. Suraj; sorry. Chagan; u... it's ok. Chagan was moving but Suraj stopped him. Chagan; what is this leave me. Suraj; sorry but I need ur help. Chagan; my help? Suraj; Chakor...? Chagan; what is with Chakor? Suraj; well nothing but... he told him everything. Chagan; these people. Suraj; Do u know where she could be? Chagan nod. He told him abt an old cottage. Where Chakor hungout when she is / was sad.

Suraj poora gaon Chakor kis talaash pe dehk bheta. Lekin woh kahin nazar nahi ayi. Chagan apni dhulaan bankarke jahraha tha. Suraj aur Chagan ke takaar hoohi. Suraj; maaf karna. Chagan; tum... theek hai. Chagan apne raaste pe jahraha tha ke Suraj usse rohk bheta. Chagan; yeh kiya hai choro mujhe. Suraj; maaf karna par mujhe tumhari maadat chaije. Chagan; meri maadat?. Suraj; Chakor...? Chagan; kiya huwa Chakor ko? Suraj; woh kuch nahi... par... Woh Chagan ko poori baat bata bheta. Chagan; yeh Haveliwale. Suraj; kiya tumhe pata hai ke Chakor kahan ho sahkti hai? Chagan haan kar bheta. Woh Suraj ko bata raha tha ke Chakor ek poorane jhophre main chali jahti hai jab woh dhuki hoti hai.

Suraj; thank u. I will find her. Chagan; maybe she is right?. Suraj; what do u mean? Chagan; I mean Chakor was right abt u 😊. U r different from the rest of the Rajvanshi family. Suraj; Thank u. I think I should leave n look for her. Chagan; best of luck. Suraj; bye. Chagan; bye.

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