Sukor- Love has no barriers (editing)

Sukor - innocent laughs

Hi glad u liked the way of writing 😊.

Recap; Chakor was in the woods n was surrounded by goons. The kids looked n fight for her. Suraj was called from the other kids n beat the goons up. The kids n Suraj have kind relationship n Suraj promised them nothing bad will happen in future.

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Scene 1

Suraj; Chakor tum bhag kyun ghayi thi? Chakor; aapne mujhpe awaaz uthai.... main daar ghayi aur bhag ghayi. Baache apne ankhon ko ghuma bhetein jai se ke Suraj. Chakor; aap kiya huwa? yeh mat kehna ke yeh sab humari ghalti hai. Suraj; are nahi kisi ne bhi yeh nahi kaha. Par yeh tge koun? Chakor; humain nahi maloom. Suraj; Kuch kaha tha unhone? Chakor; nahi to.

Suraj; Chakor y u run away? Chakor; u shout at me... I got scared n run away. The kids rolled their eyes like Suraj. Chakor; what now don't say that's my fault. Suraj; no one said it's ur fault btw who were they? Chakor; don't know. Suraj; did they say anything to u? Chakor; no.
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Scene 2

Paakhi; agar hum yahaan per rehenge to wo aur logon ke saath wapis bhi aah sahkte hain. Suraj; theek kaha tumne chalo. Chakor has bheti. Suraj ne apna haath bharaya tha Paakhi ke liye lekin uska haath pakar bheti Chakor. Suraj ko to jhatka laga dil main phatak phatne lagain. Chakor ke haath naaram the woh janta hai ke Chakor kitna kam karti hai aur uske bawajood bhi Chakor ke haath naraam aur garam the. Dono to ek dusre main khohgaye.

Paakhi; If we stay here like that they could return with more people. Suraj; U r absolutely right. Let's go. Chakor was smiling. Suraj had stretched his hand forward to Paakhi but it was Chakor who took his hand. Suraj got a current through his heart fireworks were exploding in him. Chakors hand was soft. Suraj knows how much she works despite of that her hands remain soft n very warm. Both were lost into each other.
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Scene 3

Baablu; lagta hai Suraj bhai ko humari Chakoria Di bhot pasand ayi hai. Munni; haan dehko to sahi kaisi yeh haath pakar kar khare rehgaye. Paakhi; haan jaise philmo main hota hai. Raju; kiya hota hai?. Paakhi; dekho. Wo isse haath per dehkno ko aur chereh ko dehkne ke liye bol rahi thi. Raju; mujhe samjh main nahi ayaa. Paakhi, Munni aur Baablu; pyaar dehk yeh dono to gaye. Raju; oh. 😅.

Baablu; looks like our Suraj Bro likes our Chakor sis. Munni; yes just look how they r holding hands. Paakhi; it's just like in movies. Raju; what happens? Paakhi; look. She told him to look carefully on their hands n faces. Raju; I didn't get it. The trio; love look they r lost into each other.
Raju; oh 😅.
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Scene 4

Paakhi; chalo inko hosh main leh aaten hain. Baablu; ruhko mere paas toh bhoot acha tariqa hai. Woh tin; kiya?. Baablu; suno.... Paakhi; wah Baablu. Munni; bhoot hi aacha tariqa hai. Raju; is baar to main saab samajh gaya.

Paakhi; let's get them back. Baablu; wait I have a great idea. The trio; what? Baablu; listen... Paakhi; wow Baablu. Munni; its a really good idea. Raju; this time I got it all.
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Scene 5

Suraj aur Chakor to baas ek dusre ko dehkte hi rehgaye. Baablu apne jaib se ek choto phataka nikal bhetha. Paakhi; isse jaloge kaise? Munni; mere paas maachis nahi hai. Raju; ruhko main bata hoon. Woh teeno ka muun bhigar bhetein. Paakhi; Koi aur kuch bata na jhata hai. Nahi theek hai. Raju kaafi ghusse main agaya tha. Munni; kaho na... kaise? Raju; paathar. Baablu; nahi bhot khatra hai. Paakhi; par. Baablu ne rohka saab ko aur phirse apne jaibein dehk bheta. Baablu ne di saab ko muskurahath. Aur lagaya phatake ko aag aur pheka in dono aashiqon ke bheej main. 💣💥. Chakor to daar ke mare Suraj par char gayi.

Suraj n Chakor were still lost 😊. Baabu checked hus pockets n found a small firecracker. Paakhi; How will u light it up. Munni; I don't have a lighter. Raju; just wait let me tell u how. The three made a face. Paakhi; some1 else... no uff ok. Raju got angry. Munni; now tell us how???. Raju; stone. Baablu; no it's too dangerous. Paakhi; but. Baablu stopped then all he re-checked his pockets. He smiled n took out a lighter. Baablu light up the firecracker n throw it inbetween the lovers 💣💥. Chakor got scared n jumped on Suraj..
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Scene 6

Baache haas bhetain aur Suraj ka ghussa chara. Suraj unhe bhoot hi ghusse main dehkraha tha lehkin uska ghussa dheere dheere gaya unki haasi muskurahat main jo jo masoomijat aur khushi thi. Suraj ko to apne aap par hi ghussa aagaya. Yeh to woh baache hain jinka baachpan to Bandhua giri main phasi huwi hai. Woh koun hota hai inki haasi ko rohkne main. Suraj ke chehre main bhi aayi muskurahat.

The kids were laughing they couldn't hold it back. Suraj was angry n was raising. He looked at them very angry he wanted to shout but he saw them laughing n the smiles on their faces made his anger vanish. Suraj was angry of his thinking n behaviour how can he be angry on those innocent kids who were living in a world of slavery.
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Last scene 😊

Chakor abhi bhi Suraj ki bahon main thi. Suraj 😢 khatam hogaye? Khatra talgaya yeh kisne phaika...?. Suraj; Chakor kuch nahi bas baachon ne... Chakor; baachon ne 😤 main nahi baat karongi unke saath. Baablu; kiya yeh kyun? Chakor; kaathi 😝. Suraj; par main to baathi hoon inke saath aur tum to meri doost ho doost ke khatir maaf kardo 😊? Chakor; theek hai maaf kiya. Paakhi; Di aab to utro Suraj bhai kab tak uthayenge. Suraj; jab tak humari doost yeh jhati hai tab rak. Chakor muskurah behti aur uthar bhi gayi sharma ke.

Chakor was still in Suraj arms. Suraj is it over😢. Has the danger gone who throw that? Suraj; Chakor it's nothung the kids were... Chakor; kids 😤. I won't talk to them anymore. Baablu; what y. Chakor; kathi means broken friendship. Suraj; but I'm not. Im still their friend n u r my friend. Won't u forgive them for me in sake of our friendship 😊?. Chakor; ok fine just for u. Paakhi; Sis now come down how long should he carry u? Suraj; as long as she wants me to. She is my friend. Chakor smiled she get down n blushed shyly....

Hope its ok 😊 I know it's short but the translation...