Soooo i have been working on the new billdip book and I wanted to ask your guys opinions
First you should probably know what it's about so I'll give you the story's description
"Bill invokes the ancient power so that he may return, but what he didn't expect was to re-emerge in a new form.
Now stuck as a human Bill must find a way to blend in, and not cause trouble.
And with the mystery twins arriving back in town, Bill finds himself experiencing these strange new emotions, can he find away to get forgiveness and maybe earn the affection of a certain pine tree."
Now my question is would you guys rather the story start out with bill first reforming and awkwardly getting used to being human or skip through to were the twins are back and the action is beginning?
If you want it to start when he reforms comment- Nightmare
If you want it to start with the twins in town and the action is beginning comment- Daydreamv
Thank you :3
{edit: hey guys, I'm here to say I made the new billdip book. It will be better than this one for several reasons.
1) I have developed my writing skills much more
2) I have a friend helping me write and edit the story
Any way, Hope you guys enjoy it! Thanks for reading}
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