"great!"Cheyenne clapped
"well what are we waiting for? Lets go!" Devvy said
We all walked through the hinterlands for what seemed like five hours only to be greeted by about seven colorful doors.
Each one had a different image on the bumpy surface of the tree.
"which one did your dad go in, Susan?" Devvy asked
"um" I looked around "that one " I pointed to the Christmas tree
Cheyenne opened the door. All of a sudden snowflakes swirled around us, pulling us into the tree
"CLOSE THE DOOR!" I yelled
"I CAN'T IT'S TO FAR AWAY!" Devvy yelled back
Before I could say anything else we got completely sucked into the tree.
We all landed on a deep snow bank.
"wow.." we all said looking at the colorful town.
"we should go ask Santa if he can make it snow" I said
"you mean sandy claws" Cheyenne corrected me
We sneaked I've to santa's work shop where I knocked on the door
"he's not here" Devvy said pointing at the note under my fist
"oh" I said reading the note
'to whom ever it concerns
I am sorry that I'm not able to talk to you right now. I will be back in about 3 days. Please leave your message on the paper beside this one.
Sorry for the trouble
-Santa clause'
I Wrote on the paper next to it
'dear Santa, I have come all the way from Halloween town to ask you if you could make it snow. It would mean a lot.
Thanks
-Susan Skellington'
"so do we go now then?" Cheyenne asked
"I guess"
We wandered through evergreens trying to find where the Halloween door was. When we found it, we jumped through.
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Hope you guys like this chapter!
-amber
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