A story by fateex
I like the story line, pretty impressive.
Though I think the writer needs to do a lot of work on the story. I don't mean the grammar and all as the writer clearly stated that the story is in the first draft. (That doesn't mean that the grammar is flawless, but I'm not mentioning them.)
Though I think some work is needed to be done on the feels? Or expressiveness or how the story connects with the reader, even though the storyline is awesome, I didn't feel connected to the proto. Maybe you should work on your writing a bit?
But overall, I liked the storyline 😊
Rating: 3.75
Hope you aren't disappointed! 😊
Sorry for the late review! I thought I'd already published this! Sorry!
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