Red Lines

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The report you have written
Is basically fine
The words are yours
But the ideas are mine.

I've covered it liberally
With red ink
Please rewrite
But don't rethink.

I've altered all your capital letters
Crossed out all the "howsoevers"
It's punchy now
All bullet points
You can rewrite again
If it disappoints.

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