hey guy so my first poem is up! comment and tell me if I suck or should write more! :)
*Their Eyes
Blue eyes like the ocean
Blue eyes like the sky
Sparkling wonders
As you pass by
Green eyes like the rass
Green eyes like the leaves
Intriguing depths
Ignore the screams
Brown eyes like the bark
Brown eyes like the mud
Endless disks
Change like a bud
Grey eyes like the smoke
Grey eyes like the storm
Swirling pools
That are deep and warm
Their eyes, different but the same
Their eyes; story tellers with a role
If you look
They'll show their soul
Soooooo................................. How was it? This is probably my favorite poem I've ever written. But howabout you? Comment! By the way I'm supposed to tell ya'll about my two monster writer buddies and their stories. If you like my fantasy stories, then you'll like theirs. Check out orangeluvr for a story about demons and mkzzymegs for one about a girl with an odd disease and a special power... they're both great!!! :) And for info on my other two books, one's on hold, the other is being waited on to have a goal accomplished.
<3 Sam
BẠN ĐANG ĐỌC
Darkness
Thơ CaI've always had poems coming to my head at the most random of times, so I just decided to write them down and see what my fellow Wattpadians think :)
