The Savior of CHS: Revisioned

Introduction before we get started

OBX: Hello! So you're probably wondering why I'm redoing a My Little Pony story that has already been written... (in a whisper) Because I caaaaaaaaaaaaan.

Anyways, I'm really excited that the authors of the original story have allowed me to make a revision of one of the most popular stories on Wattpad! I've have been doing this as a personal project for a while now mostly to help with my writing. I've been a huge fan of My Little Pony since 2017 and was so surprised of how good the story, characters, music, and even some of the fanfiction were. I found Savior of CHS from discovering TheNintegaGuy's Hero of Equestria story. I liked how Jordanwolfboy, Shadowlight, and TheNintegaGuy wrote this story by adding elements from very popular memes, references, and even a awesome Sonic soundtrack. Since I've started as a fanfic writer, I've always loved adding more depth to the characters so that they are more appreciated. And that's what I'm doing with this story. I'm going to keep it the same, but make it different at the same time.

Let me show you what I mean:

In the original story, the main character has always been (Y/N) but I don't want to make this just a reader insert story. I've learned that Jordanwolfboy's (Y/N) character has an actual design and is named Stargazer. So I've decided to stick with that. 

The reason I'm doing this is because that I want this to feel like the main character actually exists in the MLP universe and and make the story feel like that it could be made into an actual show for Equestria Girls. In addition I am going to make the story feel as close to the show as possible while keeping the messages and themes from Jordanwolfboy's vision. I will also be changing a few characters in the story but still keeping their lines. 

During the story, at times I will change certain events only to make them less dark than usual but more importantly, in my revision I am going to have Shadowlight's character Shadow Moonlight get the real happy ending that he deserves.

I will also be adding in additional stories and moments from the Equestria Girls comics and shorts (not the choose-your-ending shorts because that will make me go into a downward spiral on which one would perfectly fit the canon) to add more depth and also some fun ideas for an original chapter. 

I am also going to add new songs to the roster mostly from the bands Owl City and Yellowcard. (Owl City because I've been wanting this to happen since I first got into My Little Pony)

The harem from the original story will remain the same as: 

Sunset Shimmer

Twilight Sparkle (Sci-Twi)

Applejack 

Rarity

Rainbow Dash

Pinkie Pie 

Fluttershy

Trixie Lunamoon

Gloriosa Daisy

The only additional person that I am adding to the harem is Wallflower Blush since in a way I kinda relate to her.

For my most important addition...

(Incoming Spoiler) 

I am also going to have Stargazer confess fully to his harem at the near end of the story to make their bonds mean something truly special. 

My main goal for this story is to stay true to the characters and give them more depth. Now remember, this story belongs to Jordanwolfboy3497, Shadowlight2784, and TheNintegaGuy. So go and follow them on Wattpad because without them creating this amazing story, I wouldn't be here. 

So go support the authors and enjoy my revision of The Savior of CHS! 

P.S. Poster and description will come soon once I figure out what to use.