ok so I was told by a person on wattpad that this storie does not make sense and that I miss and also my chapter are to short spell to many words and if i do im sorry this was my first story so i dont know should i keep writing and im sorry my chapter are short I run of things to say sometimes.
Guys be honest i dont really like this story i was 11 when i wrote it so but all that matters is if you guys like it. <3