Hey everyone ,
I thought about this for a very long time and I have come to the conclusion that I will recreate this story .
It was my first time writing something and I have learned a lot.
I won't change anything specific about the plot but when I further planned the story line I realized that there are many holes that I can't fill afterwards what will ruin the future events and the story in general .
My issue was that I felt like I haven't shown you the characters enough . It was all in rush , or at least I felt like it was . I want you to know them well so that the big events will be more enjoyable and relatable .
On top of that, I was very stressed with my exams and I couldn't really make the chapters as good as I wanted them to be and it bothers me so much now . There were many mistakes . I already corrected some of them but it is just not how I want it to be and that makes it less fun .
It will be a lot better because now I have a laptop I can work with ( yes , I used my phone before 💀) and a lot more time to invest in.
I will watch the movie again and read more of the books so that I can describe things better and make reading my book more exciting .
I am very sorry for letting you wait but it will be worth it . I haven't revealed any of the bigger events so don't you guys worry, there is still a looooot coming . I will soon be back with something better . <3
Love you all , xoxo
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