Return to the reef

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Dory: I remember... them! My mom, my dad! I have parents! They don't know where I am. Let's go!

Marlin: Dory...

Marlin then grabs her by the tail and pulls her back to the drop off

Marlin: No, no! This is crazy. Where exactly are you trying to go?

Dory: To the, to the... gym of the, of... baltic?

Nemo: The Jewel of Morro Bay, California.

Dory: Yes!

Marlin: No, Dory, Morro Bay is all the way across the ocean.

Dory: Then we better get going!

Marlin: How come every time we're on the edge of this reef, one of us is trying to leave? For once can't we just enjoy the view?

Dory: How can you be talking about the view when I remember my family.

Marlin: No! No! We've done enough ocean travels. That part of our lives is over. The reason you travel in the first place is so that you don't have to travel ever again!

Dory: Yeah, but I want to...

Marlin: Dory, look...

Dory: Please. All I know is that I miss them. I really, really miss them. I didn't know what that felt like. Do you know what that feels like?

Marlin looks to Nemo who looks back to them

Marlin: Yes, I know what that feels like.

Dory: I don't want to forget this. Somewhere out there is my family.

Dory: (cont'd) Please, Marlin, I can't find them on my own

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Dory: (cont'd) Please, Marlin, I can't find them on my own. I'll forget. Please help me find my family.

Gill: if you need our help. Then we'll do our best to deliver it. You heard it gang!

Tank gang: Find Dory's Family! Ooh ha ha!

Moxxie: ooh ha- the crumbs does tha-

Millie: don't worry. Marlin will surely help us get across the ocean from Australia to California. Right?

Marlin: No...

The gang look to him in sorrow

Marlin: (inhales) but I know a guy

The gang gasp in delight as some of them knew exactly who he was referring to
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The gang gasp in delight as some of them knew exactly who he was referring to _______

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Crush: Whoo-hoo! Righteous, righteous, righteous!

Soon, wit the help of the sea turtles, Marlin, dory, Nemo, Moxxie, Millie, Bridget, Gill, deb, bubbles, gurgle, peach, bloat and Jacque were on their way to Morro Bay California to look for Dory's parents
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Authors note

Kickass cliffhanger. I know

I was originally gonna end the act with dory remembering her parents at the migration or the gang smiling when Marlin said he knew a guy to help. But I went with this cause it would be more awesome

Now, the tank gang were originally going to be part of the finding dory storyline but were cut out because that was focusing more on Marlin than dory, and they were cut out until the post credit scene. So I decided to bring them here to bring that idea back. And I may have a few ideas on how they could help

Now where's where I stop for the day and start work tomorrow. Whatever thoughts and opinions are on what I started so far I'd love to hear them

In the comments down below

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