Part 9

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Recap:- Suman maa saw Shiva coming out from room. She gets shocked.
Suman maa-"SHIVAAA, Kal Tu raavi ke saath uske kamre mein soya tha? 😱"- she asked in shock.

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Shiva came out of his half sleep mode and gets conscious. Everyone in aangan become shocked.
Shiva looked at Gautam. Gautam was looking here and there. Dhara understood that gautam sent shiva to room.
Shiva-"Maa vo vo... , vo main, meri kamar me dard ho gya tha na aangan me sote sote. Isliye. Raat me bss raavi jagi hui thi to main uske kamre mein so gya"- he somehow made an excuse.
Krish:- "Main to roz aangan mein hi sota hoon. Meri kamar mein to kabhi dard nhi hua".
Everyone:- "Tu phir bola".
Suman maa:- "Agar tujhe aangan mein sone mein pareshaani hai to kal se tu mere kamre mein soyega. Samjha"- she said firmly.
Shiva-"Ji maa".
Everyone was going back to their work but suddenly Suman maa said:- " Shiva ruk".- she shouted.
Everyone stopped.
Shiva looked at maa.
Suman maa:- "Tu Or raavi ek bistar par to nhi soye the na? "- she asked in suspiciously.
Shiva and raavi looked at each other and remembered the moment of night.
Shiva:- " Vo, nhi maa"- he said looking at Suman maa.
Suman maa:- "Tab theek hai. Chalo ab naashta laago. Bahut bhook lagi hai"- she said.
Everyone sat for breakfast. Suman maa asked for water. Raavi took the glass of water. She was going to give water to Suman maa. But suddenly she gets unbalanced and water fell on Suman maa.
Suman maa gets all wet. She looked at raavi in anger. Everyone got up seeing this.
Raavi:- "Sor, sorry kaaki. Vo mujhse galati se gir gaya. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye"- she said looking down.
Suman maa:- " Maaf kar doon tujhe? Kis kis baat ki maafi mangegi tu haan? Jabse iss ghar mein aayi hai jeena haraam kar ke rakha hai. Arey chali kyu nhi jaati tu yaha se"- she said in anger.
Raavi didn't say anything. Her eyes were wet. Shiva looked at raavi and seeing tears in her eyes, he shut his eyes.
Gautam:- "Maa ye tu kya keh reh rahi hai. Baat hui thi na hamaari. Tune kaha tha ki tu raavi se kuchh ulta sidha nhi kahegi".
Suman maa:-"Bss gaumbi. Maine jo kaha tha vo kiya. Uss din maine iss markundi gaaye se kuchh nhi kaha. Par ab aur nhi. Ye meri chhaati pe moong dalti rahe. Or main chup chaap dekhti rahu? Bilkul nhi".
Shiva couldn't bear all the insult raavi was getting. He made a fist of his hand and shut his eyes to control his anger.
Suman maa:- "Tu nikal yaha se. "- she said while taking raavi's hand and was going towards the door.
Dhara:- " Pan maa"- she tried to stop Suman maa.
Everyone was trying to stop Suman maa. But Suman maa was not listening anyone. She was taking raavi out of house. Suddenly raavi and Suman both stopped as raavi felt someone held her another hand. Both Suman maa and raavi turned to see who was the person.
He was Shiva.
Everyone gets shocked including Suman maa and raavi.
Shiva:- "Maa haath chhod raavi ka. Use dard ho rha hai"- he said straightly looking at Suman maa.
Suman gets shocked.
Suman maa:- "Shiva ye tu kya keh reh raha hai. Iss ladki ka iss ghar se chale jaana hi sabke liye sahi hai"- she said
Shiva took a long breath and said:-
Shiva:-"Maa. Haath chhod raavi ka. Vo kahi nhi jaayegi".- he said.
Suman maa:-" Shiva tu iss do kaudi ki ladki ke liye apni maa ki baat kaat rha hai".
Shiva:-"Maa tu raavi ke baare mein aise baat nhi kar skti".
Suman maa:-"Shiva bss bahot ho gaya. Maine ek baar jo faisla kar liya vo kar liya. Ye ladki iss ghar mein nhi reh skti. Or mujhe, Suman pandya ko koi nhi rok skta".
Shiva:-"Thik hai maa. Nhi rokunga tujhe. Pan agar raavi iss ghar se gayi to main bhi jaaunga uske saath "-he said looking at raavi.
Hearing this, Suman, raavi and everyone gets shocked.
Dhara:- " Shiva ye tu kya keh raha hai".
Shiva:-"Bhabhi abhi main maa se baat kar raha hoon. Or main nhi chaahata ki koi bhi beech mein bole".
Suman maa:-"Shiva tu iss markundi gaaye ke liye apni maa ko chhodne ke liye tayaar hai. Apni maa ko, jisne tujhe janam diya hai. 9 mahine apni kokh mein rakha hai"- she said with tears in her eyes.
Shiva sat down in front of Suman maa. He took her hand in his hand.
Shiva:-"Main bss wahi kar raha hoon jo sahi hai. Tune hi sikhaya hai na ki kabhi kisi ladki ki bezzati na hi karni chahiye or na hi hote hue dekhna chaahiye. To tu hi bata main uss ladki ki bezzati kaise bardasht kar loon jisse main py... Matlb main raavi ki bezzati kaise dekhoon".- he said trying to make Suman maa understand.
Suman maa:-"Pan Shiva ye ladki sahi nhi hai. Mana ki isne apni begunaahi ka saboot de diya hai. Par mandir mein isne jo tujhe sabke saamne thappad mara tha uska kya? Aise koi bhi aake mere Shiva par haanth nhi utha skta:- she said while cupping shiva's face.
Shiva took Suman maa's hand and said:-"Maa, tu bhi jaanti hai ki raavi ne mujhe thappad kyu maara tha. Uski jagah koi bhi ladki hoti to yahi karti na. Phir raavi ne kya galat kiya. Or agar phir bhi tujhe lagta hai ki raavi ne galati ki hai or use saza milni chaahiye to mujhe bhi saza de. Kyuki maine bhi koi kam galatiyaan nhi ki hai"- he said.
Suman maa had no answer to give now.
Raavi looked at Shiva in admiration and shock.
Everyone felt proud on Shiva.
Rishta:- "Dev kuchh sikho tum Shiva se. Dekho usne raavi ke liye kaise stand liya. Or ek tum ho😏"- she said to dev
Dev:-"Rishta tumhe har jagah apni life ko compare karna jaruri hai".
Rishta:-"😏😏".
Shiva got up.
Shiva:-" Maa ab tu faisla kar le ki tu raavi ko ab bhi iss ghar se baahar karna chahti hai? Kyuki agar vo gyi to main bhi jaaunga"- he said.
Suman had no answer so she went to her without saying anything.
Gaumbi hugged Shiva.
Gaumbi:-"Achha laga tune raavi ke liye stand liya. Mujhe tujhse yahi ummed thi".- he said.
Dhara also put her hand on shiva's head as an indication of her happiness.
Rashita:- "Waoo, Shiva. Hats off to you. Kya kamaal kiya tumne. Maa ke saamne itna kuchh bol diya. Shaabash. "- she said with utmost happiness and excitement.
Shiva looked at raavi who was already looking at him.
Everyone saw that both were looking at each other.
Dhara:- " Ab hume inhe akela chhod dena chaahiye ".
Everyone went to their respective room.
Now only Shiva and raavi was in aangan.
Shiva came forward.
He wipes raavi's tears. Raavi was still looking at him.
Raavi came back to reality. She went to kitchen without saying anything. Shiva was looking at her going.
Shiva:-" Jaanta hoon mujhe maaf karna aasan nhi hai tere liye. Aaj tak jo bhi kiya maine tere sath uske baad to bilkul bhi nhi. Pan main wada karta hoon raavi. Ek ek kar ke apni saari galatiyaan theek karunga. Or tujhse maafi bhi maangunga".- he said looking at kitchen.
Shiva went to kitchen. Raavi was cooking something.
Shiva wanted to talk to raavi. Raavi turned and looked at Shiva.
Shiva:-"Vo mujhe paani chahiye tha"- he said in order to talk to her.
Raavi silently went to fridge and gave him water and went to her cooking work.
Shiva:- "Ye kuchh bol kyu nhi rahi".- he said in low voice.
He drank the water. But he was still in the kitchen.
Raavi turned to take salt. She looked at Shiva in confusion of why he is still here.
Shiva:-" Vo kaju. Mujhe kaju khaane ka man ho raha hai"- he made an excuse to remain near her and trying to initiate a conversation.
Raavi again silently took the kaju in a bowl and gave to Shiva. She started cooking again.
He started eating kaju and looking at her trying to understand why she is so silent.
Raavi was done with her cooking and was going out from kitchen but Shiva held her hand.

THE END

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