Hey guys, I am back with another part of "shiva ki raavi".
Read, enjoy and do let me know your views about this part in comment section. 😇
Shivi reached in front of pandya house. Shiva put raavi down. Raavi saw the opportunity and tries to escape but shiva hold her hand. She tries to free herself.
Shiva took out the handcuffs from his pocket and locked his and her one hand together with handcuffs.
Raavi looked at the handcuffs in shock and then looked at him with same expression.
Raavi-"Tu yeh... "
Shiva cut her words in between and said,
Shiva-"Pta tha mujhe, tu uss maami ke ghar jaane ka liye uchhalna shuru kar degi. Isliye pehle se hi saara intazaam kar liya tha. Hoon na main smart? - he said with a smirk.
Raavi-"Shiva abhi ke abhi khol mujhe. Main kya koi mujrim hoon. Jo tune mujhe aise hathkadi lga di hai".- she said while trying to free herself.
He went close to her.
Shiva-"Mujrim to hai tu. Chori kiya hai tune".- he said being so close to her.
Raavi became confused.
Raavi-"Kya bol rha hai tu. Kya churaya hai maine? "- she said looking at him then looked down in order to unlock handcuffs.
Shiva hold her chin to lift her face up and made her look at him.
Shiva-"Mera dil".- he said looking at her.
Both kept looking at each other for few minutes. Then raavi came back to reality.
She immediately removed his hand form her chin.
Raavi-"Dur hatt mujhse. Or tu ye filmy line kabse marne laga? Ye pagalpan band kar shiva. Kuchh nhi hone wala isse."- she said while looking at him.
Meanwhile shiva rang the door bell.
Shiva - "Ha sahi kaha tune. Main ye filmy baaton pe vishwaas nhi karta tha. Par kya kre? Pyar insaan ko badal deta hai. Or pagal to tune mujhe kar hi diya hai".- he said while looking at her lovingly and putting her one strand of hair behind her ear.
Raavi-" Shiva tu... "- she said angrily but stopped in midway as dhara opened the door.
Dhara saw raavi and immediately hugged her.
Then three of them come in house.
Shiva-"Bhabhi kya socha hai aapne? Kaise rokoge iss chipkali ko yahan".- he asked dhara in low voice.
Dhara-"Maine to ek plan banaaya tha shiva. Par goumbi ko pta chal gya. Or unhone mujhe rok diya. Unhone kaha ki ab jo krna hai vo krenge. Vo gusse mein the to main kuchh keh hi nhi paayi. Pta nhi vo kya krne waale hai".- she said shiva in low voice.
Then Goumbi, suman maa and other family members came in aangan.
Goumbi went to raavi.
Goumbi-"Raavi main jaanta hoon ki tu yahan nhi rehna chahti. Ab to tera or shiva ka talaak bhi ho gaya hai. Kanooni roop se tera iss ghar se koi rishta nhi hai. Par tujhe iss ghar ko apna kehne ke liye kisi kaanoon ki jarurat hai kya? Ye tera ghar hai raavi. Hum sab tere hai. Tu hamaari bachhi hai. Jaanta hoon naaraaz hai tu shiva se. Par hum sab se bhi naaraaz hai kya. Humari khaatir ruk jaa raavi. Shiva ko apni galati sudhaarne ka ek mouka to de. Tune hi kaha tha na ki tu pyar krti hai shiva se. To kya apne pyar ko ek mauka bhi nhi degi?"
Raavi though wanted to stay. She wanted shiva to take her back with realisation of his mistake. But at this moment, her all pain and grief which she was holding for so long, overpowered her.
Raavi-"Mauka hi to diya hai goumbi aaj tak. Har baar apne rishte ko bachane ki koshish ki hai. Jab pyar nhi karti thi tab bhi. Par ye koshish maine shiva ki taraf se kabhi nhi dekhi. To kaise bharosa karoon iss par. Kal ko agar phir se kuchh hua or phir se isne mujhe chhor diya to?"- she said with tears in her eyes.
Shiva looked down with guilt.
Suman maa saw shiva and as a mother she can't see shiva like this.
Suman maa - "Ae markundi gaaye. Tu to aise bol rhi hai jaise tune kabhi mere shiva ko galat samjha hi nhi. Jab vo tamatar seth ne tum dono ko kidnap kiya tha to tune bhi to mere bachhe ko galat samjha tha. Tune socha ki vo tujhe chhod kar chala gya tha. To fir tu sirf use dosh kyu de rhi hai. Agar mere bete ne tujhe galat samjha, to tu bhi koi dudh ki dhuli nhi hai"- he said defending shiva.
Raavi-"Maine jaanti hoon kaki ki maine shiva ko uss waqt galat samjha tha. Main maanti hoon ki waha main galat thi. Par phir bhi fark hai. Mujhe ispe vishwaash karne ke liye kisi saboot ki jarurt nhi padi. Isne ek baar kaha ki ye mujhe chhod kar nhi gaya tha or maine bina koi sawal kiye iski baat maan li thi. Kyuki mera dil jaanta tha ki shiva mujhe chhod nhi skta. Maine ise saboot or sawaalon ke katghare mein khada nhi kiya tha, jaise isne mujhe kiya. Maine kabhi bhi rishta todne ki baat nhi ki. Jabki main to uss waqt ise pasand bhi nhi karti thi. Maine kabhi ise apni zindagi se jaane ko nhi kaha. Kaki maine kabhi hamaare rishte mein give up nhi kiya".- she said while tears were continuously flowing from her eyes.
Shiva looked at her. He saw tears in her eyes and he felt like someone stabbed his heart with a knife. He closed her eyes and looked at other side as he was not able to see his chipkali in pain.
Goumbi-"Bss raavi, rote nhi hai".- he said wiping her tears. He continued- "Main jaanta hoon ki tune puri koshish ki thi iss rishte ko banaaye rakhne ki. Par raavi abhi bhi tera or shiva ka rishta toota nhi hai. Ab bhi ek rishta juda hua hai. Vo rishta jo koi nhi tod skta. Tum dono bhi nhi. Or vo hai pyar ka rishta. Raavi ek aakhri baar iss rishte ko mauka de de. Pehli baar tujhse kuchh maang rha hoon. Apne bade bhai ki ek baat bhi nhi maanegi? Aur iss baar main tujhse wada karta hoon, shiva tujhse maafi bhi maangega or tujhe vo pyar bhi dega jiski Tu haqdaar hai. Or baaki ghar mein bhi koi tujhse ulti baat nhi karega".- he said looking at Suman maa.
(NOTE:- GOUMBI NE SUMAN SE PEHLE HI BAAT KAR LI HAI. KI VO RAAVI SE KUCHH NHI KAHENGI)
Raavi agreed.
Raavi-"Thik hai goumbi. Aap keh rhe ho to theek hai. Par iska matlb ye nhi hai ki maine shiva ko maaf kar diya hai "- she said looking at shiva who was looking at her with hurt eyes.
Everyone agreed.
She took one step towards her room but stopped by a sudden force.
She turns back and saw that handcuffs stopped her.
Everyone looked at handcuffs shockingly.
Goumbi-"Raavi shiva, ye hathkadi? Shiva tune kiya ye? "- he asked suspiciously.
Shiva-" Vo goumbi..., main khol deta hoon".- he said taking out the keys.
Tears were in his eyes but was not coming out.
He looked down in order to unlock the handcuffs.
Tears came out from his eyes as he looked down. Before his tears touch the ground, raavi forwarded her hand and catch the tear drop in her palm.
Shiva didn't saw it as he was busy in unlocking the handcuffs.
She looked at her palm and make a fist of it.
Raavi-"Tere aansu bahot keemti hai shiva. Inhe aise behne nhi de skti main. Tere aansu tujhse jyda dard mujhe dete hain. Tu mujhse maafi jab maangega tab maangega, par main aaj ke baad teri aankhon mein aansu nahi aane dungi. Ye teri chipkali ka wada hai apne bhoothnath se. -"she said it in mind.
Shiva unlocked the handcuffs.
Raavi went to her room.
Goumbi pat shiva's shoulder and gave him a expression like everything will be fine.
Everyone went back to their respective room.
Shiva was still in aangan. He kept looking at his room.
THE END
So this is the end of this part. Sorry for the long dialogues. But I really wanted to keep my perspective about the whole kand. Also sorry if anyone didn't agree with me.
I really want shiva to believe raavi without any proof in show. Anybody can trust a person if he or she proves it. Trust is when there is no proof still you know he or she is not wrong.
I feel both shiva and raavi's pain. And I want mutual respect in their relationship. Also I want to see shiva's effort in the relationship.
Also, you people tell me what you think, whatever raavi said was right or not???
@sapnabishnoi I tried to excute your suggestion of giving focus to goumbi instead to dhara. Hope you liked it.
Love from Ananya
