25/12/21
Hey guys, I have decided that I'm going to re read the book and make explicit changes.As this was my first book some of it is cringeyyy.
I always used 'as' and put dialogue after every speech. 'Spoke' 'replied' AHHH it pains me to read!!
I don't even know what I was thinking, I'd like to say my new book is better but we never know?
I apologise if any of it seemed wrong or uncomfortable for you, as it was my first book it wasn't my best and I know now that some of what I have written hasn't pleased yous.I will take your feedback into consideration for my books in the future!
Thanks you for reading it if you have!!
Don't forget to leave feedback, I'm all for criticism!! ———->
Once Again I'm sorry for how cringey some of it is and I hope yous still enjoyed it!
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