I would just like to say to everyone. That this story is really cringe and I don't like it. But I've tried to take it down but some people really enjoy it.
Maddox is made to be annoyed and obnoxious.
A lot of people couldn't stand the thought of dating someone who had sex with their siblings. I would like clarify that after Bloom expressed a distaste for it himself so many times. Maddox actually stopped messing with him all together.
At first Maddox just really enjoyed pestering him and being gross. A lot of the times Maddox said obscene things was just because he enjoyed how uncomfortable it made Bloom.
I want to one day rewrite the story and do them more justice because this story was written in 2018. I was 17 and wanted to write a sex scene and it came out gross. I don't like sex scenes that much in writing or when reading.
There are lots of plot holes in the story and bad points all together.
So when people say they hate the story in the comments it really don't bug me that much. Because everything they don't like I don't like either.
But for those who do it enjoy it thank you.
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Teen FictionBloomer has never been able to be around people long, he's nervous and shy, and they annoy him and most anyone who towers over him, which is near everyone intimidates him. So when his brother brings home a new friend who's dead set on ruining his li...
