I'm not sure if gorgeouser is a word, but that doesn't matter. This was amazing. You could use a little bit more description, but otherwise, good work.
Lols! LOVE THE COVER. tHIS IS HILARIOUS! :ddd i LOVE THE PLOTS AND UR CHARACTERS ARE FUNNNNNNYY! *vooted* i CAN SEE THAT U REALLY HAVE POTENTIAL HERE.
This is good, It's a good length too, most stories are short. Be careful not to have too much dialogue so that it gets in way of the details.
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