Just Three Little Words[EDITING]

27 Part Story 18.1K Reads 191 Votes
jellystar3409 By jellystar3409 Updated 2 years ago
Christian Anderson and Jocelyn Rhoads, two people that come from the same kind of seductive nature.
They realized that they had something special, but they happened to be very stubborn.
How far are they going to go to get the other to say it first? The "Phrase".
Whose going to be the first to crack?
To say 3 little words. 
"I Love You."
It's a love contest. What's the prize?
Antelucem Antelucem 3 years ago
This is great but you might want to have some variety within your paragraphs. However, I'm intrigued :) and I think that the story's going to be awesome.
Whines8 Whines8 3 years ago
I always love romance humor. It's really fun to read I agree with castiefan though u need to have a little bit better descriptions. Just for the readers benefit :) love the story nonetheless voted
CastielFan CastielFan 3 years ago
I'm not sure if gorgeouser is a word, but that doesn't matter. This was amazing. You could use a little bit more description, but otherwise, good work.
Brokenlessthan3 Brokenlessthan3 3 years ago
Lols! LOVE THE COVER. tHIS IS HILARIOUS! :ddd

i LOVE THE PLOTS AND UR CHARACTERS ARE FUNNNNNNYY! *vooted* i CAN SEE THAT U REALLY HAVE POTENTIAL HERE.
minalovesmaine minalovesmaine 3 years ago
This a great story! I think the cover you chose was really cute too, btw :) The dialogue was good, just try and not let it overpower the story. Great job, otherwise!
lifelovemusic1312 lifelovemusic1312 3 years ago
This is good, It's a good length too, most stories are short. Be careful not to have too much dialogue so that it gets in way of the details.