sorry it took so long for me to comment but dang! this story has me hooked and i gotta read on+im voting!
Wow, this is very good for your first story. :) I don't recall any errors. I wonder what Dawn knew? And why didn't she tell.
Your author's note is funny lol I like it so far and think that "Alycia" is really hardheaded
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