broken shells (fixing some serious grammar errors)

ch.14 leos pov

        I walked out of my apartment and into the cold. I haven't heard from Tay in over a month. I now that she is safe. I can only hope that she is in the right part of town when I go there. 

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        I go out of the taxi I had hopped in and I can feel the brisk night air nipping at my nose. it was about 10 o' clock at night and pitch black. the only thing I knew is that she had been with Casey at some point. I know that from the text that I got from her that one night. I could tell it wasn't from her and I thought it could be from Casey due the fact that Tay took more time where Casey had grammar errors and was short. All i knew was that I was walking down the street, in a town i haven't been in , in years, and looking for my girlfirend i didn't even know was still alive

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        As I countinued to walk down the street I saw a girl that was dressed in black with chin length hair. she looked  at me as if she reconized me but quickly turned a corner and hid. So i followed her and heard her saying to herself in a low whispher

        " Please don't see me, please don't see me not like this."       

        "Are you okay?" i asked

        "you found me, look Leo i'm not suppost to talk ....... well ......" she said not sure how to word it

        "who are you and how do you know my name?" I asked the girl causing her to role her eyes 

        " It's me you shell for brains." she said  slapping me

        "Wait .... no you can't be .... but .... what ... how ... when?" i stuterd out 

        "Really, really it shocks you i meet you like this the first time remeber." she said

        "Yes i do five years ago i moved to my apartment you were trying to figuer out how to open yours trying all the keys which made me laugh really hard as you turned around and gave me devil eyes." i said making her laugh

        " then you told me that i look made me the most beautiful girl ever and the look made me hotter then we went out." she said ofering her hand and i took it

                                                                        AUTHORS NOTE

        this was kicking my butt! so i offically decied to split it up because it wasso ugg never mind just if i keept writing the same it would be a month before i posted lol. so heres the chapter part two will come shortly hopefully but i just wanted to thank all of you for reading my story feedback is aperciated i don't get alot of it so its nice to hear sometimes. dont worry i wont stop writing  this book its just school, sports, home work, church, and chores that are getting in the way of me being able to type updates. if I EVER TAKE TO LONG TO UPDATE PLEASE POLITLY TELL ME AND GIVE ME A PUSH. Love all of you

taylor covington