broken shells (fixing some serious grammar errors)

Ch.8 taylors pov

I woke up dazed and confused at what had happened to me. my body ached and every time I moved or breathed even it sent a stinging pain through out my whole body. I tried to sit up but it was useless the pain was so unbearable.
"Whoa take it easy, don't move and you'll be just fine." said a man
"Who are you?, Where am I? What happened? What time is it?" I asked barley finding the strength to let my words escape because it hurt so much.
"My name is Casey Jones, your in my apartment, you got beat up really bad by a purple dragon and I saved your life, and what else... oh yeah you've been out for three days." he said
"What! What about my boyfriend did he text me at all?" I asked getting worked up and quickly wishing I hadn't wincing from the pain
"Yeah but don't worry I told him that your safe." he said
"You texted him for me? Wow that's .... umm .....well .... I don't know weather to be mad at you or thank you." I said quietly and letting out a whimper hoping he didn't hear it then closing my eyes tears inside
"Hey shhh! It's going to be okay look I understand that your Paine is a lot to Handel it's okay to cry." he said as tears escaped "look I told your boy friend that you were not going to be home for a while, you were fine, and that you had no idea when you'll be back." he finished rubbing my head as he lifted it and set it on his lap and I fell asleep.

Donnie's pov
"Donnie guess what!" April yelled coming to my lab
"Oh geez April I almost spilt mutagen, but what." I asked with the same excitement
"I found Casey!" She squealed excited like
" You did where is he?" I asked with the same excitement
"Three blocks from here in the .... oh my gosh!" She said
"What! " I asked running towards her
"He's been in the same place for the las couple of years how did we not see him?" She asked face palming herself really hard
"I don't know but we should go get him." I said with vengeance
"I agree I'm going right now see you later." she said running out the door
"Great," I mumbled "she found Casey and I'm not going to ...... never mind I won't say it." I finished going back
to my work.

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AUTHORS NOTE
Hey so I decide to split this chapter into two parts because I think that it leaves more suspense that way. anyways I've noticed a lot of you are reading my story which is awesome!!!!! But I would like some feed back what do you like dislike stuff like that thanks so much try to write soon!
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